Wihes 19/3/07

Blow my brain with emotion
One day i'll meet devotion
She'll come my way and make me cry
And when i'm restless she'll be my lullaby

But now i'm feeling sad
Knowing i'm missing what i never had
And this emotion is pre-pubescent
But i could'nt show this heart when adolescent

I write these words 2 show this girl
That i need her 4 my life 2 unfurl
But 4 now i'll be in touch from a distance
Praying soon there s no more resistance

Maybe i've met the girl, maybe its U
The first girl i've shown this 2
I wrote 4 U once before
A reaction 2 U touching my core

Teardrops with emotion are mine
Its how my life meets the Divine
I can sense beauty everywhere
Moments with U i long 2 share

BEAUTIFUL!!
if u ever release a book of ur writings
please let me know
again i believe ur writing is a gift

269 said:

Thank u so much 4 your words .. i am in touch with publishers now , so am hopeful something may go 2 print ... have a good 1

You know shayne07, you obviously have poetry inside of you waiting to
be put one paper.....you've shown us a lot in here....

You're stuck in 2nd gear however, and maybe you should try something that goes beyond that love you're missing....
in one of your other threads I saw that you did some poetry not related, and I thought that was really good.

Have you got some more of that in you? I'd love to hear it.

obsessed said:

Thanks 4 your comment.. I ve only been writing over the past 6 months and not often.. what i write has come as an expression of where i'm at, i ve given it no direction or thought , i've just wrote...i hope 2 develope and give myself diverse direction with time and thought..have a good 1