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Reply #150 posted 10/21/07 6:55pm

obsessed

tony23k said:

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Love that picture, Tony...nice addition...

Glad you like it. biggrin

I'm watching a series of his films.
The image in this one(IotPD) struck me as I read your poem,which is really good.


Thank you.....

Like a documentary or his actual films? Which one or ones would you recommend?
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Reply #151 posted 10/21/07 7:13pm

tony23k

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obsessed said:

tony23k said:


Glad you like it. biggrin

I'm watching a series of his films.
The image in this one(IotPD) struck me as I read your poem,which is really good.


Thank you.....

Like a documentary or his actual films? Which one or ones would you recommend?

Kenneth Anger:vol;1

"Fireworks"(1947)
the 16 minute version of "Rabbit Moon"(1950)

the best is "Inauguration of the Pleasure Dome"(1954)
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Vol;2 has "Rabbit Moon"(1979 version)
and ""Scorpio Rising"(1964)
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Reply #152 posted 10/21/07 7:18pm

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EmbattledWarrior said:

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You might be surprised....give it a try once....
Sometimes I think we can rework things to a point of no return...
I'm saying that sometimes our first impulses are the best.
If we rework things too much, whether it be song lyrics or poetry,
we sometimes lose the meaning of our original thoughts.

You're probably right
I pretty much loath everything i write...
I try to use some type of method, but shit never works
when i write with method i get writers block, for fucks sake...
But i am kind of a peerfectionist,
extremely judgemental as well...
Notice i rarely reply to other cats poetry...
Not that i don't like it. Just extremely critical, and keep my comments to myself.
And when people compliment my own, i shrug it off, thinking they're insane and don't know shit...
Constantly in a tussle with my own ego...
Hence...
Embattledwarrior...


Thanks for being so open about that...it helps to understand you, if only a bit better...you're a complex person.

Then I guess I'm insane and don't know shit, because I like a lot of your stuff... lol

I really hope you'll continue to do what you do, Embattledwarrior, because you have a rare gift whether you know it or not.
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Reply #153 posted 10/21/07 7:18pm

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complete short films.
they've all been restored and compiled on two dvd's
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Reply #154 posted 10/21/07 7:19pm

obsessed

tony23k said:

obsessed said:



Thank you.....

Like a documentary or his actual films? Which one or ones would you recommend?

Kenneth Anger:vol;1

"Fireworks"(1947)
the 16 minute version of "Rabbit Moon"(1950)

the best is "Inauguration of the Pleasure Dome"(1954)
-----

Vol;2 has "Rabbit Moon"(1979 version)
and ""Scorpio Rising"(1964)


Thanks, I'll take note....
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Reply #155 posted 10/21/07 7:22pm

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tony23k said:

complete short films.
they've all been restored and compiled on two dvd's


Looks like youtube may actually have the ones you recommended...

On second glance, I guess not....
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Reply #156 posted 10/23/07 1:46am

tony23k

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obsessed said:

tony23k said:

complete short films.
they've all been restored and compiled on two dvd's


Looks like youtube may actually have the ones you recommended...

On second glance, I guess not....


there's enough of his work there to get an introduction.
the dvd's bring it full circle cool
my phone is heavy
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Reply #157 posted 10/23/07 11:12am

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tony23k said:

obsessed said:



Looks like youtube may actually have the ones you recommended...

On second glance, I guess not....


there's enough of his work there to get an introduction.
the dvd's bring it full circle cool
How about a film thread.
I have not seen a piece of his work.
Have a couple of questions but maybe film should have it's own thread before it takes over the Korner.
I am not my Girdle.
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Reply #158 posted 10/23/07 11:54am

CrazySexy

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Never have I wanted something so bad
The way I wanted you
You were my everything

How can I pretend like I didnt know you
Let alone love you
You were my world

Everywhere I go I hear you
Your sweet tone
You were my teacher

Exterior so cool and calm
But eyes filled with sorrow
Nobody notices

I sit here looking at you
And go along with your charade

Just reminds me of all the lies you said

You hear my pain aloud and the yells of my heart
Yet you keep your pain and yelling heart on the inside.

