Send Prince a poem.

I think of Prince's Dad in Purple Rain, when I say..."Of course they are mine...whose else would they be."

Hyacinth

A tint of sin is sown
From planted earth it grows
Temptation bears the fruit
A hint of wrong at root
On ascent, we notice
Hyacinth in spirit
A scent of misery
To climb the n'th degree
We ponder the most wise,
The garden in the sky
The ladder's tip, an ace
Where water lives in praise
Within our dust we trust
The Sun will shower us. T

Roses are red
violets are not
[Snipped / Bait - June7]

I have to share this with Prince...It is important Prince know that I have designed a new style of poetry. Because it will certainly filter into society for writer's in practice.

The style is called..."The syllabic Stair style." I would like for this to be a children's book. It is called, "Treasure."

Treasure
Diamonds and Gold
Were stored beneathe the ship
The jewels were meant to be for sale
But they were never sold within this tale

The Sea
The story told
At once the tide had ripped
Upon the sea a sudden gale
The lightning struck the sail and soon it hailed

Danger
They lost control
The ship began to tip
The water rose the scattered pails
The captain told the crew to start to bail

Over
The storm unfolds
The captain took a dip
The treasure's sale had failed
The captain swam inside a pirate's jail. T

The rule is syllables at 2, 4, 6, 8, 10...On four flights.

InsatiableCream said:

work on it Insatiable...Your imagery at play is a little too vitamin K.

prince was getting fat
prince ate cheese like a rat
prince was chubby tubby and in charge
too bad he exploded from being a
fatty mc big large
[Edited 5/22/08 17:00pm]

InsatiableCream said:

i don't know why that reminds me of alice in wonderland

genius....i don't know where you get your ideas

Prince
a knight in shining armor
riding as a whirlwind storm or
tornado as all crawl to their cellar
he's so awesome, he's Stellar

That's nice Wildgoldenhoney.

Insatiable please...Let Ron be Mc'dees.
And I've got a shake...4 chaser...
Cuz' In my blood's speed racer.
[Edited 5/22/08 17:22pm]

"To laugh often and love much; to win the respect of intellingent persons and the affection of children; to earn the approbation of honest citizens and endure the betrayal of false friends; to appreciate beauty; to find the best in others; to give of one's self; to leave the world a bit better, whether by a healthy child, a garden patch or a redeemed social condition; to have played and laughed with enthusiasm and sung with exultation; to know even one life has breathed easier because you have lived - this is to have succeeded."

- Ralph Waldo Emerson
an essayist, philosopher, poet
(25 May 1803 – 27 April 1882)

In verse we write a poem
A metric rhyme composed
Elevated imagery
Opposed to simple prose. T

http://www.flzone.net/get...ewsId=8304

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[Edited 5/22/08 18:41pm]

Tea?

Tea time
At one o'clock
If you'd like to come please
A special blend from overseas'
To swallow the day with sugar and ease

The Boat
Tied to the dock
If your coming by breeze
Like the sunset rests on the sea
On the deck waiting is where to find me

Cottage
This road is blocked
The woods are in the street
Early spring knocked over the trees
My address however is twenty-three

The Path
goes west to walk
Truly a pretty scene
You and I make the sweetest we
Can you seize the day and join me for tea? T

Of course it's mine...whose else would it B?

New Leaf / Old Tree
By June7, May 22, 2008


I remember...
I remember back in Seven Nine
Wantin' to be your lover
Your Sister... Your Mother
Too

I remember...
I remember back in Eight Two
You would say without haste
You would sincerely 'fuck the taste'
Outta your mouth

I remember...
I remember back in Eight Four
You would create a scene
Masturbating to a magazine
In a hotel lobby

I remember...
I remember back in Eight Five
You truly turned my world apart
By giving us a Condition of the Heart
Blinded by daisies... Mmmm, Mmmm, Mmmm.

I remember...
I remember back in Eight Six
I was lucky - from you I received a Kiss
A new position I would dare not miss
Or April snow

I remember...
I remember back in Eight Seven, Eight Eight and Eight Nine,
Back to back to back - so divine
Sign 'o' the Times, Eye No The Future
You'd need a bridge
Though

I remember...
I remember back in the big Nine Oh
You gave me Joy, ovah and ovah
A generation of powah
Sell U Lawd

I remember...
I remember back from Nine One thru Nine Nine
Diamonds, Symbols and Experiences
Chaos Truth and Freedom - Masterful Existances
Jam of the Ears

I remember...
I remember back in Zero One
Raved at the end, Did it again...
Unto and Into - and the best of your friends
Colorful Children

I remember...
I remember as late as the Joy Fantastic
Still Hot wit You... Still Strange but True
Still pretty, man. Beautiful strange...
Silly game

I remember...
I remember the way your music was layed
The way it was sure to get me laid
Now it's gettin' you peace of mind...
But...
Under
Played.

