Ok, when you started talking about crying I started tearing up. I'm a sucker.

I'm not for reading much, because I tend to get bored or distracted, which is why I took so long to give this a try. I really dig your writing style! Kept my attention.

Great job! Good story.

Check out my boyfriend's website: www.sunwolfpress.com
He's a writer/self-publisher and he takes submissions for the site from time to time. If you click on articles and scroll down you'll see a poem by me. *wink*

im crying

Beautifully written in so many ways... o my goodness.

I really like your poem in your profile too.