You may not be my everything or my world or my teacher anymore
But the one thing that will never change is that you will always be my first love.
got eyes that can hypnotize a blind man
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Reply #159 posted 10/23/07 3:01pm

tony23k

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Reply #160 posted 10/23/07 3:03pm

tony23k

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Girdle said:

tony23k said:


there's enough of his work there to get an introduction.
the dvd's bring it full circle cool
How about a film thread.
I have not seen a piece of his work.
Have a couple of questions but maybe film should have it's own thread before it takes over the Korner.

done.
thanks for the inspiration.
my phone is heavy
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Reply #161 posted 10/23/07 8:49pm

EmbattledWarri
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obsessed said:

EmbattledWarrior said:


You're probably right
I pretty much loath everything i write...
I try to use some type of method, but shit never works
when i write with method i get writers block, for fucks sake...
But i am kind of a peerfectionist,
extremely judgemental as well...
Notice i rarely reply to other cats poetry...
Not that i don't like it. Just extremely critical, and keep my comments to myself.
And when people compliment my own, i shrug it off, thinking they're insane and don't know shit...
Constantly in a tussle with my own ego...
Hence...
Embattledwarrior...


Thanks for being so open about that...it helps to understand you, if only a bit better...you're a complex person.

Then I guess I'm insane and don't know shit, because I like a lot of your stuff... lol

I really hope you'll continue to do what you do, Embattledwarrior, because you have a rare gift whether you know it or not.

I'm complex and simple , perfect paradox
i do torment myself mentally
thnx for being a reader tho
I am a Rail Road, Track Abandoned
With the Sunset forgetting, i ever Happened
http://www.myspace.com/stolenmorning
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Reply #162 posted 10/23/07 9:08pm

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Inspired by a text message and an Edward Hopper painting.


Night Hawk


Waited in a coffee shop
2 a.m., the rain won't stop
to let me leave

Surrounded by the references
to Hopper and it's never been
so clear to me

It was too wrong to turn out right
It was too right to see the wrong
We were afraid to say goodbye
and let the night hawk fly

Wrapped in your fluorescent light
colder than a New York night
I miss the moon

Your heart has got the best of mine
took down all your exit signs
[still] I'm leaving soon

It was too wrong to turn out right
It was too right to see the wrong
We were afraid to say goodbye
and let the night hawk fly
I am not my Girdle.
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Reply #163 posted 10/24/07 10:01am

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CrazySexy said:

Never have I wanted something so bad
The way I wanted you
You were my everything

How can I pretend like I didnt know you
Let alone love you
You were my world

Everywhere I go I hear you
Your sweet tone
You were my teacher

Exterior so cool and calm
But eyes filled with sorrow
Nobody notices

I sit here looking at you
And go along with your charade

Just reminds me of all the lies you said

You hear my pain aloud and the yells of my heart
Yet you keep your pain and yelling heart on the inside.

You may not be my everything or my world or my teacher anymore
But the one thing that will never change is that you will always be my first love.


I like this....first love is sometimes the best love....
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Reply #164 posted 10/24/07 10:27am

obsessed

Girdle said:


Inspired by a text message and an Edward Hopper painting.


Night Hawk


Waited in a coffee shop
2 a.m., the rain won't stop
to let me leave

Surrounded by the references
to Hopper and it's never been
so clear to me

It was too wrong to turn out right
It was too right to see the wrong
We were afraid to say goodbye
and let the night hawk fly

Wrapped in your fluorescent light
colder than a New York night
I miss the moon

Your heart has got the best of mine
took down all your exit signs
[still] I'm leaving soon

It was too wrong to turn out right
It was too right to see the wrong
We were afraid to say goodbye
and let the night hawk fly


I love Edward Hopper paintings...
especially this one...
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Reply #165 posted 10/24/07 12:47pm

obsessed

EmbattledWarrior said:

obsessed said:



Thanks for being so open about that...it helps to understand you, if only a bit better...you're a complex person.

Then I guess I'm insane and don't know shit, because I like a lot of your stuff... lol

I really hope you'll continue to do what you do, Embattledwarrior, because you have a rare gift whether you know it or not.

I'm complex and simple , perfect paradox
i do torment myself mentally
thnx for being a reader tho


I'll always be a reader, whether you like it or not...so there.....lol
We're perhaps all paradoxes.....simple in some ways, complex in others.
I guess what it boils down to is that we're just human, afterall.
"Torment" is such a strong word though....the image of the word even stronger.

Anyway, (((hugs))) to you, cuz I feel like you could use some right now..

And now it's back to poetry...that is, when I come up with some... lol
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Reply #166 posted 10/24/07 9:31pm

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obsessed said:

Girdle said:


Inspired by a text message and an Edward Hopper painting.


