Hi

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So 2 things. First is I wrote a short piece of literature/poetry on pics from an Indian friends and since his audience is English-speaking only we've decided to publish it online in both French and English. I've translated it to English and believe I've done a pretty good job but I'd love a native to proofread it. I think all is gramatically correct but it's more a matter of the flow of the text and choice of words: I'll never have this natural sense of the music of the language I have in french in English. It's a very short text, only about 1 page and a half. Plz orgnote me and send me ur email address if u'd be kind enough to do that 4 me, I'll send u the text Thx in advance

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Other thing is I'm in love with that tune by Vindahl and trying to figure out the lyrics. Anyone could help me fill the blanks?

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Here's the track: https://soundcloud.com/to...-feat-coco

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Here's what I could decypher with ??? for what I didn't understand and also I'm not 100% sure about everything I think I understood:

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Haven't got a clue to where I'm going

But I know that isn't happening for the last time

Every notion of the moment is uncertain

And I know I won't be settling down the sign

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Am I lost in the ways you're tracing

Soft ????????????????????????????????? facing

I can't find the balance again

Cos I'm ????????????????????????????? on you

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You got me head over heels this time

I'm ????????????????????????? can't decide

You got me head over heels again

And I feel like I should break this frame

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?????????????????????????????????????????? balance

Nothing to do cos nothing is true

Even holding my ?????????????????????

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I got gravity against me

I'm feeling safer here but I'm not

I've got to ??????????????????????

???????????????????????????????????????????

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You got me head over heels this time

I'm ????????????????????????? can't decide

You got me head over heels again

And I feel like I should break this frame

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?????????????????????????????????????????? balance

Nothing to do cos nothing is true

Even holding my?????????????????????

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Thx

Sorry that I cannot really help you with the lyrics, but I like the track you posted. It reminded me a bit of the Bria album- which I like, so don't let nobody get the wrong idea!
And as for the other text, I'd love to read it, but my French isn't really that great, so don't expect too much.

SuperSoulFighter said:

Sorry that I cannot really help you with the lyrics, but I like the track you posted. It reminded me a bit of the Bria album- which I like, so don't let nobody get the wrong idea! And as for the other text, I'd love to read it, but my French isn't really that great, so don't expect too much.

Thx, I don't need someone to proofread the French version (that's my language) but the ENGLISH one, a native English speaker that would need to be though (DK if u're one?)

No, I'm Dutch. But you just made me curious.

SuperSoulFighter said:

No, I'm Dutch. But you just made me curious.

I'll try and remember to send u a link when it's published online