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Reply #180 posted 07/19/09 10:37am

Dayclear



I looked for Him in holy halls,
In great cathedrals fair
But in Prince's bright eyes of Love
I looked and found Him there.
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Reply #181 posted 07/19/09 12:33pm

Vendetta1

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I looked for Him in holy halls,
In great cathedrals fair
But in Prince's bright eyes of Love
I looked and found Him there.
I think this one is scarier than all the rest.
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Reply #182 posted 07/19/09 1:07pm

errant

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how the fuck did i get in here?
"does my cock look fat in these jeans?"
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Reply #183 posted 07/19/09 1:08pm

Nikademus

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rudedog said:

Vendetta1 said:

You want respect on your threads but you can insult gay people and call people assholes?

Fuck you.


Yeah, like this thread has turned into something COMPLETELY different now. I guess we see Tame's TRUE COLORS. The brightest is HOMOPHOBIA. Maybe if she got a lil' tongue action from one lovely lady, she'd change her mind. Any volunteers? smile I'll film it of course!
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Reply #184 posted 07/19/09 1:09pm

Vendetta1

Nikademus said:

rudedog said:



Yeah, like this thread has turned into something COMPLETELY different now. I guess we see Tame's TRUE COLORS. The brightest is HOMOPHOBIA. Maybe if she got a lil' tongue action from one lovely lady, she'd change her mind. Any volunteers? smile I'll film it of course!
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I'd rather suck a dick shake
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Reply #185 posted 07/19/09 5:33pm

Tame

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Dayclear said:



I looked for Him in holy halls,
In great cathedrals fair
But in Prince's bright eyes of Love
I looked and found Him there.


This is pretty. cool
"The Lion Sleeps Tonight...
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Reply #186 posted 07/19/09 7:25pm

Nikademus

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errant said:

how the fuck did i get in here?


It's like a black hole, it just sucks you in.
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Reply #187 posted 07/19/09 7:30pm

Vendetta1

Tame said:

Vendetta1 said:

My tongue would shrivel anywhere near her.


Let it shrivel now... razz
As soon as your homophobia spewing fingers do.
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Reply #188 posted 07/19/09 9:11pm

kimrachell

Tame said:

Well...although some of U have treated me with such cruelty...I will offer another poem for your reading pleasure. razz

This Masterpiece is called..."Skyward." cool

Skyward

Sound
Deep down
In the root of your soul
Surrounded
By silence
Searching for reason
To escape
On a limb
Of thought
Reaching to be
A wing
Of a tree
Flowing
Skyward.

Tamera

cool


you should post your poems in the artists forum.
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Reply #189 posted 07/19/09 11:24pm

Nikademus

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kimrachell said:

Tame said:

Well...although some of U have treated me with such cruelty...I will offer another poem for your reading pleasure. razz

This Masterpiece is called..."Skyward." cool

Skyward

Sound
Deep down
In the root of your soul
Surrounded
By silence
Searching for reason
To escape
On a limb
Of thought
Reaching to be
A wing
Of a tree
Flowing
Skyward.

Tamera

cool


you should post your poems in the artists forum.



She should nod









Not as many people go there lurking
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Reply #190 posted 07/19/09 11:34pm

NastradumasKid

Nikademus said:

kimrachell said:



you should post your poems in the artists forum.



She should nod


falloff Man Nika, you're funny.






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Reply #191 posted 07/20/09 12:02am

Nikademus

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NastradumasKid said:

Nikademus said:




She should nod


falloff Man Nika, you're funny.






Not as many people go there lurking



Thank you, thank you...I'll be here all week batting eyes


Please, try the veal and remember to tip your waitress thumbs up!
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Reply #192 posted 07/27/09 8:24pm

pplrain

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Where is Tame? Is she in Minneapolis?
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Reply #193 posted 08/14/09 3:53pm

kewlschool

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Tame said:



Skyward

Sound
Deep down
In the root of your soul
Surrounded
By silence
Searching for reason
To escape
On a limb
Of thought
Reaching to be
A wing
Of a tree
Flowing
Skyward.

