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Reply #150 posted 06/24/09 10:12pm

NastradumasKid

DesireeNevermind said:

NastradumasKid said:




That could work, how about Prince being a drug addicted, nympho, sadomaschist musician who is married to Apollonia, treating her well, then next second beat the shit out of her. Apollonia is also secretly seeing Morris, who's a alcoholic loon wanting to get Prince back for what he did at DisneyWorld a few years back. Lisa and Wendy are secret lovers but doesn't want anyone to find out. Jerome is a stalker and likes to follow Jill all over the place and ends up losing his virginity once he gets her hands on her.

To be continued.....
[Edited 6/24/09 21:47pm]



spit I am soooo digging that



lol Thanks you have anything to add, be my guest.
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Reply #151 posted 06/24/09 11:06pm

NastradumasKid

Part 1- Prince and Apollonia

    Prince- Apollonia? Answer me muthafucker?!

    Apollonia- Shut the fuck up I'm coming!!!

    Prince- Where the hell is my crackpipe?

    Apollonia- sigh I wish you can stop this very bad habit.

    Prince- Giiiiirrrrrl do I look like I give a fuck?! (raises his hand to slap her)

    Apollonia- Please don't hit me. If you love me you wouldn't do it. sad

    Prince- (laughs and grabs her by the neck and pushes her onto the bed, turns her over on her stomach, pulls her skirt off and starts fucking her in the ass and skeets)

    Prince- There. You happy now? Now get my fucking crackpipe!!!
    mad



TBC.
[Edited 6/24/09 23:06pm]
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Reply #152 posted 06/25/09 5:50am

OldFriends4Sal
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NastradumasKid said:

PurpleMedley122 said:


THE BOONDOCKS IS THE BEST SHOW EVER MADE!!!


Oh I see what you mean jazmine. lol Best show ever btw. Anyway, let's stay on subject.



lol laughable

Purple Rain the Crack Addicted Prince is staying on topic?

This stuff is turning into a mockery
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Reply #153 posted 06/25/09 5:59am

MantuaPharoah

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Continued from my previous list...

12. Prince should have cut off his ear in an act of undying love, and sent it to Appollonia, a'la Vincent Van Gogh. She could have received it in a box and opened it on stage just prior to the Sex Shooter performance.

13. Instead of Appollonia 6 getting the gig to be a new act at First Avenue, Billy should have hired Michael Jackson. That would have added some SERIOUS pressure on Prince, after Michael performed Billie Jean or the soon-to-be-released Bad.

14. Morris should have had a day job at Dunkin' Donuts.
The public is squeezin' you kiddo. You'd better kick ass on your next album or else!
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Reply #154 posted 06/25/09 12:20pm

ToraToraDreams

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NastradumasKid said:

L4OATheOriginal said:



perhaps but doesn't it make more sense how the scene fades then he wakes up and viola he has this big ass earing in his ear whofarted



Please tell me you don't find this disturbing.

PRINCE stares at the door a moment,
tears welling in his eyes. His Mother
is motionless, whimpering softly. A
scent of liquor permeates the air.

He moves toward her, reaches out
tentatively...

Suddenly she jumps up, starts pacing
franticaily--

MOTHER
It's nice here. It's a nice
house. Nothing wrong.
(a beat)
It's a good family. Believe
me, I know. Nothing wrong
here.
(a beat)
Your father is okay. He's a
good man. You could learn
somthing.


She catches a glimpse of herself in the
mirror, stops--

MOTHER
My, my! Don't you think I
have a good figure? Your
Father did.

She sits in front of the mirror, studies
her face, her eyes...her breasts--

MOTHER
I was beautiful when your Dad
met me. I was out-a-sight!

She giggles, starts applying makeup--

MOTHER
I looked just like a movie
star. The minute he saw me
singing, I knew just what he
wanted.

She fixes him with a conspiratorial
look, whispers--

MOTHER
He wanted to get into my
panties.