Night Hawk


Waited in a coffee shop
2 a.m., the rain won't stop
to let me leave
Surrounded by the references
to Hopper and it's never been
so clear to me

It was too wrong to turn out right
It was too right to see the wrong
We were afraid to say goodbye
and let the night hawk fly

Wrapped in your fluorescent light
colder than a New York night
I miss the moon

Your heart has got the best of mine
took down all your exit signs
[still] I'm leaving soon

It was too wrong to turn out right
It was too right to see the wrong
We were afraid to say goodbye
and let the night hawk fly


I love Edward Hopper paintings...
especially this one...

I've seen so many Hoppers, since childhood, and though I like his work, I never really connected. They never spoke to me.
It was both "Night Hawk" and "Automat", that came to mind, yesterday...and I got them. I was even a tiny bit concerned about that. I think if I got out more, that would cure that.
I am not my Girdle.
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Reply #167 posted 10/24/07 9:38pm

Girdle

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obsessed said:

CrazySexy said:

Never have I wanted something so bad
The way I wanted you
You were my everything

How can I pretend like I didnt know you
Let alone love you
You were my world

Everywhere I go I hear you
Your sweet tone
You were my teacher

Exterior so cool and calm
But eyes filled with sorrow
Nobody notices

I sit here looking at you
And go along with your charade

Just reminds me of all the lies you said

You hear my pain aloud and the yells of my heart
Yet you keep your pain and yelling heart on the inside.

You may not be my everything or my world or my teacher anymore
But the one thing that will never change is that you will always be my first love.


I like this....first love is sometimes the best love....
I like this one too. Hard to tell if it's about love, a crush or an almost love.
It probably doesn't matter. At that point, it's all the same.
I am not my Girdle.
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Reply #168 posted 10/25/07 8:57am

obsessed

Girdle said:

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I love Edward Hopper paintings...
especially this one...

I've seen so many Hoppers, since childhood, and though I like his work, I never really connected. They never spoke to me.
It was both "Night Hawk" and "Automat", that came to mind, yesterday...and I got them. I was even a tiny bit concerned about that. I think if I got out more, that would cure that.


If you got out more... lol

As for Automat, I can easily relate to that one...coffee cup in hand,
deep in thought...now maybe an artwork thread would be in order...not our own,
but other artists...go for it!
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Reply #169 posted 10/25/07 9:04am

tony23k

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CrazySexy said:

Never have I wanted something so bad
The way I wanted you
You were my everything

How can I pretend like I didnt know you
Let alone love you
You were my world

Everywhere I go I hear you
Your sweet tone
You were my teacher

Exterior so cool and calm
But eyes filled with sorrow
Nobody notices

I sit here looking at you
And go along with your charade

Just reminds me of all the lies you said

You hear my pain aloud and the yells of my heart
Yet you keep your pain and yelling heart on the inside.

You may not be my everything or my world or my teacher anymore
But the one thing that will never change is that you will always be my first love.
nice poem
cool
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Reply #170 posted 10/25/07 9:12am

tony23k

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Girdle said:


Inspired by a text message and an Edward Hopper painting.


Night Hawk


Waited in a coffee shop
2 a.m., the rain won't stop
to let me leave

Surrounded by the references
to Hopper and it's never been
so clear to me

It was too wrong to turn out right
It was too right to see the wrong
We were afraid to say goodbye
and let the night hawk fly

Wrapped in your fluorescent light
colder than a New York night
I miss the moon

Your heart has got the best of mine
took down all your exit signs
[still] I'm leaving soon

It was too wrong to turn out right
It was too right to see the wrong
We were afraid to say goodbye
and let the night hawk fly


"took down all your exit signs"...
I love this line. cool

cool painting,
I've seen several versions of it too. wink
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Reply #171 posted 10/25/07 9:50am

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obsessed said:

Girdle said:


I've seen so many Hoppers, since childhood, and though I like his work, I never really connected. They never spoke to me.
It was both "Night Hawk" and "Automat", that came to mind, yesterday...and I got them. I was even a tiny bit concerned about that. I think if I got out more, that would cure that.


If you got out more... lol

As for Automat, I can easily relate to that one...coffee cup in hand,
deep in thought...now maybe an artwork thread would be in order...not our own,
but other artists...go for it!


OK, I know you don't like editing, so this is just for you! (Actually I'll let
ya in on a secret..tony23k doesn't like it either) lol

Anyway, I felt like adding the picture, so we all get a better flavor...

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Reply #172 posted 10/25/07 9:51am

Girdle

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obsessed said:

Girdle said:


I've seen so many Hoppers, since childhood, and though I like his work, I never really connected. They never spoke to me.
It was both "Night Hawk" and "Automat", that came to mind, yesterday...and I got them. I was even a tiny bit concerned about that. I think if I got out more, that would cure that.