Tamera

cool

I like this poem. Nice job. As to the rest of this highly charged thread--Chill people. Find love for one another.
peace
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Reply #194 posted 08/14/09 5:06pm

PurpleDiamond2
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Damn some people on this org are nutso
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Reply #195 posted 08/14/09 5:10pm

JesusFreak

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i wonder just how many stalkers there are on this forum
"Not to sound cosmic, but I've made plans for the next 3,000 years," he says. "Before, it was only three days at a time."
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Reply #196 posted 08/14/09 5:41pm

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JesusFreak said:

i wonder just how many stalkers there are on this forum


r stalkers that stupid???
lol
Help others get ahead. You will always stand
taller with someone else on your shoulders.
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Reply #197 posted 08/14/09 6:25pm

SCARLETTPUZY

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barf
Marry me 2day and 2night we'll make love until the world stops turning
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Reply #198 posted 08/14/09 10:52pm

Pole

Tame said:

This is 4 Prince...and I thought I'd share it with U.




I’ve been on hold

Let me look into your eyes
As we close down the night
It won’t be long till morning comes,
And sleep will hold us side by side.
See the Horizon
That rests on my mind
A long distance call is tight on the line
Can U hear, “Hello” By ELO?

I’ve been on hold…
Holding the line.
My heart knew someday
I’d be looking in your eyes
It’s been a long time
You own my tears…
Now I’m all hung-up on
Holding you near
Holding you dear

Let me kiss your lips
There is an orchard in my heart
Let me give you just a sip
Of the wine I’ve made
While we have been so far apart
Taste the cherry grove,
And the blackberries from the vine
Peaches, Lemons, and the sweetest lime.
Baby can U hear, “Hello,” By ELO

I’ve been on hold…
Holding the line. ~T


fallinluv you are my spiritual flavor Roadrunner fallinluv
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Reply #199 posted 08/17/09 12:17pm

Tame

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I happen to be at a friends...Lightning hit something outside of my house and took out my phones as well as short my computer which is now in the shop. I hope to get it back in a week or so. Here is another poem. It doesn't have to be great, it just is what it is.

HUSH

HUSH
He said
The night is here
This is a soft bedspread
The moon peeks lightly through the sheers
It is time to undress down to the tears

Hold me
My eyes allured
I was without a word
Loneliness was finding a cure
Our love would spend forever to endure

Listen
Let's be easy
My patience has grown weak
This meeting has been lingering
There are days in store for the reasoning

Quiet
On the pillow
Our sleep was nowhere near
Out in the yard the tree was still
2gether we stared at the tall willow


This is an example of a poem that I will probably revise at some point. This particular style follows a rule that I created. It is called a "Stair Style." There are 4 flights. Each flight follows a syllabic rule of "2, 4, 6, 8, 10" I have not yet mastered my own idea. cool As U can gather, the 3rd stair does not follow a rhyme scheme, but it can.
[Edited 8/17/09 12:18pm]
"The Lion Sleeps Tonight...
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Reply #200 posted 08/17/09 12:27pm

Tame

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Looking back over some of the talk in here from 3 weeks ago...I just hope you guys laugh at it like I do.

The one thing that You realize in this life is without owning anything, without wearing anything, with good health or poor health, your spirit or your heart is going to go it's own way. I Love Prince and if being alone for the rest of my life is second to being married to Prince...I'll still be happy not settling for less anymore. I had two failed marriages...I'm going for Bliss or Lonely. cool
"The Lion Sleeps Tonight...
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Reply #201 posted 08/17/09 1:15pm

porfyrivrohi

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Nice poems Tame! wink Thanks for sharing!
I am but mad north-northwest
when the wind is southerly I know a hawk from a handsaw
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Reply #202 posted 08/17/09 2:08pm

dartluv5

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Tame said:[quote]

ShadeoViolet said:

Tame::

Please, in all seriousness, consider what you are saying.

Prince does not know you. Furthermore, he will likely be rather disturbed that someone loves him when they themselves have not even spent one night together with him.

Tame, even if you DO sincerely love him, it will always....ALWAYS...remain unrequited.

Heck, there are plenty of loving and caring guys looking for a partner..Probably right around your area too. smile

Keep your thoughts occupied with reality.

