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i just read the early draft of purple rain for the 1st tme. first time. wow. ok starts of with a few slight different things. moved a few conversations to different spots... i find myself acting out the lines since i've seen it so many times... very easy to picture the differences as i get further and further... alot more violence. omfg at his parents!?
too much morris and vanity. come on how could ya compare that goof to prince?
ELECTRIC INTERCOURSE!!!
they cut the hell outta jill and her crush on him ... and a dog?
oh they said oriental. thats a curse word now!
coal chute? wtf?
ok the mom's drunk incest hinting at is creepy but i thought the scene of her calling him pretty and giving him her earring while outlining the signature mole was really cute. they cut alot of the mom too!
barn scene..faints. ride em cowboy!!!
rape scene. wow. that quite vivid there. overpower me prince,please!! rofl
i have adhd and no attention span at all. the fact i just read that thru astonishes me. that as epic.
i don't wear a cross?!!? i wear a prince symbol I When Prince's cum dries, diamonds are formed. no one tops prince in concert! | |
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Where did you find this? !
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I LOVE to read that...
is it online? One minute they want peace……
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It is, it's a very great "first draft" movie impression. much more dark and interesting into his world. The final draft was too much Hollywood, but nevertheless a great movie.
I couldn't stand to reading it on the computer but just had to print it out. U c how they changed alot of things around Prince's lead woman's character since Vanity had left the picture? Apollonia was just too sweet for those actions and lines. Never caught to the hinting of incest. Just a mother examining her son's features for the first time, prolly. Clearly she was drunk. Oh, & 4 u dirty ppl, not those features! And the rape, the scene finally showed the woman taking control in the movie. But was converted into Apples just slapping him and throwing the earring.
And I have to say, much more better than the work print
Happy Times, ppl, Happy times [Edited 12/22/10 5:42am] Yes, at 19, I finally saw the Revolution, a legendary band. And I talked to Wendy!!! In addition to seeing Prince, I have now lived life. Thank you Purple People!! | |
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I was doing a thread on the early draft with picture/outtakes, never finished it
(1) Black Screen
If U don't like the world U're living in
Are we gonna let de-elevator bring us down? We're all excited, but we don't know why
Come on, baby Are we gonna let de-elevator bring us down? Dr. Everything'll Be Alright will make everything go wrong He's coming! Take me away!
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wow that rough draft is great! love the visual aids:-D more please! | |
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SURE
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...Vanity snaps out of it. Jill is
I - I've been watching U My jungle love, yeah U - U've got a pretty car Look out, oh! Come on baby, where's your guts?
I wanna take U 2 my cage Oh, jungle love, yes Yeah, yeah, yeah, jungle love, oh! Hey Jesse Jungle love, yeah Oh, my jungle love, well
Jesse, gimme one of them sexy solos right here Oh, jungle love, that's right Hey!
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I read it before I saw PR. "I never wanted to be your weekend lover..." | |
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yeah that's what I was waiting for, the pics of Jill! "Hyperactive when I was small, Hyperactive now I'm grown, Hyperactive 'till I'm dead and gone"
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http://corky.net/scripts/...eRain.html hope i don't get in trouble for posting this.. in full
omfg!!