She makes funny, "jazzy" eyes at him,
then stops suddenly, staring. His face,
mouth, eyes...a sudden stirring in her
loins. Her lips part, she moistens them
unconsciously...

She turns from the mirror and stares at
him -- his look connects with her groin.
She rises suddenly, walks slowly toward
the bed, sits facing him--

MOTHER
You look so pretty. Just like
me, honey. You coulda been a
girl.

She outlines the mole on his cheek with
a makeup pencil, then draws one on
herself. She takes her earring off, and
puts it on his ear. They are face to
face -- identical--

MOTHER
So pretty...

She looks at him drunkenly. He tries to
hold it in, but can't. A tear, hot and
hard as a bullet flows down his cheek.
She puts her index finger in front of
his face, moves it back and forth
hypnotically. Suddenly she pulls her
hand away, stretches it to the ceiling
like an escaping bird. He swallows,
tries to smile -- she leans close --



MOTHER
(secretly)
I have to go now, see some
friends. Don't tell your
father, okay?

She gets up, leaves the room--

MOTHER
Bye, skipper...bye.
[Edited 6/24/09 13:36pm]

Yes, its disturbing. That's why I like it! This scene is a trip.
I think that art, and movies are art, aren't always suppose to make you feel good or comfortable. It can be weird and just GROSS, too.
Notice how she pulls that little trick with him at the end like P did to Apollonia? Little things like that make the movie flow better, makes it fit together. And how she gives him the earring just like Prince later does? It offers alot more insight into The Kid. We know he's like his daddy, but this scene shows how he's like his mom two.
And they're both kinda crazy.
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Reply #155 posted 06/25/09 12:23pm

ToraToraDreams

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NastradumasKid said:

Part 1- Prince and Apollonia

    Prince- Apollonia? Answer me muthafucker?!

    Apollonia- Shut the fuck up I'm coming!!!

    Prince- Where the hell is my crackpipe?

    Apollonia- sigh I wish you can stop this very bad habit.

    Prince- Giiiiirrrrrl do I look like I give a fuck?! (raises his hand to slap her)

    Apollonia- Please don't hit me. If you love me you wouldn't do it. sad

    Prince- (laughs and grabs her by the neck and pushes her onto the bed, turns her over on her stomach, pulls her skirt off and starts fucking her in the ass and skeets)

    Prince- There. You happy now? Now get my fucking crackpipe!!!
    mad



TBC.
[Edited 6/24/09 23:06pm]

Why do I see Dave Chapelle dressed as The Kid when I read this? lol lol
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Reply #156 posted 06/25/09 12:24pm

NastradumasKid

ToraToraDreams said:

NastradumasKid said:




Please tell me you don't find this disturbing.

PRINCE stares at the door a moment,
tears welling in his eyes. His Mother
is motionless, whimpering softly. A
scent of liquor permeates the air.

He moves toward her, reaches out
tentatively...

Suddenly she jumps up, starts pacing
franticaily--

MOTHER
It's nice here. It's a nice
house. Nothing wrong.
(a beat)
It's a good family. Believe
me, I know. Nothing wrong
here.
(a beat)
Your father is okay. He's a
good man. You could learn
somthing.


She catches a glimpse of herself in the
mirror, stops--

MOTHER
My, my! Don't you think I
have a good figure? Your
Father did.

She sits in front of the mirror, studies
her face, her eyes...her breasts--

MOTHER
I was beautiful when your Dad
met me. I was out-a-sight!

She giggles, starts applying makeup--

MOTHER
I looked just like a movie
star. The minute he saw me
singing, I knew just what he
wanted.

She fixes him with a conspiratorial
look, whispers--

MOTHER
He wanted to get into my
panties.

She makes funny, "jazzy" eyes at him,
then stops suddenly, staring. His face,
mouth, eyes...a sudden stirring in her
loins. Her lips part, she moistens them
unconsciously...