2 hearts can come 2gether
Share a glass of wine
And share a smile within their eyes
yet all the while
A storm is brewing
On the Horizon
They become strangers
That shared some tender nights
And kept on walking down the road
Of mystery in their own story book lives.
2 hearts can sit within
An old oak tree
The time it took to engrave their love
Can be so sweet
Yet Suzy loving Jimmy
Was not 4ever meant to be
The love didn't live
As long as the tree
2 hearts can come 2gether
And weather the thunder
Swaying in perfect time
And destiny steps in
And their names are written
On the highest vine
A Divine Lover's Rhyme.~T


P.S. Prince does cover "Crimson&Clover."

No He doesn't hardly know her, but he thinks he could love her. cool

U can't hurt my feelings...I've been through too much for a comment on a screen to bother me. cool
[Edited 7/4/09 13:20pm]


i enjoy your posts Tame cool
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Reply #203 posted 08/23/09 8:33am

Tame

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Thanx U guyz...

It is not very decent to introduce something as "Not very good," however since this is Prince related I will share this too.

I practice sometimes, and this is an example...I was merely dealing with the syllables and the rhyme...this only took about 15 minutes to write. All that I can say is that I believe given the right push and attention, it is a great exercise for a college poetry class. Not as difficult as a Sonnet or Villanelle, but harder than a Haiku. cool

Prince

A man
With a guitar
A sweet song in his heart
A very famous superstar
Been know to own a few little red cars

Is sharp
Just the right style
Some kind of New York mile
He'll call U don't bother to dial
It can cost U a fortune to reach his smile

In tune
Hits the right note
Hippiez know he rocks the boat
His voice will keep your heart afloat
I'd cry the day they'd say that's all he wrote

A king
With royal mane
Prince can drive me insane
All 4 lingere in the rain
I will wait on this purple hurricane~T

A great English teacher taught me when it comes to self criticism, sometimes we can just say...."It just is what it is." cool
"The Lion Sleeps Tonight...
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Reply #204 posted 08/23/09 8:50am

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Not a poem....A song by Extreme...I just love the lyrics.....love is so many different things.....Prince is very very human...I feel he can also be considered "love". I felt it at my first Prince concert....We are all in his heart. Hang in there Tame. heart

More Than Words.....

heart
[Edited 8/23/09 9:07am]
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taller with someone else on your shoulders.
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Reply #205 posted 08/24/09 7:53am

crybaby745

I love the poem very much*
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Reply #206 posted 08/24/09 8:01am

crybaby745

I love the poem you wrote very much*
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Reply #207 posted 08/24/09 5:49pm

Tame

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crybaby745 said:

I love the poem you wrote very much*



Thank You...I appreciate that. I have to believe in my heart that when love moves you to be creative that there is an intimacy between the writer and the reader's that are touched by the piece. cool
"The Lion Sleeps Tonight...
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Reply #208 posted 08/24/09 5:51pm

Tame

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Here's a pretty poem. Welcom to the dawn...


Dawn

Sitting
In the twilight
Waiting on the moonrise
As a crescent it will fly by
Like the stars that chase the daylight
Dreaming
Of the morning
Swaying on the night swing
Rocking with a golden ring
With sherbet sky and whipped cream
Sleeping
Comes to my room
The sun is coming so soon
To paint my eyes with sweet perfume
Like rosy shades in every hue. ~T
"The Lion Sleeps Tonight...
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Reply #209 posted 08/25/09 11:07am

BenaimanBawkah

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Tame said:

Looking back over some of the talk in here from 3 weeks ago...I just hope you guys laugh at it like I do.

The one thing that You realize in this life is without owning anything, without wearing anything, with good health or poor health, your spirit or your heart is going to go it's own way. I Love Prince and if being alone for the rest of my life is second to being married to Prince...I'll still be happy not settling for less anymore. I had two failed marriages...I'm going for Bliss or Lonely. cool


i've been laughing at it since it started.

i personally think it's ridiculous to claim to love someone you've never met, and base your "relationship" with them off of their music, because it "speaks to you".

let us enjoy ourselves, this rhythm is ill. i want to sit on your penis
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