Here is my latest effort...."Close Your Eyes"
http://www.soundclick.com...ID=5770179

Beautiful, all around.....love the lyrics....

If this doesn't rise to the top of the charts, they're all nuts! lol

Nice track and image.
Vocal would sound really nice in a reggae remix, too.

obsessed said:

That is so cool you think that way! I try to stay optimistic....thanks again....

Girdle said:

Reggae...interesting thought..thanks so much for listening.

Wonderful lyrics, great music and I dig the harmonies!



J-

very nice!
[Edited 9/16/07 5:52am]

thanks sweetheart, will listen to it tomorrow off 2 sleep, love M

Hi,
The lyrics on"Close Your Eyes" are wonderful.
It's a great song.
listened to some of your other songs ,and I like

really liked it! The chorus is like a good night kiss, great message with a good delivery.

I've also got a song of the same title. My lyrics are fine too but my guitar doesn't sound half as good as yours.

I wrote this song a long time ago
I hardly get the point now







Close Your Eyes


I want to tell y’ a story
‘Bout how it’s going to be
As short as it is long
Runs deeper than the sea
I’m going to take my time
So don’t hold your breath
I hope that you don’t mind
You’re going to have to get undressed.

You’re playing my heartstrings
In an old funky style
Breaking my heart, you are
Whenever you smile
I want to rub my gender
Through the locks of your hair
‘n’ Even if it is December
I’m going to get my thing right in there

Close your eyes, only this one thing is true
Know how much I want to make my sweet love to you. To you
Close your eyes

History don’t repeat itself
I’ve heard that it rhymes
Good advice ne’er did sell
At any given time
There’s nothing in the sack
Can make this old whore blush
You’ve got to take me back
To the point in time, when all we had was trust.

Close your eyes, this is what you get for free
Now how far can you get carried away with me. With me
Close your eyes

Can you hear me? Why then don’t you call me
Can’t you feel me And why can’t you heal me

Close your eyes, and you can call it yours
And I won’t say that you cannot play anymore. No more
Close your eyes

Styles said:

Thank you very much for listening.

emile57 said:

Thanks bro...

Thanks bro!
I think "Today I see" is a great song!!
Just can't get it outta my head.

Rightly said:

Thanks so much...nice lyrics by the way!

emile57 said:

I guess I did my job!