Copyrights 2006

THE DEFEAT
( 11-14-2006)


A harsh struggle 4 the truth
The lie, become fierce, shows her teeth like a rabid dog
Sneaky like a prostitute seducing a man she tries 2 flatter me.
She wounds but she can’t kill
The warrior is tired, exhausted
Laid down on the floor, weak, bleeding
His face is streaked with bitter tears
Injuries by the merciless blade on his arms
He fought 4 the good fight tight-lipped
He should b proud of himself but there is death in his heart
He discovered that all he was believing is just a pretence,
a pitiless deception
It seems that God can’t either read our hearts nor seeing our deeds.
The fighter cries 2 heaven:
"Why have I been punished??? I DID THE RIGHT THING!!!"
He implores the Father 2 die hoping 2 find peace and rest 4 his soul
However he knows that life is the greatest gift
We can’t always win,
Losing a battle doesn’t mean having loose the war.
The wisest thing 2 do is collecting energy 4 pursuing the hard pilgrimage of existence
Only at the end of the journey we will get the sword as reward
Other trials, other fights r waiting 4 the warrior
So he gets up limping and aching
His eyes aren’t able 2 cry anymore
A voice is whispering 2 him:
"Don’t give up.. maybe there is still some little fire burning among the ashes of ur heart"...

I feel like this has a Common "vibe" going on. u can put it to one of his beats

nice

I heard about Common but I never listened 2 his music....

Thanx 4 the attention

Lilith said:

email me and we can chat I'ma a poet as well

Lilith said:

This is intense. I like it.

This is intense. I like it