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Thread started 06/28/09 7:00pm

Tame

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A Poem I wrote 4 Prince Last Night.

This is 4 Prince...and I thought I'd share it with U.




I’ve been on hold

Let me look into your eyes
As we close down the night
It won’t be long till morning comes,
And sleep will hold us side by side.
See the Horizon
That rests on my mind
A long distance call is tight on the line
Can U hear, “Hello” By ELO?

I’ve been on hold…
Holding the line.
My heart knew someday
I’d be looking in your eyes
It’s been a long time
You own my tears…
Now I’m all hung-up on
Holding you near
Holding you dear

Let me kiss your lips
There is an orchard in my heart
Let me give you just a sip
Of the wine I’ve made
While we have been so far apart
Taste the cherry grove,
And the blackberries from the vine
Peaches, Lemons, and the sweetest lime.
Baby can U hear, “Hello,” By ELO

I’ve been on hold…
Holding the line. ~T
"The Lion Sleeps Tonight...
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Reply #1 posted 06/28/09 7:46pm

peter430044

Beautiful!

I especially like the part:

It won’t be long till morning comes,
And sleep will hold us side by side.
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Reply #2 posted 06/28/09 8:01pm

Tame

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Thank U peter. cool
"The Lion Sleeps Tonight...
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Reply #3 posted 06/28/09 8:26pm

Alej

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Awful.

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Reply #4 posted 06/28/09 8:27pm

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cream.
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Reply #5 posted 06/28/09 8:32pm

Alej

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InsatiableCream said:



@ that poem
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Reply #6 posted 06/29/09 8:29am

Imago

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Reply #7 posted 06/29/09 8:34am

Serena

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Prince, beef up your security, please?!?
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Reply #8 posted 06/29/09 8:48am

BriaVelveeta

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Reply #9 posted 06/29/09 8:56am

nyse

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not bad...
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Reply #10 posted 06/29/09 10:03am

kimrachell

Tame said:

This is 4 Prince...and I thought I'd share it with U.




I’ve been on hold

Let me look into your eyes
As we close down the night
It won’t be long till morning comes,
And sleep will hold us side by side.
See the Horizon
That rests on my mind
A long distance call is tight on the line
Can U hear, “Hello” By ELO?

I’ve been on hold…
Holding the line.
My heart knew someday
I’d be looking in your eyes
It’s been a long time
You own my tears…
Now I’m all hung-up on
Holding you near
Holding you dear

Let me kiss your lips
There is an orchard in my heart
Let me give you just a sip
Of the wine I’ve made
While we have been so far apart
Taste the cherry grove,
And the blackberries from the vine
Peaches, Lemons, and the sweetest lime.
Baby can U hear, “Hello,” By ELO

I’ve been on hold…
Holding the line. ~T



it's nice that you like to write poetry....but it's scary that you're so consumed with prince.....it would be better for you to feel this way about a man you actually know and are with, not a stranger! neutral
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Reply #11 posted 06/29/09 1:16pm

mzkqueen03

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...tame good poem..
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..the ability to concentrate and use your time well is EVERYTHING if u want TO SUCCEED in business or almost ANYWHERE ELSE FOR THAT MATTER..
..lee iacocca..
...mzseybaby sexy
..She's Just A Baby..but she's my lady..my loveR..my only friend!..true love that will last!..PEOPLE DON'T UNDERSTAND..WHAT SHE SEES IN AN OLDER MAN..they never stop 2 think that maybe i'm what she's looking 4..THEY NEVER TAKE THE TIME..2 look in her mind
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Reply #12 posted 06/29/09 4:45pm

DieselsDen

Goofy.
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Reply #13 posted 06/29/09 4:53pm

rudedog

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Predictable, disturbingly obsessive, 8th grade language used, i have to go with Simon Cowell and say, 'The best part of it was when it ended'.

Sorry, start reading some good poetry and/or listen to music with great lyrics. Paul Simon, Dave Mustaine, Living Colour, Bob Dylan, Bruce Springsteen, Paul McCartney, that's a start.

This sounds like KISS lyrics.
"The voter is less important than the man who provides money to the candidate," - Former Supreme Court Justice John Paul Stevens
Rudedog no no no!
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Reply #14 posted 06/29/09 5:51pm

Tame

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U guys are hysterical. cool

Did U expect "Shakespeare," to come out of me in 5 minutes? cool
"The Lion Sleeps Tonight...
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Reply #15 posted 06/29/09 5:55pm

Tame

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Everytime I just start jotting things down...It's all thought on Prince, so even if a poem isn't all that great, it can just say in general that U are thinking of someone. cool
"The Lion Sleeps Tonight...
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Reply #16 posted 06/29/09 5:56pm

Tame

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I'll go work on another one...get back 2 ya when it's done. cool
"The Lion Sleeps Tonight...
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Reply #17 posted 06/29/09 6:37pm

Imago

Tame said:

I'll go work on another one...get back 2 ya when it's done. cool



Post it here: http://prince.org/delete_account.html

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Reply #18 posted 06/29/09 6:58pm

Tame

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To Love A Prince

To Love a Prince on cloud or rain guitar
Comes sun within a room inside your heart
To hear his name is golden Royalty
To hear him play is simple pleasantry

