Now, you can use the words in any order, any tense, and any number (this includes repition, and plural words). But each word MUST be used once and you are restricted to 16 lines.Take no more than 15 minutes to write it just to see how creative you are. The poem can be about anything you want.

card
telephone
castle
plunder
yell
fruit
belief
trio

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dude you are totally biting my poem thread.

crazyhorse said:

a trio of kisses
taste fruit on my lips
your castle of flesh
plunders between my hips

i yell when you penetrate my soft
with what's become so hard
disbelief - don't get it twisted
call tyrone on your telephone card.

challenge accepted. biting what poem thread? i'll ya bite ta though, aint trippin on that.

please yell for me, i'm so low can hardly see
these things in me, belief has gone away from me
plunder as you stumble, through the castle call

please yell for me, i'm so low can hardly see
the fruit of love i've gotten, went bad before it's time
you held the cards, set the deck for all to see
trio of kings you follow, is that why you cast down a me

please yell for me, i'm so low can hardly see
no telephone dont bother, no escaping me
there's no god like that here we follow
shed your beliefs in thee, screams escaping me

down hall i follow, black door it leads
satans chambers i wallow, my souls a slave breaking me


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no more cards
no more telephone calls
no more castles
to plunder
can't even yell anymore
you devoured the fruit
and my belief went with it
i can't be a part of this trio

As my castle crumbles and my belief is gone
I put my cards on the table cause i know I was wrong
Your telephone call destroyed a part of me
It's like the fruit of my soul has been ripped from it's tree
Problems come in one's and two's or in my case a trio
Our love was to be special like Trinity and Neo
But instead your like a pirate that steals and plunders
Leavin pain in your wake and leaving me to wonder....
I would yell and cry out but what good would it do
Your problems do not stem from me....the issue lies with you....

Sinister said:

Sinister said:

That's really good sinister.....props.....

crazyhorse said:

but its sad

crazyhorse said:

Thanks coming from you that is a great compliment!

MostBeautifulGrlNTheWorld said:

Im a sad man who hides behind his sexy exterior....

Sinister said:

Why are you lurking???

MostBeautifulGrlNTheWorld said:

Im just dead.....not lurking....boo!

Sinister said:

Damn brutha don't creep up on me like that.... hi

MostBeautifulGrlNTheWorld said:

Hi baby....you gonna write a poem?

Sinister said:

Maybe

oh to plunder my castle!
a trio of fruit yelled at
my telephone card
i found it
beyond belief.

Start time 5:23 AM


I can’t believe I have your card in my telephone deck, but I am afraid to call, even though my castle seems so bear with out you

The fruit of our relationship is empty, it is tasteless like an apple that has been aged to long. We have a trio of problems that causes our pain, we yell, we yell, we yell.

ended 5:33

Sinister said:

Very nice Sinister!!!!!

A Telephone yell,
Plunder castle for cardfruit,
Trio of belief!



OK, I know it makes no sense, but I like haiku's.

crazyhorse said:

Here's a fucking poem for you:

Fuck this fucking telephone card.
It plundered all my loot
Like it was fucking Halliburton.
So I yelled
And I cursed,
On the fucking Senate floor
At Leahy
That fruit.
My beliefs come down to this trio of words:
Fuck that fucking fuck!!

Ego Scriptor

in this old tattered card
coy strains of belief,
my splintered heart
lies buried beneath

faded cover compels
scratched burgeoning fruit
and a mass-produced yell;
a birthday salute

but historical words
are a blade to my throat
as i plunder, eyes blurred,
the 'x' trio footnote

so i watched the card burn
our castle's ruins consigned
to smouldering red; no return
no telephone call, no words

love's decline

TheFrog said:

I love The Frog!!!

cocogrille said:

hey coco

how are you this fine, fine day?

TheFrog said:

I am doing great !!! nice to see you.

cocogrille said:

nice to see you too. fancy an egg sandwich?

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[This message was edited Fri Jul 2 7:17:07 2004 by shausler]

TheFrog said:

do you have to be so good at everything?

I checked my dance card
And telephoned you
At your own private castle
Where I heard you plunder our love

I yelled my discontent
Sorry I called you a fruit
Now I know it's beyond belief
But could we possibly have a trio?

your way or
the highway

i choose my way
the cry way