If you got out more... lol

As for Automat, I can easily relate to that one...coffee cup in hand,
deep in thought...now maybe an artwork thread would be in order...not our own,
but other artists...go for it!
But so much of his work is about loneliness and isolation, that when you "get it", or connect, you have to wonder. I like being a spectator of...I don't want to see myself in it. His work always gave me a Twilight Zone feeling. You know how you love to watch but seldom want to enter?

Thanks, Tony.
I am not my Girdle.
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Reply #173 posted 10/25/07 9:56am

Girdle

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obsessed said:

obsessed said:



If you got out more... lol

As for Automat, I can easily relate to that one...coffee cup in hand,
deep in thought...now maybe an artwork thread would be in order...not our own,
but other artists...go for it!


OK, I know you don't like editing, so this is just for you! (Actually I'll let
ya in on a secret..tony23k doesn't like it either) lol


Anyway, I felt like adding the picture, so we all get a better flavor...


What did I miss?
I am not my Girdle.
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Reply #174 posted 10/25/07 10:07am

obsessed

Girdle said:

obsessed said:



If you got out more... lol

As for Automat, I can easily relate to that one...coffee cup in hand,
deep in thought...now maybe an artwork thread would be in order...not our own,
but other artists...go for it!
But so much of his work is about loneliness and isolation, that when you "get it", or connect, you have to wonder. I like being a spectator of...I don't want to see myself in it. His work always gave me a Twilight Zone feeling. You know how you love to watch but seldom want to enter?

Thanks, Tony.




I don't find this particular painting at all isolating.....to me it celebrates
precious time to oneself to contemplate....nothing isolating about that...I
love to go out to coffee shops and even restaurants by myself. I get alot of
my thinking done in those situations, and in the meantime you get to enjoy
food and drink and people-watching, which really is a favorite pastime of mine.

Now then, where is that thread?? lol
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Reply #175 posted 10/25/07 10:12am

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obsessed said:

Girdle said:

But so much of his work is about loneliness and isolation, that when you "get it", or connect, you have to wonder. I like being a spectator of...I don't want to see myself in it. His work always gave me a Twilight Zone feeling. You know how you love to watch but seldom want to enter?

Thanks, Tony.




I don't find this particular painting at all isolating.....to me it celebrates
precious time to oneself to contemplate....nothing isolating about that...I
love to go out to coffee shops and even restaurants by myself. I get alot of
my thinking done in those situations, and in the meantime you get to enjoy
food and drink and people-watching, which really is a favorite pastime of mine.

Now then, where is that thread?? lol
oh, right. We're taking over the Korner again.
I am not my Girdle.
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Reply #176 posted 10/25/07 10:22am

obsessed

Girdle said:

obsessed said:





I don't find this particular painting at all isolating.....to me it celebrates
precious time to oneself to contemplate....nothing isolating about that...I
love to go out to coffee shops and even restaurants by myself. I get alot of
my thinking done in those situations, and in the meantime you get to enjoy
food and drink and people-watching, which really is a favorite pastime of mine.

Now then, where is that thread?? lol
oh, right. We're taking over the Korner again.


In reality, that doesn't bother me in the slightest... cool
It's all about communicating with one another, no matter if it is the
so-called "wrong" thread....there just is no right or wrong where that's
concerned.
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Reply #177 posted 10/25/07 10:26am

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obsessed said:

Girdle said:

oh, right. We're taking over the Korner again.


In reality, that doesn't bother me in the slightest... cool
It's all about communicating with one another, no matter if it is the
so-called "wrong" thread....there just is no right or wrong where that's
concerned.
I wasn't being sarcastic. We were taking over the thread.
I moved it over.
I am not my Girdle.
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Reply #178 posted 10/25/07 10:37am

obsessed

Girdle said:

obsessed said:



In reality, that doesn't bother me in the slightest... cool
It's all about communicating with one another, no matter if it is the
so-called "wrong" thread....there just is no right or wrong where that's
concerned.
I wasn't being sarcastic. We were taking over the thread.
I moved it over.


I see that....and you also put "words in my mouth"! lol
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Reply #179 posted 10/25/07 10:44am

tony23k

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obsessed said:

obsessed said:



If you got out more... lol

As for Automat, I can easily relate to that one...coffee cup in hand,
deep in thought...now maybe an artwork thread would be in order...not our own,
but other artists...go for it!


OK, I know you don't like editing, so this is just for you! (Actually I'll let
ya in on a secret..tony23k doesn't like it either) lol

Anyway, I felt like adding the picture, so we all get a better flavor...


lol lol
that's not going to be a thread lol




edits mad

lol
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