He lashes out suddenly, SMASHES it from her grip. She SCREAMS wildly, SLAPS him hard across the face. He stands shocked a moment, his rage surging within him, smashing through every safety valve he's acquired in his life. He BACKHANDS her savagely across the jaw. She hits the ground like a rag doll. He looks at her curiously, bends over her - - she sucker-punches him with everything she's got! He SCREAMS in rage and grabs her hands as they flail about his face. He squeezes her fingers back while the tears stream down her cheeks and her mouth forms a silent "ow"! She bares her teeth angrily and he sucks at her mouth, biting and kissing her in a fever pitch. She kicks at him violently, hot tears streaming down her cheeks. He jams his leg between hers, rubs it firmly against her bottom. She struggles helplessly against him as he covers her breasts, her stomach, her thighs with his lips. Quick breaths escape from her -- her breathing begins to race... He snaps her panties in two, pulls them from between her legs. She spreads herself as he releases his pants. She squeezes his buttocks, pulls him toward her -- but Prince resists her coldly, regards her with contempt. Suddenly he flips her onto her stomach, forces her to stand painfully on her knees. He rubs his hand between her buttocks, then thrusts into her painfully, driving himself to the very depths of her... ...but she stifles a cry, arches her back, and meets his thrusts fiercely, moving quicker and quicker, banging her buttocks against his thighs again and again. She's drawing from him now, turning the humiliation around, obtaining all that she needs and desires. He's powerless -- her thrusts set the pace. She rises, Prince still inside her and tugs on him rapidly, causing him to ejaculate suddenly, drawing from him a sharp and sudden cry... She moves away, draws her coat tightly about her, fixes him with a contemptuous look-- VANITY You're nothing, Prince, absolutely nothing. You think you're so special -- but deep down you're just like all the rest. (a beat) Your whole life you've been hiding, hiding behind your music. But now you don't even have that, because last night...last night you used it to hurt someone, someone who really cares. She runs up the embankment, wipes away her tears, faces him-- VANITY If you put your hands on me like that ever again, I'll be the last person you touch. She pulls off his Mother's earring, throws it at him. Tears flowing, she streaks into the HIGHWAY blindly, directly into the path of a SPEEDING CAR- - THE DRIVER spots her in his HEADLIGHTS, SLAMS on his brakes! He SKIDS wildly across the road, comes to a SCREECHING, BURNING stop inches from her thigh! VANITY shoots a look at Prince, her lips trembling, her love for him, written plainly on her face. But his eyes flash defiantly. She bites her lip sadly, then snaps a hot look at the Driver-- VANITY I need a ride. She cuts around the car, hops in. The Driver skids off into the night. Prince stands there trembling, watches as it disappears into the distance.
(60) EXT. GLADE AND BARN -- DAWN as they ride down a leaf-strewn path and pull to a stop near an old, weathered, dilapidated BARN. It stands laarge and silent like a painting. A low THUNDER rolls across the land... (61) INT. BARN -- DAWN DAWN LIGHT burns through the wooden slats.. STEAM rises from the wet hay scattered throughout. The air is thick and damp. It begins to RAIN. Vanity stands in the middle of the barn, gazing at the storm. Beads of perspiration glisten on her forehead. She turns slowly, watches as Prince retrieves old blankets from a nearby stall. Their eyes search one another out, their breathing becomes short, expectant. She hesitates a moment, then pulls off her blouse, discards it to the moist, dusty floor. (62) INT. BARN -- DAY ANOTHER ANGLE RAIN patters srtongly against the barn. A deep THUNDER rolls. She's on top of him, moving deliciously, her body glowing in the purple, dawn light. Moist, purple water shadows streak and course her skin as she moves slowly, then deliberately against him. He watches her avidly, his hands firmly on her thighs, and thrusts into her again and again...and again.
IS THERE A WAY TO MAKE THIS BIGGER??? [Edited 12/22/10 16:22pm] i don't wear a cross?!!? i wear a prince symbol I When Prince's cum dries, diamonds are formed. no one tops prince in concert! | |
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Am I mistaken or did Vanity turn a trick at the movie's beginning when she went in the car with the businessman? They sure flipped that character in the movie. -Silk | |
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lol, are some of those photos above, the dvd to blu-ray comparisons? My art book: http://www.lulu.com/spotl...ecomicskid
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sure sounded like that to me!! i don't wear a cross?!!? i wear a prince symbol I When Prince's cum dries, diamonds are formed. no one tops prince in concert! | |
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lol YEP | |
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That earring now has more substantial context.
And when he crawls to her pouting "Ma...ma" | |
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20) EXT. PRINCE'S HOUSE -- NIGHT
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(22) BASEMENT -- HALLWAYS AND BEDROOM -- NIGHT | |
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FADE IN: SONG Wednesday ... I Don't Know What I'd Do...
[Edited 1/21/11 6:39am] | |
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1000 times...Now this would have been a sex scene..Good Lawd!....Gosh love Apples but Vanity would have been so much better..and the story line was much more dramatic...WHY!.. | |
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If you listen to the 1999-Purple Rain music outtakes and long version it's fused with violence and danger loneliness death sex (even rape) | |
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Dam if only I had gotten the dirty version when was available! DAM! | |
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also i'm glad they took that out. i can relate to apples more being she was more innocent, sweet and moving to the area from far away out of her element... i don't wear a cross?!!? i wear a prince symbol I When Prince's cum dries, diamonds are formed. no one tops prince in concert! | |
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(24) INT. REHEARSAL HALL -- DAY
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(25) EXT. STREETS AND ALLEY -- DOWNTOWN -- DAY
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MORRIS
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27) EXT. STORE WINDOW AND MALL SHOPS -- DOWNTOWN --
[Edited 1/21/11 7:32am] | |
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