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A Poem I wrote 4 Prince Last Night. This is 4 Prince...and I thought I'd share it with U.
I’ve been on hold Let me look into your eyes As we close down the night It won’t be long till morning comes, And sleep will hold us side by side. See the Horizon That rests on my mind A long distance call is tight on the line Can U hear, “Hello” By ELO? I’ve been on hold… Holding the line. My heart knew someday I’d be looking in your eyes It’s been a long time You own my tears… Now I’m all hung-up on Holding you near Holding you dear Let me kiss your lips There is an orchard in my heart Let me give you just a sip Of the wine I’ve made While we have been so far apart Taste the cherry grove, And the blackberries from the vine Peaches, Lemons, and the sweetest lime. Baby can U hear, “Hello,” By ELO I’ve been on hold… Holding the line. ~T "The Lion Sleeps Tonight... | |
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Beautiful!
I especially like the part: It won’t be long till morning comes, And sleep will hold us side by side. | |
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Thank U peter. "The Lion Sleeps Tonight... | |
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Awful.
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InsatiableCream said: @ that poem | |
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Prince, beef up your security, please?!? | |
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not bad... | |
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Tame said: This is 4 Prince...and I thought I'd share it with U.
I’ve been on hold Let me look into your eyes As we close down the night It won’t be long till morning comes, And sleep will hold us side by side. See the Horizon That rests on my mind A long distance call is tight on the line Can U hear, “Hello” By ELO? I’ve been on hold… Holding the line. My heart knew someday I’d be looking in your eyes It’s been a long time You own my tears… Now I’m all hung-up on Holding you near Holding you dear Let me kiss your lips There is an orchard in my heart Let me give you just a sip Of the wine I’ve made While we have been so far apart Taste the cherry grove, And the blackberries from the vine Peaches, Lemons, and the sweetest lime. Baby can U hear, “Hello,” By ELO I’ve been on hold… Holding the line. ~T it's nice that you like to write poetry....but it's scary that you're so consumed with prince.....it would be better for you to feel this way about a man you actually know and are with, not a stranger! | |
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...tame good poem..
. ..the ability to concentrate and use your time well is EVERYTHING if u want TO SUCCEED in business or almost ANYWHERE ELSE FOR THAT MATTER.. ..lee iacocca.. ...mzseybaby ..She's Just A Baby..but she's my lady..my loveR..my only friend!..true love that will last!..PEOPLE DON'T UNDERSTAND..WHAT SHE SEES IN AN OLDER MAN..they never stop 2 think that maybe i'm what she's looking 4..THEY NEVER TAKE THE TIME..2 look in her mind | |
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Goofy. | |
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Predictable, disturbingly obsessive, 8th grade language used, i have to go with Simon Cowell and say, 'The best part of it was when it ended'.
Sorry, start reading some good poetry and/or listen to music with great lyrics. Paul Simon, Dave Mustaine, Living Colour, Bob Dylan, Bruce Springsteen, Paul McCartney, that's a start. This sounds like KISS lyrics. "The voter is less important than the man who provides money to the candidate," - Former Supreme Court Justice John Paul Stevens
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U guys are hysterical.
Did U expect "Shakespeare," to come out of me in 5 minutes? "The Lion Sleeps Tonight... | |
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Everytime I just start jotting things down...It's all thought on Prince, so even if a poem isn't all that great, it can just say in general that U are thinking of someone. "The Lion Sleeps Tonight... | |
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I'll go work on another one...get back 2 ya when it's done. "The Lion Sleeps Tonight... | |
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Tame said: I'll go work on another one...get back 2 ya when it's done.
