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FEEDBACK ON MY MUSIC.(this thread is broken)

.. http://www.myspace.com/rodericksterling TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK,JUST STARTED MAKING MUSIC 5 MONTHS AGO AND JUST WANTED SOME FEEDBACK TO SEE IF I HAD SOMETHING OR NOT http://www.myspace.com/rodericksterling
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Reply #1 posted 03/30/09 2:13pm

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You guys gotta take a listen to this....

HOTT!! HOTT!! HOTT!!

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Reply #2 posted 04/01/09 5:37pm

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pippet said:

You guys gotta take a listen to this....

HOTT!! HOTT!! HOTT!!

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I agree Roderick you're BAD!

Something's wrong is very nice. The instruments used and the vocals are very good. Clever arrangement and good use of space. I would suggest just adding some synths in the background..but that's about it.
I heard Pretty Girls and Think I'd suggest changing up the vocals and use a deeper range on those tracks as the beat kinda takes over the falcetto. Higher is right too! I'd cover that one with the quickness!
Rhythm Within almost reminds me on Monie Love nod

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Reply #3 posted 04/02/09 12:17pm

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pippet said:

You guys gotta take a listen to this....

HOTT!! HOTT!! HOTT!!

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I agree Roderick you're BAD!

Something's wrong is very nice. The instruments used and the vocals are very good. Clever arrangement and good use of space. I would suggest just adding some synths in the background..but that's about it.
I heard Pretty Girls and Think I'd suggest changing up the vocals and use a deeper range on those tracks as the beat kinda takes over the falcetto. Higher is right too! I'd cover that one with the quickness!
Rhythm Within almost reminds me on Monie Love nod

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thank you and i am gonna change those vocals also.....thanx 4 the feedback

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Reply #4 posted 04/08/09 9:00am

HeavenlyB	'Somethings Wrong' - I love the vocals, very nice. Cool rhythm, very Prince-like, if you don't mind me comparing. I'm not fond of the keyboard sound choice, but that's just my taste
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'Somethings Wrong' - I love the vocals, very nice. Cool rhythm, very Prince-like, if you don't mind me comparing.
I'm not fond of the keyboard sound choice, but that's just my taste smile

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thank you for the feedback its really cool of you...i am gonna work harder and get better watch.....have a great day

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Reply #6 posted 04/08/09 4:54pm

It should only be about what you think is right for your music. Never try to please other with your artwork because each has their own unique taste and you can't satisfy all. smile

I believe you have a great talent. The rhythm is unique a d the vocal arrangement and performance is impressive. I know from being a sound engineer that it's not simple to get a singer to do those right, especially if they try it without a producer.

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Reply #7 posted 04/08/09 7:39pm

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It should only be about what you think is right for your music. Never try to please other with your artwork because each has their own unique taste and you can't satisfy all. smile

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I believe you have a great talent. The rhythm is unique a d the vocal arrangement and performance is impressive. I know from being a sound engineer that it's not simple to get a singer to do those right, especially if they try it without a producer.

yea i have been doing this for right at 5 months so hopefully it improves as time goes on,i dont read music and i am trying to teach myself to play piano,guitar and bass so yes i do have a ways to go.....and again thanx for your time and feedback thats gonna help me quite a bit

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Reply #8 posted 04/09/09 8:03pm

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hot shit! Sounds Awesome!! music
Good work! If anything, I wanted to hear
the lead vocals louder and a little clearer,
especially on the first two songs, but that's it.
I think you are doing great so far!!!!!
I would put this on my iPod fer sure! music nod

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Reply #9 posted 04/11/09 2:59pm

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Nice!!!

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Reply #10 posted 04/11/09 4:41pm

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You've got some nice grooves going on all those tracks, thanks for sharing! cool

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Reply #11 posted 04/14/09 2:37am

You're not bad at all, keep it up! You've got some songwriting chops going on that I don't have, and I've been (trying) to do it for close to 20 years now. Damn!

I'd suggest cleaning up your vocal tracks - I realize these songs are demos, and that's cool, I'd just like to hear your vox not be so mushy. You got a lot closer with "Sista Neish"'es vocals (she also is really talented!). Your harmonies are really spot-on.

More real guitar and bass are going to make your music that much better. Can't wait to hear what you do next
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Reply #12 posted 04/14/09 6:45am

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cool I'll take a full listen after work, but so far, so good!

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Reply #13 posted 04/14/09 10:15am

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I really like your work music thumbs up!

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Reply #14 posted 04/14/09 2:15pm

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thats tight bra
i really dig "somethings wrong"
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Reply #15 posted 04/14/09 3:05pm

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booty said:

thats tight bra
i really dig "somethings wrong"thank u so much
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Reply #16 posted 04/14/09 4:46pm

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booty said:

thats tight bra
i really dig "somethings wrong"thank u so much
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You have a really sexy groove going,and a beautiful voice. I wish you much success. Ithnik we ll be hearing good things about you soon....

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Reply #17 posted 04/15/09 10:24am

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Reply #18 posted 04/16/09 5:03pm

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pretty bad ass man, way to go . great vocals & cool sounds. I dig

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Reply #19 posted 04/16/09 7:58pm

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some reminds me a bit of 1999ish funk. Good job!

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Reply #20 posted 04/17/09 3:38pm

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zachypoo said:

some reminds me a bit of 1999ish funk. Good job!

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Reply #21 posted 04/18/09 1:00pm

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It's really cool. I didn't expect much, but I like it.

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Reply #22 posted 04/18/09 3:58pm

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graecophilos said:

It's really cool. I didn't expect much, but I like it.

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ReginaCarman	Great Music!!!!!
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Reply #24 posted 04/18/09 11:38pm

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damn... that's pretty good. you have talent.

pretty girls is actually my fave. i love the rhythm and the lyrics. the multi-voice layer is really nice, and i enjoy the simplicity of the music itself. it sounds like a clever robin thicke type song.

if you e-mail me mp3s, i would love to ipod these. let me know if you don't mind mailing, and i will orgnote you my e-mail address.

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Reply #25 posted 04/18/09 11:40pm

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cborgman said:

damn... that's pretty good. you have talent.

pretty girls is actually my fave. i love the rhythm and the lyrics. the multi-voice layer is really nice, and i enjoy the simplicity of the music itself. it sounds like a clever robin thicke type song.

if you e-mail me mp3s, i would love to ipod these. let me know if you don't mind mailing, and i will orgnote you my e-mail address.

i dont mind at all.i am almost done with them and will send them to you....thanx

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Reply #26 posted 04/18/09 11:56pm

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Your music is VERY cool biggrin

Good job.

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Reply #27 posted 04/19/09 12:03am

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Not bad cool

The first song was FUNKY... and I like the vibe for all the others. I dig cool

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Reply #28 posted 04/19/09 12:05am

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.. http://www.myspace.com/rodericksterling TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK,JUST STARTED MAKING MUSIC 5 MONTHS AGO AND JUST WANTED SOME FEEDBACK TO SEE IF I HAD SOMETHING OR NOT http://www.myspace.com/rodericksterling
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well love got what u whant love for shure in jesus name love so to tell u like they did it has ahll ready been done love cause ahll this remids me of prince the singer in this with u in ahlot of ways peace love

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Reply #29 posted 04/19/09 2:22am

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DreamyPopRoyalty said:

Not bad

cool

The first song was FUNKY... and I like the vibe for all the others. I dig cool

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thank you

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