Britney's New Tune Makes Its Debut
Posted Aug 23rd 2007 1:00PM by Popeater Staff


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Britney Spears' musical return has long been anticipated and, due to her recent behavior, highly speculated. But fans can rest their pretty little heads. It seems Ms. Spears isn't entirely putting them on.

On Thursday morning, a supposed new demo of the singer's appeared online -- a melancholy ballad about being deserted by her man. "Every day, I'm in a daze/Looking for that someone," Spears sings. "And every day, I sit and kneel and pray/Oh, sweet love, can I get some?"

It ain't Shakespeare, but it's a start.

Listen to Britney Spears' new song

Every day, I'm in a daze
Looking for that someone
And every day, I sit and kneel and pray
Oh, sweet love, can I get some?
So why do you desert me, baby boy?
I need your love right now!
And if you desert me, baby boy
Don't you leave me in your crowd

Talking
Hey baby, what time you gonna get home?
Oh, really?
[Sigh]
Alright, well, I'll see you later, then
Oh, wait
Would you mind getting some...
Yeah, when you come home
Yeah, that's it
I love you too
Bye

[Singing again]
Someday when you see my face
You will think that you have won
And someday when it's all away
Our love just begun
So why did you desert me, baby boy?
I thought that you, you were the one
So if you preferred the other one
She won't bring you the sun(son)

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THAT,S BEWTIFUL LYRIX

not bad at all

But i hope this isn't the actual release

The instrumentation is too sparse imo

haha i like it. its not bad

Dewrede said:

agreed. not a strong 1st single at all.

That song is pure and utter bullshit. Homegirl was off key a few times, the lyrics are atrocious, the melody is nowhere to be found and her voice is shit, which it has always been. Somebody needs to tell that Trailer Park Trash Ho to go back to Louisiana and learn how to be a mother to her children. Music should be nowhere in the equation. I hope she doesn't have that comeback at all. Fuck Shitney Spears!

purplecam said:

did you leave anything out?

yes , she was off key a few times but apart from that i actually like her singing here

her voice isn't bad at all

you're too harsh on her
[Edited 8/26/07 16:37pm]

purplecam said:

purplecam said:

If u dont like her y u post? I dont post on people I dont like.

paisleypark4 said:

I gave the song a chance and it sucked ass. Even if I can't stand the person, I'll see what's up. Shame on you for abusing a tomato like.

Christopher said:

paisleypark4 said:

One more thing. For all the people who go up to the Prince: Music and More section and rip that mofo to shreads and its ok but I can't come up for someone in a different section and do the same thing? My thing is this, What's good for the goose is good for the gander.

Here is what someone named "kevinbgood" on AOL thought the lyrics should have been:

Everyday I'm in a daze
from smoking Jamacan purple haze
I kneel on the floor
of my doublewide with a two by four
Why did'nt you come back boy ?
With the Cheetoes I asked you for ?
I thought you were the one
I could trust to
have some fun
and not rat on me
to TMZ
I love you too
My NASCAR buggy boo

First thought is that it's not yet finished. But perhaps they decided to keep it raw and in your face...warts and all...like her life, these days. That kind of makes it nice. Too much polish and it might not have rung true.

I like it alright. I like her voice. Not the off parts, but they're so off that you have to wonder if they intentionally left those there.

The jewelry box thing is a bit annoying, though.

"...with a drum machine that barely taps" (c) Vainandy

Cinnie said:

I love that quote. The drum is annoying(and lopsided) too. It can't be finished.

It sounds like she's trying to sing. Doesn't sound good though


Smooches;)

It sounds like she recorded it at one of those "Make Your Own Track" booths they have at tourist traps.

Really, really, trainwreck bad.
[Edited 8/26/07 19:33pm]

Funny how people bitched about her success when she was on top, saying how "untalented" she is. Yet now that she's in the dumps, everyone seems to want her to make a comeback. Interesting. I never thought of her to be very talented as a singer, yet I've always thought she was a good dancer and had a good ear for producers, which is why alot of her singles have become memorable while other more talented artists in her genre make not so memorable songs

Anyway, I heard a bit of the song. Not great, but not bad either. I like how it's kinda raw. As for her singing, well..it's Britney. What can you say? I'll give her credit though..she does convey some great emotion in it.

It would be a nice album track if polished up, but as a single..don't think it would work.

purplecam said:

Yeah a brick goes to those people. I dont get it...i stood the tests of time and protected Prince like a cousin when he was going through the motions and people (school kids) laughed at me 4 liking Prince in the 91-99 hey day, that's y I can't say anything bad but give love 2 the man.

Im glad Prince.org every1 can say what they want though. But I have the same right to counter-act. Briteny has made some bland songs and some I cant stand, but it wont give me a reason to hate. Hell I have her Greatest Hits, and dammit "When Your Eyes Say It" written by Diane Warren was a very nice track

anon said:

Sweetie, this is clearly a first take demo

All I have to say is, well loooka-there! Miss Britney is tryin' to riff and run alll over the place ... and my assessment...

Ummm...No, girl. Just NO

it sounds like a demo..but I clearly hear the autotune kicking in at different parts of the verse vocals...she's not a great singer by any stretch of the imagination..and the song is pretty BLAH.... ..But hey..she's a packaged pop star going through a rough patch...be strong brit !

paisleypark4 said:

Absolutely, we can agree to disagree and be civil about it.

it's not her

it definitely is

oh my god, people actually like this craptastic tune?

those lyrics are incoherent and quite embarrassing. the singing sounds a little better than normal but also very affected like she's trying to hard in some spots. thats a definite throw-away. the track is kinda cool tho. with different lyrics it could be an ok album song. but yea...those lyrics are absolutely devoid of intelligence.

This song would sound so much better if another singer did this.

She cannot sing....I couldn't help but laugh out loud anytime she attempted a vocal run. No Britney, you don't have it.