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Prince - A Short Story I'm having trouble continuing this short story about Prince that I am working on. It's strictly fantasy of course and not meant to convey any true feelings I have about him.
One morning, after a long evening of munching on rare t-bone steaks and drinking booz with his fellow bandmates, Prince awoke in a Costa Rican hospital and discovered that instead of the nose operation and cheek enhancement he was expecting to recieve, his right leg had actually been amputated. In utter horror, he screems for a nurse, but no one answers. IT's at this momment that he realizes that he's alone in the room--possibly the building. He looks outside his second story window and notices all of the staff and patients running for the shore... [[It's at this point I'm not sure how to finish]] | |
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AsianBomb777 said: I'm having trouble continuing this short story about Prince that I am working on. It's strictly fantasy of course and not meant to convey any true feelings I have about him.
One morning, after a long evening of munching on rare t-bone steaks and drinking booz with his fellow bandmates, Prince awoke in a Costa Rican hospital and discovered that instead of the nose operation and cheek enhancement he was expecting to recieve, his right leg had actually been amputated. In utter horror, he screems for a nurse, but no one answers. IT's at this momment that he realizes that he's alone in the room--possibly the building. He looks outside his second story window and notices all of the staff and patients running for the shore... [[It's at this point I'm not sure how to finish]] ....Continued..... He see's that there is an old man flying a helicopter headed right his way just like something out of the Matrix. yay | |
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AsianBomb777 said: I'm having trouble continuing this short story about Prince that I am working on. It's strictly fantasy of course and not meant to convey any true feelings I have about him.
One morning, after a long evening of munching on rare t-bone steaks and drinking booz with his fellow bandmates, Prince awoke in a Costa Rican hospital and discovered that instead of the nose operation and cheek enhancement he was expecting to recieve, his right leg had actually been amputated. In utter horror, he screems for a nurse, but no one answers. IT's at this momment that he realizes that he's alone in the room--possibly the building. He looks outside his second story window and notices all of the staff and patients running for the shore... [[It's at this point I'm not sure how to finish]] He proceeds to jam one of his canes into the amputated leg and hobbles down to the bottom floor only to find out that the door is locked from the outside..... (Insert something clever here) |
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DarkKnight1 said: AsianBomb777 said: I'm having trouble continuing this short story about Prince that I am working on. It's strictly fantasy of course and not meant to convey any true feelings I have about him.
One morning, after a long evening of munching on rare t-bone steaks and drinking booz with his fellow bandmates, Prince awoke in a Costa Rican hospital and discovered that instead of the nose operation and cheek enhancement he was expecting to recieve, his right leg had actually been amputated. In utter horror, he screems for a nurse, but no one answers. IT's at this momment that he realizes that he's alone in the room--possibly the building. He looks outside his second story window and notices all of the staff and patients running for the shore... [[It's at this point I'm not sure how to finish]] He proceeds to jam one of his canes into the amputated leg and hobbles down to the bottom floor only to find out that the door is locked from the outside..... He screams, suddenly realized he just jammed his own damn cane into his amputated leg, and that he has been sufficiently locked inside of the building. yay | |
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 That's a SAd STORY... Not Funny at all and I feel sorry for people that have such Disabilities... | |
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And then he looks around 2 see Zelaira coming 2wards him... | |
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ThePurplePeopleEater said: And then he looks around 2 see Zelaira coming 2wards him...
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He notices a large 3M yellow sticky pasted to one of the walls. He walks over to it and notices that it smells faintly of Esacada Por Homme. He looks at the message on the yellow sticket and it reads.
"Vanity 6 was my idea Bitch!!"..signed Rick James. It's at that momment that he realizes there's a ticking box inside the room right beside a face in a jar by the door. . [This message was edited Wed Jul 21 19:12:50 2004 by AsianBomb777] | |
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AsianBomb777 said: He notices a large 3M yellow sticky pasted to one of the walls. He walks over to it and notices that it smells faintly of Esacada Por Homme. He looks at the message on the yellow sticket and it reads.
"Vanity 6 was my idea Bitch!!"..signed Rick James. It's at that momment that he realizes there's a ticking box beside his bed.  ...More more..think!
Now's not the time 4 writers block! yay | |
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Crazy....He would make some Serious Horny Sounds If Zel was On his Member with her Mouth ...That's for Damn Sure...He may even Spas and see colors... | |
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MaquisVixen said: AsianBomb777 said: He notices a large 3M yellow sticky pasted to one of the walls. He walks over to it and notices that it smells faintly of Esacada Por Homme. He looks at the message on the yellow sticket and it reads.
