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Thread started 05/05/03 8:15am

AprilMichelle

I need Feedback On something that I wrote

I'm considering entering a piece that I wrote into a contest...I'm not sure if I should and I need some feedback on whether it is idiotic inane crap or not (btw thanks handclaps-the code work for you?)
the link is
www.livejournal.com/users/ellamichelle
The entry entitled "Smoking" at the top of the page, date May 5th 2003
Opinions please biggrin
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Reply #1 posted 05/05/03 8:21am

lillith

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not bad...not bad at all...
i say go for it!!!

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you're only as old as you feel..............so how old do i feel horny

Now that food has replaced sex in my life, I can't even get into my own pants.
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Reply #2 posted 05/05/03 11:28am

luv4thepurple1

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Its really good!! Enter it!

BTW... I got caught up reading the whole
first page and I just wanna hug ya!
He calls me "Holi" cuz he says everyday w/ me is like a Holiday...
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Reply #3 posted 05/05/03 3:55pm

althom

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Love the story! I really like the way you use words to convay the emotion and texture of the peice.
You should enter it! nod
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Reply #4 posted 05/06/03 5:10am

AprilMichelle
Thanks guys! It was v. cool of you all to help...and extra cool that you were so kind. hug
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Reply #5 posted 05/06/03 5:12am

hozannesbiz
I love it! Enter it! Great writing! big grin
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Reply #6 posted 05/06/03 5:25am

Handclapsfinga
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definitely enter it...and the code worked 4 me, i got my own lil' journal now...dancing jig
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Reply #7 posted 05/06/03 5:28am

Cloudbuster

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Good stuff.
"Think inside out." stoned https://www.facebook.com/drjudywood http://www.theperthgroup....entary.pdf

http://archive.org/detail...eather_451 http://www.controversyofz.../index.htm
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Reply #8 posted 05/06/03 5:42am

AzureStar
Enter it...

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Reply #9 posted 05/06/03 5:49am

BelleBeyond

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AzureStar said:

Enter it...

smile


nod
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