She turns from the mirror and stares at
him -- his look connects with her groin.
She rises suddenly, walks slowly toward
the bed, sits facing him--

MOTHER
You look so pretty. Just like
me, honey. You coulda been a
girl.

She outlines the mole on his cheek with
a makeup pencil, then draws one on
herself. She takes her earring off, and
puts it on his ear. They are face to
face -- identical--

MOTHER
So pretty...

She looks at him drunkenly. He tries to
hold it in, but can't. A tear, hot and
hard as a bullet flows down his cheek.
She puts her index finger in front of
his face, moves it back and forth
hypnotically. Suddenly she pulls her
hand away, stretches it to the ceiling
like an escaping bird. He swallows,
tries to smile -- she leans close --



MOTHER
(secretly)
I have to go now, see some
friends. Don't tell your
father, okay?

She gets up, leaves the room--

MOTHER
Bye, skipper...bye.
[Edited 6/24/09 13:36pm]

Yes, its disturbing. That's why I like it! This scene is a trip.
I think that art, and movies are art, aren't always suppose to make you feel good or comfortable. It can be weird and just GROSS, too.
Notice how she pulls that little trick with him at the end like P did to Apollonia? Little things like that make the movie flow better, makes it fit together. And how she gives him the earring just like Prince later does? It offers alot more insight into The Kid. We know he's like his daddy, but this scene shows how he's like his mom two.
And they're both kinda crazy.


lol There all fucked up.
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Reply #157 posted 06/25/09 12:36pm

NastradumasKid

ToraToraDreams said:

NastradumasKid said:

Part 1- Prince and Apollonia

    Prince- Apollonia? Answer me muthafucker?!

    Apollonia- Shut the fuck up I'm coming!!!

    Prince- Where the hell is my crackpipe?

    Apollonia- sigh I wish you can stop this very bad habit.

    Prince- Giiiiirrrrrl do I look like I give a fuck?! (raises his hand to slap her)

    Apollonia- Please don't hit me. If you love me you wouldn't do it. sad

    Prince- (laughs and grabs her by the neck and pushes her onto the bed, turns her over on her stomach, pulls her skirt off and starts fucking her in the ass and skeets)

    Prince- There. You happy now? Now get my fucking crackpipe!!!
    mad



TBC.
[Edited 6/24/09 23:06pm]

Why do I see Dave Chapelle dressed as The Kid when I read this? lol lol


Dave Chapelle? lol he's a good candidate for this scene. if you want to add anything to the story, be my guest cool
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Reply #158 posted 07/06/09 5:24pm

PurpleMedley12
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lurking
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Reply #159 posted 07/06/09 5:39pm

DesireeNevermi
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The Kid gets ousted from the Revolution. Billy fires him all together since he's without a band. Morris snags Appollonia and JJ. The Kid ends up 15,000 in debt due to outstanding loans and not paying off his bike. And on top of that he finds out Pa not Pa. In a fit of rage , revenge and pent up sexual frustration he plans to bomb the hell out of First Avenue.

"yeah this will teach them!"




AND YOU BITCH!! I GOT SOMETHING SPECIAL FOR YOUR ASS!!

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Reply #160 posted 07/06/09 5:39pm

NastradumasKid

PurpleMedley122 said:

lurking



falloff

Prince- All of them should die.

evillol
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Reply #161 posted 07/06/09 5:41pm

NastradumasKid

DesireeNevermind said:

The Kid gets ousted from the Revolution. Billy fires him all together since he's without a band. Morris snags Appollonia and JJ. The Kid ends up 15,000 in debt due to outstanding loans and not paying off his bike. And on top of that he finds out Pa not Pa. In a fit of rage , revenge and pent up sexual frustration he plans to bomb the hell out of First Avenue.

"yeah this will teach them!"




AND YOU BITCH!! I GOT SOMETHING SPECIAL FOR YOUR ASS!!




