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i just read the early draft of purple rain for the 1st tme. first time. wow. ok starts of with a few slight different things. moved a few conversations to different spots... i find myself acting out the lines since i've seen it so many times... very easy to picture the differences as i get further and further... alot more violence. omfg at his parents!?
too much morris and vanity. come on how could ya compare that goof to prince?
ELECTRIC INTERCOURSE!!!
they cut the hell outta jill and her crush on him ... and a dog?
oh they said oriental. thats a curse word now!
coal chute? wtf?
ok the mom's drunk incest hinting at is creepy but i thought the scene of her calling him pretty and giving him her earring while outlining the signature mole was really cute. they cut alot of the mom too!
barn scene..faints. ride em cowboy!!!
rape scene. wow. that quite vivid there.
i have adhd and no attention span at all. the fact i just read that thru astonishes me. that as epic.
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Where did you find this? !
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I LOVE to read that...
is it online? One minute they want peace……
Then do everything to make it go away. | |
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It is, it's a very great "first draft" movie impression. much more dark and interesting into his world. The final draft was too much Hollywood, but nevertheless a great movie.
I couldn't stand to reading it on the computer but just had to print it out. U c how they changed alot of things around Prince's lead woman's character since Vanity had left the picture? Apollonia was just too sweet for those actions and lines. Never caught to the hinting of incest. Just a mother examining her son's features for the first time, prolly. Clearly she was drunk. Oh, & 4 u dirty ppl, not those features! And the rape, the scene finally showed the woman taking control in the movie. But was converted into Apples just slapping him and throwing the earring.
And I have to say, much more better than the work print
[Edited 12/22/10 5:42am] Yes, at 19, I finally saw the Revolution, a legendary band. And I talked to Wendy!!! | |
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I was doing a thread on the early draft with picture/outtakes, never finished it
(1) Black Screen
If U don't like the world U're living in
Are we gonna let de-elevator bring us down? We're all excited, but we don't know why
Come on, baby Are we gonna let de-elevator bring us down? Dr. Everything'll Be Alright will make everything go wrong He's coming! Take me away!
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wow that rough draft is great! love the visual aids:-D more please! | |
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SURE
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...Vanity snaps out of it. Jill is
I - I've been watching U My jungle love, yeah U - U've got a pretty car Look out, oh! Come on baby, where's your guts?
I wanna take U 2 my cage Oh, jungle love, yes Yeah, yeah, yeah, jungle love, oh! Hey Jesse Jungle love, yeah Oh, my jungle love, well
Jesse, gimme one of them sexy solos right here Oh, jungle love, that's right Hey!
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I read it before I saw PR. "I never wanted to be your weekend lover..." | |
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yeah that's what I was waiting for, the pics of Jill! "Midnight is where the day begins" | |
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http://corky.net/scripts/...eRain.html hope i don't get in trouble for posting this.. in full
omfg!!
He lashes out suddenly, SMASHES it from
her grip. She SCREAMS wildly, SLAPS him
hard across the face. He stands shocked
a moment, his rage surging within him,
smashing through every safety valve he's
acquired in his life. He BACKHANDS her
savagely across the jaw.
She hits the ground like a rag doll. He
looks at her curiously, bends over her -
- she sucker-punches him with everything
she's got! He SCREAMS in rage and grabs
her hands as they flail about his face.
He squeezes her fingers back while the
tears stream down her cheeks and her
mouth forms a silent "ow"! She bares
her teeth angrily and he sucks at her
mouth, biting and kissing her in a fever
pitch.
She kicks at him violently, hot tears
streaming down her cheeks. He jams his
leg between hers, rubs it firmly against
her bottom. She struggles helplessly
against him as he covers her breasts,
her stomach, her thighs with his lips.
Quick breaths escape from her -- her
breathing begins to race...
He snaps her panties in two, pulls them
from between her legs. She spreads
herself as he releases his pants. She
squeezes his buttocks, pulls him toward
her -- but Prince resists her coldly,
regards her with contempt. Suddenly he
flips her onto her stomach, forces her
to stand painfully on her knees. He
rubs his hand between her buttocks, then
thrusts into her painfully, driving
himself to the very depths of her...
