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Reply #30 posted 06/30/09 6:47am

kimrachell

Imago said:

Tame said:

To Love A Prince

To Love a Prince on cloud or rain guitar
Comes sun within a room inside your heart
To hear his name is golden Royalty
To hear him play is simple pleasantry

To Love a Prince in silken Purple suit
That’s lined with Pirate mind and Purple loot
We sing along the walk on down the plank
He shares his laughter docking at the bank

To Love a Prince in Yellow lacey pants
Like seamstress went to work with fancy lance
Will keep you on your guard and on your toes
To have the chance at match to steal the dance

To Love a Prince is treasure you can bet
He’s an undercover gem in Black Sweat.~T

razz



omfg lol
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Reply #31 posted 06/30/09 11:26am

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lol @ the cat.
RIP, mom. I will forever miss and love you.
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Reply #32 posted 06/30/09 11:27am

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BriaVelveeta said:



lol Is Janice having an orgasm in that clip? lol
RIP, mom. I will forever miss and love you.
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Reply #33 posted 06/30/09 11:46am

HAZE03

I admire your talent, courage and creative spirit Tame, not to mention those were very kind words. Not everyone has the ability to create something nice, let alone the bravery to show it for the world to critique. Just as benjaminira said, I think Prince would be flattered.
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Reply #34 posted 06/30/09 11:59am

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Tame, keep your day job and please get a man that can please you. You remind me of the person that brought up a collague of Prince pictures on a sparkely poster to an Oakland soundcheck. Prince reponded, 'When I see that many pictures of myself on ONE page, I go "Mmmmm"' (freaked out)
"The voter is less important than the man who provides money to the candidate," - Former Supreme Court Justice John Paul Stevens
Rudedog no no no!
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Reply #35 posted 06/30/09 1:47pm

Tame

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benjaminira said:

Tame, don't listen to these idiots...never let anyone tell U that your expression of your feelings is/are wrong! If I were Prince...I'd totally be flattered!


Thanks benjaminira... cool
"The Lion Sleeps Tonight...
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Reply #36 posted 06/30/09 1:51pm

Tame

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HAZE03 said:

I admire your talent, courage and creative spirit Tame, not to mention those were very kind words. Not everyone has the ability to create something nice, let alone the bravery to show it for the world to critique. Just as benjaminira said, I think Prince would be flattered.



Thank Haze and all y'all on the last page with something nice to say. I even thank the wyz crackerz. cool

I appreciate the criticism...No one will love or like everything a writer does...It's just that when Prince is my inspiration...The people here are the only people that will appreciate the person "Prince," Like I do. cool
"The Lion Sleeps Tonight...
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Reply #37 posted 06/30/09 4:08pm

Alej

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benjaminira said:

Tame, don't listen to these idiots...never let anyone tell U that your expression of your feelings is/are wrong! If I were Prince...I'd totally be flattered!


If I were Prince I'd be scared shitless confused
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Reply #38 posted 06/30/09 4:12pm

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...tame don't listen to the rude-azz men around here...cuz if they are men and they are hate'in ..they just jealous they ain't prince..and they JUST WISH they got this much attention from someone..
...gurl..patience is also very important in the STRENUOUS trek to prosperity..
..mzsexybaby sexy
..She's Just A Baby..but she's my lady..my loveR..my only friend!..true love that will last!..PEOPLE DON'T UNDERSTAND..WHAT SHE SEES IN AN OLDER MAN..they never stop 2 think that maybe i'm what she's looking 4..THEY NEVER TAKE THE TIME..2 look in her mind
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Reply #39 posted 06/30/09 4:49pm

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Alej said:

benjaminira said:

Tame, don't listen to these idiots...never let anyone tell U that your expression of your feelings is/are wrong! If I were Prince...I'd totally be flattered!


If I were Prince I'd be scared shitless confused


lol
RIP, mom. I will forever miss and love you.
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Reply #40 posted 06/30/09 7:34pm

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psychodelicide said:

Alej said:



If I were Prince I'd be scared shitless confused


lol


Seriously lol
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Reply #41 posted 06/30/09 8:13pm

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Alej said:

psychodelicide said:



lol


Seriously lol


nod lol
RIP, mom. I will forever miss and love you.
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Reply #42 posted 06/30/09 11:00pm

benjaminira

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Alej said:

benjaminira said:

Tame, don't listen to these idiots...never let anyone tell U that your expression of your feelings is/are wrong! If I were Prince...I'd totally be flattered!


