The time has come 4 changes
U sue me
But what’s in a name?
If I change 2 what ever it is
Would the music be the same?

U speculate 2 no end
With sight unseen and heard
If I am the Shepard
What does that make u?
The herd?

Just sit and relax
4 sometimes the wait is the FUN
When it’s time 4 a payoff
Don’t u want 2 come?
[Edited 7/13/06 12:03pm]

Worst poem ever.

Stinky said:

Thank u.

Did you or Prince write that?

I woz 'ere
'ere I woz
woz I 'ere?
'course I woz

PurpleCharm said:

I wrote that.....

Dear God, Please give me patience. Cause you sure know I need it right now.

Graycap I really think u r Prince

What will be will be....

Graycap23 said:

It's "shepherd"
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Graycap23 said:

Very well done

langebleu said:

Actually, Shepard's is an online and printed legal citation tool, which might make it the right word choice in this case considering the lawsuit.

http://www.lexisnexis.com/shepards/

I'm sure that's one of the many layers of meaning carefully woven into this composition.

Doozer said:

N I C E

This is cool-very like Prince!

Graycap23 said:

just tryin' to help!

Doozer said:

EXCELLENT.

Doozer said:

Valiant try... but the word used wasn't "shepard's"

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Stinky said:

That's unfair.

Papercrayons and
Singmia: they often write
Equally trite shite.



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[Edited 7/13/06 12:51pm]

Whoever wrote the poem, speaks alot of truth..

I trust you Graycap. Take me to my leader shepherd.

sag10 said:

yep, he writes just like the prideful purple imp, don't he?

sag10 said:

What part?

"If I am the Shepard
What does that make u?
The herd?"

That does seem very Prince like.
Gray is a good study.

Either that or he believes he's Prince.
Keep an eye out for Prince tribute band world tours at the end of the month.

Snap said:

It's NOT my intent
2 write poems like Prince
The moment that I could write
It's been this way ever since

Graycap23 said:

it wasn't a compliment, but someone with as big a head as his (if that were possible) would only take it as such, wouldn't they?

btw, you write like a white boy
your rhythm's all off

Snap said:

I did not take it as one.
Just a statement of your comment. As is.....

I like it. Especially the last paragraph. I most definitely want to come to wherever Prince is at. No matter if the addy is 3121
[Edited 7/13/06 15:39pm]

A good shepard will never take his flock where he had not already been before. The good shepherd goes on ahead to insure safe passage of his sheep.
Psalms 23:1-6

I think P see's God as his Shepard not a man and I doubt he see's himself as one either, but a interesting poem and I like it "all good things come 2 those that wait (copywrite my mama )" -anyway- I'm away 2 chat now

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[Edited 7/13/06 15:53pm]

Graycap23 said:

shepard is the name of a radio dj from the sixties and seventies. (gene sherpard, who wrote the story upon which the played 24hrs in a row "Christmas Story is based upon).
Sheperd is someone who tends flocks.