...but she stifles a cry, arches her
back, and meets his thrusts fiercely,
moving quicker and quicker, banging her
buttocks against his thighs again and
again. She's drawing from him now,
turning the humiliation around,
obtaining all that she needs and
desires. He's powerless -- her thrusts
set the pace. She rises, Prince still
inside her and tugs on him rapidly,
causing him to ejaculate suddenly,
drawing from him a sharp and sudden
cry...
She moves away, draws her coat tightly
about her, fixes him with a contemptuous
look--
VANITY
You're nothing, Prince,
absolutely nothing. You think
you're so special -- but deep
down you're just like all the
rest.
(a beat)
Your whole life you've been
hiding, hiding behind your
music. But now you don't even
have that, because last
night...last night you used it
to hurt someone, someone who
really cares.
She runs up the embankment, wipes away
her tears, faces him--
VANITY
If you put your hands on me
like that ever again, I'll be
the last person you touch.
She pulls off his Mother's earring,
throws it at him. Tears flowing, she
streaks into the HIGHWAY blindly,
directly into the path of a SPEEDING CAR-
-
THE DRIVER
spots her in his HEADLIGHTS, SLAMS on
his brakes! He SKIDS wildly across the
road, comes to a SCREECHING, BURNING
stop inches from her thigh!
VANITY
shoots a look at Prince, her lips
trembling, her love for him, written
plainly on her face. But his eyes flash
defiantly. She bites her lip sadly,
then snaps a hot look at the Driver--
VANITY
I need a ride.
She cuts around the car, hops in. The
Driver skids off into the night. Prince
stands there trembling, watches as it
disappears into the distance.
(60) EXT. GLADE AND BARN -- DAWN
as they ride down a leaf-strewn path and
pull to a stop near an old, weathered,
dilapidated BARN. It stands laarge and
silent like a painting. A low THUNDER
rolls across the land...
(61) INT. BARN -- DAWN
DAWN LIGHT burns through the wooden
slats.. STEAM rises from the wet hay
scattered throughout. The air is thick
and damp. It begins to RAIN.
Vanity stands in the middle of the barn,
gazing at the storm. Beads of
perspiration glisten on her forehead.
She turns slowly, watches as Prince
retrieves old blankets from a nearby
stall. Their eyes search one another
out, their breathing becomes short,
expectant. She hesitates a moment, then
pulls off her blouse, discards it to the
moist, dusty floor.
(62) INT. BARN -- DAY
ANOTHER ANGLE
RAIN patters srtongly against the barn.
A deep THUNDER rolls. She's on top of
him, moving deliciously, her body
glowing in the purple, dawn light.
Moist, purple water shadows streak and
course her skin as she moves slowly,
then deliberately against him. He
watches her avidly, his hands firmly on
her thighs, and thrusts into her again
and again...and again.
IS THERE A WAY TO MAKE THIS BIGGER??? [Edited 12/22/10 16:22pm] | |
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Am I mistaken or did Vanity turn a trick at the movie's beginning when she went in the car with the businessman? They sure flipped that character in the movie. -Silk | |
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lol, are some of those photos above, the dvd to blu-ray comparisons? My art book: http://www.lulu.com/spotl...ecomicskid
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sure sounded like that to me!! | |
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lol YEP | |
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That earring now has more substantial context.
And when he crawls to her pouting "Ma...ma" | |
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20) EXT. PRINCE'S HOUSE -- NIGHT
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(22) BASEMENT -- HALLWAYS AND BEDROOM -- NIGHT | |
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FADE IN: SONG Wednesday ... I Don't Know What I'd Do...
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If you listen to the 1999-Purple Rain music outtakes and long version it's fused with violence and danger loneliness death sex (even rape) | |
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Dam if only I had gotten the dirty version when was available! DAM! | |
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also i'm glad they took that out. i can relate to apples more being she was more innocent, sweet and moving to the area from far away out of her element... | |
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(24) INT. REHEARSAL HALL -- DAY
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(25) EXT. STREETS AND ALLEY -- DOWNTOWN -- DAY
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MORRIS
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27) EXT. STORE WINDOW AND MALL SHOPS -- DOWNTOWN --
[Edited 1/21/11 7:32am] | |
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