To Love a Prince in silken Purple suit
That’s lined with Pirate mind and Purple loot
We sing along the walk on down the plank
He shares his laughter docking at the bank

To Love a Prince in Yellow lacey pants
Like seamstress went to work with fancy lance
Will keep you on your guard and on your toes
To have the chance at match to steal the dance

To Love a Prince is treasure you can bet
He’s an undercover gem in Black Sweat.~T

razz
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Reply #19 posted 06/29/09 7:16pm

mzspongebob

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Alej said:

InsatiableCream said:



@ that poem

omg u guys kill me haha damn lmao
welp
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Reply #20 posted 06/29/09 7:31pm

Alej

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mzspongebob said:

Alej said:



@ that poem

omg u guys kill me haha damn lmao


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Reply #21 posted 06/29/09 7:34pm

Alej

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Tame said:

To Love A Prince

To Love a Prince on cloud or rain guitar
Comes sun within a room inside your heart
To hear his name is golden Royalty
To hear him play is simple pleasantry

To Love a Prince in silken Purple suit
That’s lined with Pirate mind and Purple loot
We sing along the walk on down the plank
He shares his laughter docking at the bank

To Love a Prince in Yellow lacey pants
Like seamstress went to work with fancy lance
Will keep you on your guard and on your toes
To have the chance at match to steal the dance

To Love a Prince is treasure you can bet
He’s an undercover gem in Black Sweat.~T

razz


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Reply #22 posted 06/29/09 7:36pm

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Tame said:

To Love A Prince

To Love a Prince on cloud or rain guitar
Comes sun within a room inside your heart
To hear his name is golden Royalty
To hear him play is simple pleasantry

To Love a Prince in silken Purple suit
That’s lined with Pirate mind and Purple loot
We sing along the walk on down the plank
He shares his laughter docking at the bank

To Love a Prince in Yellow lacey pants
Like seamstress went to work with fancy lance
Will keep you on your guard and on your toes
To have the chance at match to steal the dance

To Love a Prince is treasure you can bet
He’s an undercover gem in Black Sweat.~T

razz


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Reply #23 posted 06/29/09 8:12pm

spicecutie17

Tame said:

This is 4 Prince...and I thought I'd share it with U.




I’ve been on hold

Let me look into your eyes
As we close down the night
It won’t be long till morning comes,
And sleep will hold us side by side.
See the Horizon
That rests on my mind
A long distance call is tight on the line
Can U hear, “Hello” By ELO?

I’ve been on hold…
Holding the line.
My heart knew someday
I’d be looking in your eyes
It’s been a long time
You own my tears…
Now I’m all hung-up on
Holding you near
Holding you dear

Let me kiss your lips
There is an orchard in my heart
Let me give you just a sip
Of the wine I’ve made
While we have been so far apart
Taste the cherry grove,
And the blackberries from the vine
Peaches, Lemons, and the sweetest lime.
Baby can U hear, “Hello,” By ELO

I’ve been on hold…
Holding the line. ~T


Wow! Beautiful!
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Reply #24 posted 06/29/09 8:23pm

Imago

Tame said:

To Love A Prince

To Love a Prince on cloud or rain guitar
Comes sun within a room inside your heart
To hear his name is golden Royalty
To hear him play is simple pleasantry

To Love a Prince in silken Purple suit
That’s lined with Pirate mind and Purple loot
We sing along the walk on down the plank
He shares his laughter docking at the bank

To Love a Prince in Yellow lacey pants
Like seamstress went to work with fancy lance
Will keep you on your guard and on your toes
To have the chance at match to steal the dance

To Love a Prince is treasure you can bet
He’s an undercover gem in Black Sweat.~T

razz

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Reply #25 posted 06/29/09 8:40pm

NastradumasKid

This poem remains me of "Jack U Off" "Possessed" "Lady Cab Driver" with a mix of "Graffiti Bridge" confused .....Damn it I just want to jack off to this poem. jerkoff
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Reply #26 posted 06/29/09 8:44pm

NastradumasKid

Tame said:

This is 4 Prince...and I thought I'd share it with U.




I’ve been on hold

Let me look into your eyes
As we close down the night
It won’t be long till morning comes,
And sleep will hold us side by side.
See the Horizon
That rests on my mind
A long distance call is tight on the line
Can U hear, “Hello” By ELO?

I’ve been on hold…
Holding the line.
My heart knew someday
I’d be looking in your eyes
It’s been a long time
You own my tears…
Now I’m all hung-up on
Holding you near
Holding you dear

Let me kiss your lips
There is an orchard in my heart
Let me give you just a sip
Of the wine I’ve made
While we have been so far apart
Taste the cherry grove,
And the blackberries from the vine
Peaches, Lemons, and the sweetest lime.
Baby can U hear, “Hello,” By ELO

I’ve been on hold…
Holding the line. ~T



BTW, if you were a man I would seriously hit that ass every nite boff stoned
err lick
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Reply #27 posted 06/29/09 11:05pm

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Reply #28 posted 06/29/09 11:48pm

DieselsDen

Jeezus. These poems are an abuse of the right to Freedom Of Speech.
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Reply #29 posted 06/30/09 12:20am

benjaminira

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Tame, don't listen to these idiots...never let anyone tell U that your expression of your feelings is/are wrong! If I were Prince...I'd totally be flattered!
If it breaks when it bends, U better not put it in!
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