"Vanity 6 was my idea Bitch!!"..signed Rick James. It's at that momment that he realizes there's a ticking box beside his bed. ...More more..think!
Now's not the time 4 writers block! The real delima is that we can keep throwing little delimas the the protaganist (Prince), but he really needs a thematic struggle that moves the plot along. I just am not sure what that is?? | |
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Zelaira said: Crazy....He would make some Serious Horny Sounds If Zel was On his Member with her Mouth ...That's for Damn Sure...He may even Spas and see colors...
I like the idea, but this story should be easily made in to a screen play for a movie that isn't more than PG-13 | |
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AsianBomb777 said: He notices a large 3M yellow sticky pasted to one of the walls. He walks over to it and notices that it smells faintly of Esacada Por Homme. He looks at the message on the yellow sticket and it reads.
"Vanity 6 was my idea Bitch!!"..signed Rick James. It's at that momment that he realizes there's a ticking box inside the room right beside a face in a jar by the door. . [This message was edited Wed Jul 21 19:12:50 2004 by AsianBomb777] He slllllooooowwwwwly opens the box. He paused briefly to take a good look at Michael Jacksons face in the jar. Saw the cooresponding jars with his noses then refocused. opened thebox only to find an animated version of Larry Grahams book "a guide to ruining ones established music career" (Insert something clever here) |
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O.K. I gotta tell ya People all this Story...Eileen Murton from Controversy once wrote me a Note telling me I had a CRUSH on PRINCE and it Wasn't Love and I shouldn't get Carried Away over him...I was like That's What U Say! | |
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He claws at the door crooning and screaming "let me out, Yall Mutha F@ckaz let me out!!" kicking at it with his cane leg trying to get someone--anyone's--attention.
Then he notices an inscription on the door written in old elvish. It says , "B4 U pass, U must answer this riddle.: What in the hell is Clorine Bacon Skin? . U have 3 chances." Sweat rolls down his forehead, and as he reaches up to wipe the beads of persperation, he realizes that his wig is missing and without this wig, his mental powers are limited. | |
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Zelaira said: O.K. I gotta tell ya People all this Story...Eileen Murton from Controversy once wrote me a Note telling me I had a CRUSH on PRINCE and it Wasn't Love and I shouldn't get Carried Away over him...I was like That's What U Say!
1-800 gethelp (Insert something clever here) |
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AsianBomb777 said: Zelaira said: Crazy....He would make some Serious Horny Sounds If Zel was On his Member with her Mouth ...That's for Damn Sure...He may even Spas and see colors...
I like the idea, but this story should be easily made in to a screen play for a movie that isn't more than PG-13 How bout just a short sweet sex thing...??? Like Graffitti Bridge?? U don't really see anything but it gives the implications. yay | |
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AsianBomb777 said: He claws at the door crooning and screaming "let me out, Yall Mutha F@ckaz let me out!!" kicking at it with his cane leg trying to get someone--anyone's--attention.
Then he notices an inscription on the door written in old elvish. It says , "B4 U pass, U must answer this riddle.: What in the hell is Clorine Bacon Skin? . U have 3 chances." Sweat rolls down his forehead, and as he reaches up to wipe the beads of persperation, he realizes that his wig is missing and without this wig, his mental powers are limited. He saw a staple gun on the desk. promptly stapling his piece back on his melon reestablishing his powers. 1st guess. Is cloreen bacon skin a swimming pool cleaner used after a swimming session with rosie gaines? (Insert something clever here) |
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DarkKnight1 said: AsianBomb777 said: He claws at the door crooning and screaming "let me out, Yall Mutha F@ckaz let me out!!" kicking at it with his cane leg trying to get someone--anyone's--attention.
Then he notices an inscription on the door written in old elvish. It says , "B4 U pass, U must answer this riddle.: What in the hell is Clorine Bacon Skin? . U have 3 chances." Sweat rolls down his forehead, and as he reaches up to wipe the beads of persperation, he realizes that his wig is missing and without this wig, his mental powers are limited. He saw a staple gun on the desk. promptly stapling his piece back on his melon reestablishing his powers. 1st guess. Is cloreen bacon skin a swimming pool cleaner used after a swimming session with rosie gaines? A loud voice echoes from the door. It's Morris Day's voice but slowed down to half speed. It says, "Nah Nah. Oh Lawd, U got 2 questions left." Prince tries a second guess, "Clorine Bacon Skin" is the real name for the  album following Diamonds and Pearls?