WTF!!!?? falloff OH my God that would be an awesome movie. Who is Prince's daddy then and what did Prince exactly do to Apollonia? Did he go to jail?
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Reply #162 posted 07/06/09 6:29pm

NastradumasKid

Do you have anymore weird stories for this movie? lol lol
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Reply #163 posted 07/06/09 9:07pm

DesireeNevermi
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It was a cool dark night. All was quiet around First Avenue. It had been raining all week, but not tonight. Tonight was as clear as it had ever been.

Billy usually left the club early to have dinner with his wife Kate then nightcaps with his mistress skankonia but this night he stayed late. The Kid called and said he wanted to talk business. Business was all that mattered to Billy these days...

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Reply #164 posted 07/06/09 9:10pm

NastradumasKid





I'm gonna beat that ass tonite bitch!!!!! evil
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Reply #165 posted 07/06/09 9:11pm

DesireeNevermi
nd

The Kid stared at the picture on the wall. His first target. One by one he would make them pay.

"You Billy! Tonight is the night you learn the true meaning of getting Paid! Tonight you will pay tenfold!"

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Reply #166 posted 07/06/09 9:11pm

NastradumasKid

DesireeNevermind said:

It was a cool dark night. All was quiet around First Avenue. It had been raining all week, but not tonight. Tonight was as clear as it had ever been.

Billy usually left the club early to have dinner with his wife Kate then nightcaps with his mistress skankonia but this night he stayed late. The Kid called and said he wanted to talk business. Business was all that mattered to Billy these days...




You have quite an imagination hmmm highfive
[Edited 7/6/09 21:12pm]
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Reply #167 posted 07/06/09 9:15pm

DesireeNevermi
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He made sure he was looking fine times nine. He had his alibi all ready. Tonight he would spend with Apollonia. No one would suspect he was at the club. Tonight he would finger Apple's coochie, get it nice and wet before he laid that purple pipe and put her to sleep like he use to do every night before evil Morris seduced her with tall tales of stardom.

"Of course she will see me" the Kid thought.

"After all I'm looking good, smelling good and I am after all...ME!"


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Reply #168 posted 07/06/09 9:17pm

NastradumasKid

falloff Don't forget oral sex. biggrin
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Reply #169 posted 07/06/09 9:19pm

thedance

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OldFriends4Sale said:

NastradumasKid said:



How about no Apollonia altogether? thumbs up!


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http://d.yimg.com/kq/grou...1/name/n_a

http://d.yimg.com/kq/grou...2/name/n_a

http://d.yimg.com/kq/grou...8/name/n_a


Apollonia. Damn I almost forgot she was that beautiful.... love2love2love2love2love2love2love2love2love2love2love2love2

I heart that scene at the lake, lovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelove

razz wink
[Edited 7/6/09 21:20pm]
Prince 4Ever. heart
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Reply #170 posted 07/06/09 9:24pm

DesireeNevermi
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now that's the kind of shit im talking about. mad but that's alright, im dropping dimes on this muthafucca!
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Reply #171 posted 07/06/09 9:24pm

NastradumasKid

DesireeNevermind said:

He made sure he was looking fine times nine. He had his alibi all ready. Tonight he would spend with Apollonia. No one would suspect he was at the club. Tonight he would finger Apple's coochie, get it nice and wet before he laid that purple pipe in her pussy and mouth and skeeted and put her to sleep like he use to do every night before evil Morris seduced her with tall tales of stardom.

"Of course she will see me" the Kid thought.

"After all I'm looking good, smelling good and I am after all...ME!"





FIXED!!!!! biggrin
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Reply #172 posted 07/06/09 9:25pm

NastradumasKid

DesireeNevermind said:

now that's the kind of shit im talking about. mad but that's alright, im dropping dimes on this muthafucca!




lurking eek What happened? confused
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Reply #173 posted 07/06/09 9:26pm

DesireeNevermi
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NastradumasKid said:

DesireeNevermind said:

It was a cool dark night. All was quiet around First Avenue. It had been raining all week, but not tonight. Tonight was as clear as it had ever been.

