***********************

I stoke the fires of the past

With poems unrevealed

I dare not share the diary

Of one left so unhealed

I am the wayward vagrant

Pointing north

When left is south

Spouting prophecies

Unbidden from my mouth

I am the tender to the flame

Against it, you're insane

I am the Alpha

To your Omega

I am the One that you desire

No other can take you higher

When you sleep,

You dream of me

Out of sheer necessity

High-heeled foot

Embedded in your chest

Then, maybe, we

Can begin the rest....

purplethunder3121 said:

***********************

I stoke the fires of the (our) past

With poems (poetry) unrevealed

I dare not share the diary

Of one left so unhealed

I am the wayward vagrant

Pointing north

When left is south

Spouting prophecies

Unbidden from my mouth

I am the tender to the flame

Against it, you're insane

I am the Alpha

To your Omega

I am the One that you desire

No other can take you higher

When you sleep,

You dream of me

Out of sheer necessity

High-heeled foot (boot)

Embedded in your chest

Then, maybe, we

Can begin the rest....

Hi, could these words work?

Forgive me if it changes the message of your work.

EroticDreamer said:

purplethunder3121 said:

***********************

I stoke the fires of the (our) past

With poems (poetry) unrevealed

I dare not share the diary

Of one left so unhealed

I am the wayward vagrant

Pointing north

When left is south

Spouting prophecies

Unbidden from my mouth

I am the tender to the flame

Against it, you're insane

I am the Alpha

To your Omega

I am the One that you desire

No other can take you higher

When you sleep,

You dream of me

Out of sheer necessity

High-heeled foot (boot)

Embedded in your chest

Then, maybe, we

Can begin the rest....

Hi, could these words work?

Forgive me if it changes the message of your work.

Not one of my better late night offerings on the Org... Thanks for your suggestions. I hope that you will post some of your own... This forum used to be hopping with creativity of all sorts.

purplethunder3121 said:

EroticDreamer said:

Hi, could these words work?

Forgive me if it changes the message of your work.

Not one of my better late night offerings on the Org... Thanks for your suggestions. I hope that you will post some of your own... This forum used to be hopping with creativity of all sorts.

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David Bowie has a song on his upcoming album, Blackstar, entitled 'Tis A Pity She Was A Whore' and the opening lyrics are "Man, she punched me like a dude"... and that made me think of something I wrote many years ago (too many!) after a heartbreak.

I'll put a new topic so not to mess up your thread.

EroticDreamer said:

purplethunder3121 said:

Not one of my better late night offerings on the Org... Thanks for your suggestions. I hope that you will post some of your own... This forum used to be hopping with creativity of all sorts.

-

David Bowie has a song on his upcoming album, Blackstar, entitled 'Tis A Pity She Was A Whore' and the opening lyrics are "Man, she punched me like a dude"... and that made me think of something I wrote many years ago (too many!) after a heartbreak.

I'll put a new topic so not to mess up your thread.

Bowie fan, too?! I am SO looking forward to this new album Blackstar...