If I were Prince I'd be scared shitless confused

Well U are not...so ZIP IT! smile
If it breaks when it bends, U better not put it in!
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Reply #43 posted 06/30/09 11:01pm

benjaminira

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Let a woman be a woman and let a man be a man
If it breaks when it bends, U better not put it in!
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Reply #44 posted 06/30/09 11:13pm

NastradumasKid

benjaminira said:

Let a woman be a woman and let a man be a man



    Prince, Prince
    I want you to
    take your
    clothes off
    and laugh in the purple rain
    with only a raspberry beret
    I hope on day you and Morris Day
    have sex with me and I hope
    one day you realize you're gay
    Hooray Goldnigga is all I say!

[Edited 6/30/09 23:13pm]
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Reply #45 posted 06/30/09 11:44pm

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NastradumasKid said:

benjaminira said:

Let a woman be a woman and let a man be a man



    Prince, Prince
    I want you to
    take your
    clothes off
    and laugh in the purple rain
    with only a raspberry beret
    I hope on day you and Morris Day
    have sex with me and I hope
    one day you realize you're gay
    Hooray Goldnigga is all I say!

[Edited 6/30/09 23:13pm]

Now Prince would be insulted! Next!
If it breaks when it bends, U better not put it in!
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Reply #46 posted 06/30/09 11:46pm

NastradumasKid

benjaminira said:

NastradumasKid said:




    Prince, Prince
    I want you to
    take your
    clothes off
    and laugh in the purple rain
    with only a raspberry beret
    I hope on day you and Morris Day
    have sex with me and I hope
    one day you realize you're gay
    Hooray Goldnigga is all I say!

[Edited 6/30/09 23:13pm]

Now Prince would be insulted! Next!



M Bison-"OF COURSE!!!"

Can you come up with something better?
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Reply #47 posted 07/01/09 1:27am

benjaminira

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NastradumasKid said:

benjaminira said:


Now Prince would be insulted! Next!



M Bison-"OF COURSE!!!"

Can you come up with something better?

Yes...
Roses are Red
Violets aren't Blue
This poem is already better
Because yours smells like poo
If it breaks when it bends, U better not put it in!
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Reply #48 posted 07/01/09 2:07am

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jeez lock this fucking thread.
cream.
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Reply #49 posted 07/01/09 3:56pm

Alej

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benjaminira said:

Alej said:



If I were Prince I'd be scared shitless confused

Well U are not...so ZIP IT! smile


Thank Gawd I'm not and flip u hug
[Edited 7/1/09 15:59pm]
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Reply #50 posted 07/01/09 3:57pm

Protege

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benjaminira said:

Alej said:



If I were Prince I'd be scared shitless confused

Well U are not...so ZIP IT! smile

lolz

i bet he's glad for that too touched
[Edited 7/1/09 15:58pm]

HE'S COMING AGAIN
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Reply #51 posted 07/01/09 3:58pm

Alej

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:fuckingpostingfail:
[Edited 7/1/09 15:58pm]
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Reply #52 posted 07/01/09 3:58pm

Alej

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:postingfail:
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Reply #53 posted 07/03/09 2:57pm

Lotus2unfld

mzkqueen03 said:

...tame good poem..
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..the ability to concentrate and use your time well is EVERYTHING if u want TO SUCCEED in business or almost ANYWHERE ELSE FOR THAT MATTER..
..lee iacocca..
...mzseybaby sexy

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Oh, Lee Iacocca, I attended a dinner party that he and his wife Beverly were at ...quite a while back. He's funny. Drive's like a bat out of hell. LOL. His wife wouldn't ride with him. lol

*****
I was trying to help change the subject on this thread ...
but I came back across this and ...
I have to laugh.....cuz sometimes I just offend my own self. LOL. sheesh.

think I'll make a new handle for myself. can anyone guess what it might be? LOL

peace
[Edited 7/5/09 8:35am]
this is the time of the first fast.
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Reply #54 posted 07/03/09 3:11pm

Vendetta1

Alej said:

benjaminira said:

Tame, don't listen to these idiots...never let anyone tell U that your expression of your feelings is/are wrong! If I were Prince...I'd totally be flattered!