Post it here: http://prince.org/delete_account.html | |
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To Love A Prince
To Love a Prince on cloud or rain guitar Comes sun within a room inside your heart To hear his name is golden Royalty To hear him play is simple pleasantry To Love a Prince in silken Purple suit That’s lined with Pirate mind and Purple loot We sing along the walk on down the plank He shares his laughter docking at the bank To Love a Prince in Yellow lacey pants Like seamstress went to work with fancy lance Will keep you on your guard and on your toes To have the chance at match to steal the dance To Love a Prince is treasure you can bet He’s an undercover gem in Black Sweat.~T "The Lion Sleeps Tonight... | |
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Alej said: InsatiableCream said: @ that poem omg u guys kill me haha damn lmao welp | |
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mzspongebob said: Alej said: @ that poem omg u guys kill me haha damn lmao | |
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Tame said: To Love A Prince
To Love a Prince on cloud or rain guitar Comes sun within a room inside your heart To hear his name is golden Royalty To hear him play is simple pleasantry To Love a Prince in silken Purple suit That’s lined with Pirate mind and Purple loot We sing along the walk on down the plank He shares his laughter docking at the bank To Love a Prince in Yellow lacey pants Like seamstress went to work with fancy lance Will keep you on your guard and on your toes To have the chance at match to steal the dance To Love a Prince is treasure you can bet He’s an undercover gem in Black Sweat.~T | |
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Tame said: To Love A Prince
To Love a Prince on cloud or rain guitar Comes sun within a room inside your heart To hear his name is golden Royalty To hear him play is simple pleasantry To Love a Prince in silken Purple suit That’s lined with Pirate mind and Purple loot We sing along the walk on down the plank He shares his laughter docking at the bank To Love a Prince in Yellow lacey pants Like seamstress went to work with fancy lance Will keep you on your guard and on your toes To have the chance at match to steal the dance To Love a Prince is treasure you can bet He’s an undercover gem in Black Sweat.~T | |
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Tame said: This is 4 Prince...and I thought I'd share it with U.
I’ve been on hold Let me look into your eyes As we close down the night It won’t be long till morning comes, And sleep will hold us side by side. See the Horizon That rests on my mind A long distance call is tight on the line Can U hear, “Hello” By ELO? I’ve been on hold… Holding the line. My heart knew someday I’d be looking in your eyes It’s been a long time You own my tears… Now I’m all hung-up on Holding you near Holding you dear Let me kiss your lips There is an orchard in my heart Let me give you just a sip Of the wine I’ve made While we have been so far apart Taste the cherry grove, And the blackberries from the vine Peaches, Lemons, and the sweetest lime. Baby can U hear, “Hello,” By ELO I’ve been on hold… Holding the line. ~T Wow! Beautiful! senualsuduction1 | |
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Tame said: To Love A Prince
To Love a Prince on cloud or rain guitar Comes sun within a room inside your heart To hear his name is golden Royalty To hear him play is simple pleasantry To Love a Prince in silken Purple suit That’s lined with Pirate mind and Purple loot We sing along the walk on down the plank He shares his laughter docking at the bank To Love a Prince in Yellow lacey pants Like seamstress went to work with fancy lance Will keep you on your guard and on your toes To have the chance at match to steal the dance To Love a Prince is treasure you can bet He’s an undercover gem in Black Sweat.~T | |
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This poem remains me of "Jack U Off" "Possessed" "Lady Cab Driver" with a mix of "Graffiti Bridge" .....Damn it I just want to jack off to this poem. [Edited 6/29/09 20:40pm] | |
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Tame said: This is 4 Prince...and I thought I'd share it with U.
I’ve been on hold Let me look into your eyes As we close down the night It won’t be long till morning comes, And sleep will hold us side by side. See the Horizon That rests on my mind A long distance call is tight on the line Can U hear, “Hello” By ELO? I’ve been on hold… Holding the line. My heart knew someday I’d be looking in your eyes It’s been a long time You own my tears… Now I’m all hung-up on Holding you near Holding you dear Let me kiss your lips There is an orchard in my heart Let me give you just a sip Of the wine I’ve made While we have been so far apart Taste the cherry grove, And the blackberries from the vine Peaches, Lemons, and the sweetest lime. Baby can U hear, “Hello,” By ELO I’ve been on hold… Holding the line. ~T BTW, if you were a man I would seriously hit that ass every nite | |
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Jeezus. These poems are an abuse of the right to Freedom Of Speech. | |
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Tame, don't listen to these idiots...never let anyone tell U that your expression of your feelings is/are wrong! If I were Prince...I'd totally be flattered! If it breaks when it bends, U better not put it in! | |
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