I really like this, I still have a few changes I want to make, I'm also wondering if it may be too wierd for radio?

Let me know what you think? Please feel free to offer any suggestions or critques.

Tnx
Cozmic!

http://www.broadjam.com/cozmic

I like the keyboards and the rhythm on this. Too weird for radio? Shit, that's what radio needs! Some innovation! Some creativity! Well, ok, it does get a little weird, but I LOVE shit like that. Love the percussion on this. Your vocals sound sooo great! Very well produced. This could be a good bside to a single maybe? Who knows, I can think of a few songs that we're probably thought to be too weird for radio and they became hits! When Doves Cry? No baseline. Erotic City? That was a bside! The Wild Boys by Duran Duran is another track that was way out there at the time and it STILL stands today.

hay!

do the wop! do the wop! do the wop!

this is great! Scream n holla pimp mama!

VinaBlue said:

You have a really positive outlook....Im definatly want to offer a different more creative sound.
I still need to clean up a few parts then I think this one will make the Demo cut.

I like that tune quite a bit. Yeah it has a bit of weird in an Atomic Dog kinda way, but it is very listenable. The flow is real nice.

Bumpin!

I think your lead vocal has too much effect on it... maybe you could copy the lead vocal to a dry track, pan it dead center, and put the lead vocal WITH effect on another track, panned a little left or right...

Damn... I just need to shut up, don't I? Always throwing my damn mixing tips out there. People are gonna start hatin' on my ass.

--Julian Christian--

www.soundclick.com/julianchristian

paisleypark4 said:

Thanks Man! I appreciate that!

Kevlar said:

Thanks!

JulianChristian said:

Great idea! I appreciate you taking the time to listen and the time to offer feedback!
I dont hate you for it! Thanks for tha luv!

Littlewing said:

Yeh cool smooth sound.Funky , bit light weight for a rocker like me ; but that's ME! COOL & SMOOTH MAN.DO.

FLUX said:

Tnx! I feel ya....I have a specific project in mind for this track so the arrangment is with that in mind. I can get alot more complex if I want and need to...

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Kevlar said:

Thanks!

Littlewing said:[quote]

Littlewing said:

Co-Sign!

The flow is real nice!




Jshua

Styles said:

Thanks I really appreciate the feedback! Its always good to get another pespective.

yo bro, your production quality went up 100%. nice funk. George would be proud.

talmuzic said:

Tnx! Tal! I'm wroking hard at it and yes I am the bastard child of George Clinton...