Thank you org for your positive feedback and encourgement on a previous track I posted here (Best4u).

'Superficial' is a new track that's still in draft form but I thought I'd post it here for your enjoyment and feedback.

The final version will be on the debut Vumiko album for sure. And as always, play it loud

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http://dl026.zshare.net/s...raft5_.mp3

Superficial

Produced, Arranged & Performed by Vumiko
Co-written by Michael Landrio & Vumiko

Lyrics:

When I first met you
You sent me to the moon
You put me at ease
Just by bein' in the room

But, the monsters here
So restless in my head
They’re ripping your memory
Right out of the bed

You stopped callin' me (stopped callin me)
Said you needed your room
But the other night (night)
I saw you dancin' with two

I ain't a fool baby
No, I ain't a fool baby

Chorus:

You’re superficial
Superficial
Superficial
You’re superficial
(Just evil and mean,
A bright, shiny
Artificial human being)

When I first met you
You took my breath away
I fell to the ground,
But, I’m getting up today

I’m done crying,
Done crying over you,
Yesterday you played me
Girl now I'm playin' you-

With my guitar,
my keys and strings
I got a pen to the paper lady
Know what I mean?

I ain't a fool baby
No I ain't a fool baby

Chorus:

You’re superficial
Superficial
Superficial
You’re superficial
(Just evil and mean,
A bright, shiny
Artificial human being)
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