It's at this point that the door offers him two choices for riddles. The seond one is "What is the wingspan of a swallow?" | |
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AsianBomb777 said: DarkKnight1 said: He saw a staple gun on the desk. promptly stapling his piece back on his melon reestablishing his powers. 1st guess. Is cloreen bacon skin a swimming pool cleaner used after a swimming session with rosie gaines? A loud voice echoes from the door. It's Morris Day's voice but slowed down to half speed. It says, "Nah Nah. Oh Lawd, U got 2 questions left." Prince tries a second guess, "Clorine Bacon Skin" is the real name for the album following Diamonds and Pearls?
It's at this point that the door offers him two choices for riddles. The seond one is "What is the wingspan of a swallow?"  yay | |
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Thinking back real hard, Prince realizes from his childhood and summer camp that "Clorine Bacon Skin" was what Morris nicknamed his little man.
"It's about Morris's Bit's and Pieces!! Prince screamed in the fashion of Joan Crawford. It's about his peeeeeniiiiisssss !!!!! raising one fist in to the air as if to strike at the hand of God as he screached his answer in a high pitched jovial squeel ironically laced with malice. Just then, he hears a loud clap on the outside of the door and a bright flash--it must have been thunder. The door opens. He steps outside jubilant, but realizes that the helicoptor had been struck by lightning and had crashed. .. [This message was edited Wed Jul 21 19:41:58 2004 by AsianBomb777] | |
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MaquisVixen said: AsianBomb777 said: A loud voice echoes from the door. It's Morris Day's voice but slowed down to half speed. It says, "Nah Nah. Oh Lawd, U got 2 questions left." Prince tries a second guess, "Clorine Bacon Skin" is the real name for the album following Diamonds and Pearls?
It's at this point that the door offers him two choices for riddles. The seond one is "What is the wingspan of a swallow?" He replies "Its as long as my Princely schlong. Amazingly the door flies open to reveal a purple road lined with the skin of his exwife. He steps outside..... (Insert something clever here) |
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DarkKnight1 said: MaquisVixen said: He replies "Its as long as my Princely schlong. Amazingly the door flies open to reveal a purple road lined with the skin of his exwife. He steps outside..... Oh God, we've got a dual path now. Two alternat realities that I've got to figure out how to merge or disgard. [sigh] | |
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AsianBomb777 said: DarkKnight1 said: He replies "Its as long as my Princely schlong. Amazingly the door flies open to reveal a purple road lined with the skin of his exwife. He steps outside..... Oh God, we've got a dual path now. Two alternat realities that I've got to figure out how to merge or disgard. [sigh] okay, put them together and i will continue. (Insert something clever here) |
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DarkKnight1 said: AsianBomb777 said: Oh God, we've got a dual path now. Two alternat realities that I've got to figure out how to merge or disgard. [sigh] okay, put them together and i will continue. Thinking back real hard, Prince realizes from his childhood and summer camp that "Clorine Bacon Skin" was what Morris nicknamed his little man. "It's about Morris's Bit's and Pieces!! Prince screamed in the fashion of Joan Crawford. It's about his peeeeeniiiiisssss !!!!! raising one fist in to the air as if to strike at the hand of God as he screached his answer in a high pitched jovial squeel ironically laced with malice. The loud voice comes coming from the door echoes, "U may step through the door as you are, or for an added bonus, if you can answer me what the wingspan of a swallow is..." Prince interupts exitedly. Oh, oh. wait, wait. oh, oh, I got it, I got it!! He replies "Its as long as my Princely schlong. Amazingly the door flies open to reveal a purple road lined with the skin of his exwife. He steps outside..... Just then, he hears a loud clap on the outside of the door and a bright flash--it must have been thunder. Amazingly the door flies open to reveal a purple road lined with the skin of his exwife. He steps outside..... He steps outside jubilant, but realizes that the helicoptor had been struck by lightning and had crashed. But he looks down an notices that his leg has miraculously been reattached to his body alhtough he noticed that he's lost a great deal of feeling in it and it doesn't opperate as it use to. Also, to his horror, the cane no longer appeared on his leg but was now wedged in his anus. | |
