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Sticky Wet PUSSY - A poem Sticky wet pussy whos perfume smells up the room! every wiff of your womanhood fills me with doom! every last word Takes me away! hand me that pussy, I promise I'm gay! I don't want to argue, just throw that pussy my way! Now tell me why that pussy smells like the sperm Gushed out the moist tip of some bloke taking his turn,
Somebody forgive me, this pussy is out of control, Undulates like a pink bellpepper for whom the bell tolls, Cranking out a pussy fart chorus, a non-melodius sound! Knowing full well yo stank ass sticky wet pussy has been around, and around, and around. Seriously.
. [Edited 7/29/11 3:18am] You're a real fucker. You act like you own this place--ParanoidAndroid <-- about as witty as this princess gets! I hope everyone pays more attention to Sags posts--sweething Jesus weeps | |
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"Music gives a soul to the universe, wings to the mind, flight to the imagination and life to everything." --Plato
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A working class Hero is something to be ~ Lennon |
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"bloke"???? | |
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artistic license?? A working class Hero is something to be ~ Lennon |
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shield your eyes Kim, shield your eyes... A working class Hero is something to be ~ Lennon |
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This seems crude at first glance, but it actually touches me in ways I thought I could only touch myself. I will say that words like 'bloke' aren't really suited to poetry, and 'pussy fart' is a bit juvenile, but at it's core it's really quite an intense examination of longing, desperation, and rampant mysogyny. It's really very honest and open, so kudos to you for putting it out there (here). It bothers me that you don't take your poetry a bit more seriously though because I think you have a lot to offer. Sometimes I cry. | |
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I think if I cared about my poetry more, then it would hurt too much. I don't want my material to end up sounding like Morrissey without the music. Jesus weeps. | |
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I don't know who Morrissey is, but I think a singer/performer without music is like sleeping with a petite woman when you have a notably large appendage. You can try, but it's hard to really get into them. Hopefully you get enough out of sharing what you do share so that you might offload some of the burden, and we still get enough of you to feel some of what you're feeling. I know it's not easy to open yourself to complete strangers. Sometimes I cry. | |
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Have you tried turning the page upside down, then discarding it, getting a new piece of paper, and writing a different, better poem? MY COUSIN WORKS IN A PHARMACY AND SHE SAID THEY ENEMA'D PRANCE INTO OBLIVION WITH FENTONILS!! | |
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Should I make this into a song? My art book: http://www.lulu.com/spotl...ecomicskid
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