Billy usually left the club early to have dinner with his wife Kate then nightcaps with his mistress skankonia but this night he stayed late. The Kid called and said he wanted to talk business. Business was all that mattered to Billy these days...




You have quite an imagination hmmm highfive
[Edited 7/6/09 21:12pm]



tis the writer/actress in me. but dayum you had to go add pussy and mouth and skeeted? falloff and I thought I was the one keepin' it real. lol
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Reply #174 posted 07/06/09 9:28pm

NastradumasKid

DesireeNevermind said:

NastradumasKid said:




You have quite an imagination hmmm highfive
[Edited 7/6/09 21:12pm]



tis the writer/actress in me. but dayum you had to go add pussy and mouth and skeeted? falloff and I thought I was the one keepin' it real. lol



I can't stop laughing, and yes I had to do it, it makes it more messy.
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Reply #175 posted 07/06/09 9:33pm

DesireeNevermi
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I seriously think there should have been a major bar fight in Purple Rain with Prince dragging Apples out for her safety then making out with her under some purple rain then taking it to the barn scene. But then again that's kind of fucked up to have sex in a barn. Animals strike curious poses my ass. They were thinking

"YOU FUCKING HUMANS CANT' SCREW WORTH A DAMN! GET OUTTA MY HOUSE!"
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Reply #176 posted 07/06/09 9:38pm

NastradumasKid

DesireeNevermind said:

I seriously think there should have been a major bar fight in Purple Rain with Prince dragging Apples out for her safety then making out with her under some purple rain then taking it to the barn scene. But then again that's kind of fucked up to have sex in a barn. Animals strike curious poses my ass. They were thinking

"YOU FUCKING HUMANS CANT' SCREW WORTH A DAMN! GET OUTTA MY HOUSE!"


I know right and I bet it stinks there. ill Fight scene in the bar would add more drama and dark spirit nature to it I like that!!!!!

please continue the story!!! biggrin
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Reply #177 posted 07/06/09 9:43pm

NastradumasKid

thedance said:

OldFriends4Sale said:



[NSFW - Apples boobage - Please post link only. Some people access the org from work and there are underager org members as well - luv4u]

http://d.yimg.com/kq/grou...1/name/n_a

http://d.yimg.com/kq/grou...2/name/n_a

http://d.yimg.com/kq/grou...8/name/n_a


Apollonia. Damn I almost forgot she was that beautiful.... love2love2love2love2love2love2love2love2love2love2love2love2

I heart that scene at the lake, lovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovelove

razz wink
[Edited 7/6/09 21:20pm]


Prince- is that what turns you on?
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Reply #178 posted 07/06/09 9:46pm

DesireeNevermi
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The Kid would never forget the night Billy cut him loose. He played his ass off that night but Billy couldn't appreciate it. Billy's words were etched in his mind like stone.

"You're not pulling them in like your use too. You're a failure just like you old man. Yeah I banged your momma but so what...that was like 24-26 years ago!. You better not tell me I'm you daddy. I don't wanna hear no bullshit! As a matter of fact...GET THE FUCK OUT!"


[Edited 7/6/09 21:46pm]
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Reply #179 posted 07/06/09 9:59pm

NastradumasKid

DesireeNevermind said:

The Kid would never forget the night Billy cut him loose. He played his ass off that night but Billy couldn't appreciate it. Billy's words were etched in his mind like stone.

"You're not pulling them in like your use too. You're a failure just like you old man. Yeah I banged your momma but so what...that was like 24-26 years ago!. You better not tell me I'm you daddy. I don't wanna hear no bullshit! As a matter of fact...GET THE FUCK OUT!"


[Edited 7/6/09 21:46pm]


omg this is crazy!
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