If I were Prince I'd be scared shitless confused
spit That is exactly what I was about to post. hug
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Reply #55 posted 07/03/09 3:23pm

BriaVelveeta

Another Poem 4 Prince:


I hear you like a lot of sex
And some say 'in the pooper'
If you want me to strap it on
Then that would be just super!
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Reply #56 posted 07/03/09 3:30pm

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Tame said:

This is 4 Prince...and I thought I'd share it with U.




I’ve been on hold

Let me look into your eyes
As we close down the night
It won’t be long till morning comes,
And sleep will hold us side by side.
See the Horizon
That rests on my mind
A long distance call is tight on the line
Can U hear, “Hello” By ELO?

I’ve been on hold…
Holding the line.
My heart knew someday
I’d be looking in your eyes
It’s been a long time
You own my tears…
Now I’m all hung-up on
Holding you near
Holding you dear

Let me kiss your lips
There is an orchard in my heart
Let me give you just a sip
Of the wine I’ve made
While we have been so far apart
Taste the cherry grove,
And the blackberries from the vine
Peaches, Lemons, and the sweetest lime.
Baby can U hear, “Hello,” By ELO

I’ve been on hold…
Holding the line. ~T


Beautiful feelings ...
Forever in my life...
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Reply #57 posted 07/03/09 6:14pm

Tame

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kimrachell said:

Tame said:

This is 4 Prince...and I thought I'd share it with U.




I’ve been on hold

Let me look into your eyes
As we close down the night
It won’t be long till morning comes,
And sleep will hold us side by side.
See the Horizon
That rests on my mind
A long distance call is tight on the line
Can U hear, “Hello” By ELO?

I’ve been on hold…
Holding the line.
My heart knew someday
I’d be looking in your eyes
It’s been a long time
You own my tears…
Now I’m all hung-up on
Holding you near
Holding you dear

Let me kiss your lips
There is an orchard in my heart
Let me give you just a sip
Of the wine I’ve made
While we have been so far apart
Taste the cherry grove,
And the blackberries from the vine
Peaches, Lemons, and the sweetest lime.
Baby can U hear, “Hello,” By ELO

I’ve been on hold…
Holding the line. ~T



it's nice that you like to write poetry....but it's scary that you're so consumed with prince.....it would be better for you to feel this way about a man you actually know and are with, not a stranger! neutral


I do feel that my heart knows Prince. I also feel that if I were to risk every ounce of Love that I have 2 give another person...Prince is who I would be willing to cry a lifetime over, if I never had him.

I Love Prince and that isn't a scary thing..it's a sweet thing. cool
"The Lion Sleeps Tonight...
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Reply #58 posted 07/03/09 6:19pm

Tame

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rudedog said:

Predictable, disturbingly obsessive, 8th grade language used, i have to go with Simon Cowell and say, 'The best part of it was when it ended'.

Sorry, start reading some good poetry and/or listen to music with great lyrics. Paul Simon, Dave Mustaine, Living Colour, Bob Dylan, Bruce Springsteen, Paul McCartney, that's a start.

This sounds like KISS lyrics.


rudedog...I appreciate the criticism...I have others...and ya know...some of them are just average...but I have at least one poem that Shakespeare would say..."Pretty fine...My lady." and U know...that is writer's dream...to believe that one of the best poet's in history would love at least one piece. And I only care what Prince thinks...U guys can call it all garbage, but when I'm writing this poetry on Prince's skin while he is sleeping...we will both find out in the morning how he feels...and I won't even be thinking of any rude dog...after an evening with Prince. razz
"The Lion Sleeps Tonight...
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Reply #59 posted 07/03/09 6:23pm

Tame

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rudedog said:

Tame, keep your day job and please get a man that can please you. You remind me of the person that brought up a collague of Prince pictures on a sparkely poster to an Oakland soundcheck. Prince reponded, 'When I see that many pictures of myself on ONE page, I go "Mmmmm"' (freaked out)


My house isn't loaded with Prince poses...but my mind is... cool
"The Lion Sleeps Tonight...
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