I remember...
I remember you mentioned the end of time
Make sure you see Dawn
Make sure you move on...
You have...
I've not.
So, Really...
Who's
At
Fault?

...And when
Can I
See what's
In your...

Vault?

Like the sun and moon and venus,
we are your fans and nothing can come between us,
Like the sun and moon and venus,
It would be celestial to have your lips around my penis,

your lips around my penis,
your lips around my penis,

the sun promises to rise slowly
when the night is so lonely
filled with everything from the past
it doesn't surprise me
feeling indifferent to the current state
every time I see his face
he doesn't care and nothing matters
as the car door opens
you storm off once again
never really a friend
gone like wind
no one sings

this isn't really for Prince, but for me

Who first seduced them to that foul revolt?
Th' infernal Serpent; he it was, whose guile
Stirred up with envy and revenge, deceived
The mother of mankind, what time his pride
Had cast him out from heav'n, with all his host
Of rebel angels, by whose aid aspiring
To set himself in glory above his peers,
He trusted to have equaled the Most High,
If he opposed; and with ambitious aim
Against the throne and monarchy of God
Raised impious war in heav'n and battle proud
With vain attempt. Him the Almighty Power
Hurled headlong flaming from th' ethereal sky
With hideous ruin and combustion down
To bottomless perdition, there to dwell
In adamantine chains and penal fire,
Who durst defy th' Omnipotent to arms.
Nine times the space that measures day and night
To mortal men, he with his horrid crew
Lay vanquished, rolling in the fiery gulf
Confounded though immortal: but his doom
Reserved him to more wrath; for now the thought
Both of lost happiness and lasting pain
Torments him; round he throws his baleful eyes
That witnessed huge affliction and dismay
Mixed with obdúrate pride and steadfast hate:
At once as far as angels ken he views
The dismal situation waste and wild,
A dungeon horrible, on all sides round
As one great furnace flamed, yet from those flames
No light, but rather darkness visible
Served only to discover sights of woe,
Regions of sorrow, doleful shades, where peace
And rest can never dwell, hope never comes
That comes to all; but torture without end
Still urges, and a fiery deluge, fed
With ever-burning sulphur unconsumed:
Such place Eternal Justice had prepared
For those rebellious, here their prison ordained
In utter darkness, and their portion set
As far removed from God and light of heav'n
As from the center thrice to th' utmost pole.

-- John Milton

Comes 2 Pass

Age has come to greet me
I am old
Like fall has come to winter
It is cold
Soon the end will come
And I'll be born
Like the ending of the night
Into the morn. T

Goodbye's

I've said goodbye
To some people
And I've said hello
To brand new friends
I hope when I lose
I gain just as much
To account for some Love
In the end. T

poem.

G0d said:

-Literally!
[Edited 5/23/08 3:16am]

? GOD?

A skeptic's life
Is only tragic
We need to be in tune
with magic
Fear of Love
Will decieve you
If you were me
Than I'd
Believe you. T

Tame said:

This is Nice Tame.

U Appreciates the Full Value of True Love.

I Met Someone the Other day who said,
"Never Let Love's Foundation Die"
I Found it an Odd thing to Say..
I think they May Have been Admitting
to Making their Own Fearful Mistakes...

For On Angels Wings Was I Born
And On Angels Wings I Reside
As I Return Home
Never Alone
To My Paradise in the Sky
of Perpetual Love.....

2IZ1 said:

That is beautiful.
Prose from a rose.

I wish I was an Apple

a hangin on a tree

and everytime that you'd come by

You'd take a bite of me
[Edited 5/23/08 4:43am]

Trust

Trust isn't a word
That is just spoken
It is a bond
That's kept or broken. T

u'll download me in2 ur crystals
boasting 2 be all enhanced
adam closed the emerald book
when u got up and danced
up there, on them fiberoptics
transmutating in2 me
and all could c ur underwear
never really gave a care


4 'm the digital shogun
draw my sword 2 cut the wound
that feeds ur deep hypnosis
'm the furthest and the closest
whispering sweet nothings at
the entrance to ur pelvis
saying " was once a prince
b4 i wound up dead like elvis".



[Edited 5/23/08 6:43am]

what on earth is happeninG?
oh earth what have u done?
c the strong and mighty crumbling
yet u've only just begun.

now the sun nO longer rises
now the birds at Dawn r gone.
strewn upon the floor their disguises
they thought they were strong - they were wrong.

stone and roCk and diamond
hauls from the earth the miner.
"make us big & mAke us strong!"
yet in his eyes we r but china.

now our sun no longeR rises
now our birds at dawn r gone.
strEwn upon the floor our disguises
we thought we were Strong - we were wrong.

There was a young girl whose attire,
Soon set all the clergy a-fire,
She displayed her knickers,
To various vicars,
And all of the boys in the choir.

TheNewWatcher2 said:

She is Stronger than He...
Without Her
He's a Honeyless Bee.