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AsianBomb777 said: DarkKnight1 said: okay, put them together and i will continue. Thinking back real hard, Prince realizes from his childhood and summer camp that "Clorine Bacon Skin" was what Morris nicknamed his little man. "It's about Morris's Bit's and Pieces!! Prince screamed in the fashion of Joan Crawford. It's about his peeeeeniiiiisssss !!!!! raising one fist in to the air as if to strike at the hand of God as he screached his answer in a high pitched jovial squeel ironically laced with malice. The loud voice comes coming from the door echoes, "U may step through the door as you are, or for an added bonus, if you can answer me what the wingspan of a swallow is..." Prince interupts exitedly. Oh, oh. wait, wait. oh, oh, I got it, I got it!! He replies "Its as long as my Princely schlong. Amazingly the door flies open to reveal a purple road lined with the skin of his exwife. He steps outside..... Just then, he hears a loud clap on the outside of the door and a bright flash--it must have been thunder. Amazingly the door flies open to reveal a purple road lined with the skin of his exwife. He steps outside..... He proceeded to drag his ass on the ground like a cat to release the cane. he was unsuccessful. then he realized that he better see if anyone is still outside. Youll never guess what he saw..... He steps outside jubilant, but realizes that the helicoptor had been struck by lightning and had crashed. But he looks down an notices that his leg has miraculously been reattached to his body alhtough he noticed that he's lost a great deal of feeling in it and it doesn't opperate as it use to. Also, to his horror, the cane no longer appeared on his leg but was now wedged in his anus. (Insert something clever here) |
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DarkKnight1 said: AsianBomb777 said: Thinking back real hard, Prince realizes from his childhood and summer camp that "Clorine Bacon Skin" was what Morris nicknamed his little man. "It's about Morris's Bit's and Pieces!! Prince screamed in the fashion of Joan Crawford. It's about his peeeeeniiiiisssss !!!!! raising one fist in to the air as if to strike at the hand of God as he screached his answer in a high pitched jovial squeel ironically laced with malice. The loud voice comes coming from the door echoes, "U may step through the door as you are, or for an added bonus, if you can answer me what the wingspan of a swallow is..." Prince interupts exitedly. Oh, oh. wait, wait. oh, oh, I got it, I got it!! He replies "Its as long as my Princely schlong. Amazingly the door flies open to reveal a purple road lined with the skin of his exwife. He steps outside..... Just then, he hears a loud clap on the outside of the door and a bright flash--it must have been thunder. Amazingly the door flies open to reveal a purple road lined with the skin of his exwife. He steps outside..... He proceeded to drag his ass on the ground like a cat to release the cane. he was unsuccessful. then he realized that he better see if anyone is still outside. Youll never guess what he saw..... He steps outside jubilant, but realizes that the helicoptor had been struck by lightning and had crashed. But he looks down an notices that his leg has miraculously been reattached to his body alhtough he noticed that he's lost a great deal of feeling in it and it doesn't opperate as it use to. Also, to his horror, the cane no longer appeared on his leg but was now wedged in his anus. He then proceeds to drag his ass on the ground to dislodge the cane, but is unsuccessful. Ignoring his caneass, prince run crazily searching for anyone. he starts screaming...somebody, anybody... he hears a rustling in the bushes. he goes over there only to find.... (Insert something clever here) |
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DarkKnight1 said: DarkKnight1 said: He then proceeds to drag his ass on the ground to dislodge the cane, but is unsuccessful. Ignoring his caneass, prince run crazily searching for anyone. he starts screaming...somebody, anybody... he hears a rustling in the bushes. he goes over there only to find.... It's Michael Jackson's face in a jar in the bushes!!! The face speaks to him, and after his initial shock, he realizes that MJ is offering to pull the cane out of his ass, and get rid of that terible delima. "How, Michael, How?" Prince cries and sniffles. "Just sit on my face, " says Michael, "and I'll grab onto it with my mouth while you try and pry yourself away from it. Prince thinks about it... thinking,,, thinking... | |
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AsianBomb777 said: DarkKnight1 said: He then proceeds to drag his ass on the ground to dislodge the cane, but is unsuccessful. Ignoring his caneass, prince run crazily searching for anyone. he starts screaming...somebody, anybody... he hears a rustling in the bushes. he goes over there only to find.... It's Michael Jackson's face in a jar in the bushes!!! The face speaks to him, and after his initial shock, he realizes that MJ is offering to pull the cane out of his ass, and get rid of that terible delima. "How, Michael, How?" Prince cries and sniffles. "Just sit on my face, " says Michael, "and I'll grab onto it with my mouth while you try and pry yourself away from it. Prince thinks about it... thinking,,, thinking... He decides against it. He then whips violently around smashing the jar was his ass propelled cane. Michael cries out "NOOOOO, I just wanted a close up of the purple privates" Prince turns around, see a something flying towards him. Is it? Could it BE????? (Insert something clever here) |
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DarkKnight1 said: He decides against it. He then whips violently around smashing the jar was his ass propelled cane. Michael cries out "NOOOOO, I just wanted a close up of the purple privates" Prince turns around, see a something flying towards him. Is it? Could it BE????? Oh God, that's good. I got to stew on that one or let someone take the wheel for a while. | |
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