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Thread started 06/19/06 5:00pm

DevinDevin

hey will someone critique my song? it is my greatest melody ever.

it's an instrumental titled "chrismtas is here." i wrote it back in october 2005 and was in the christmas spirit - it sounds nothing like a christmas song but i had christmas in mind when making it. plus i sing nonsense lryics when writing melodies and the beginning lines of this song i sing in my head when i hear it..."christmas is here"
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Reply #1 posted 06/19/06 5:39pm

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Reply #2 posted 06/19/06 5:50pm

talmuzic

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nice work. very melodious. don't get discouraged about the lack of responses that you get around here. there are some haters that only respond to you if you review their work. and some still won't. I listened to some of your other work and found them to be interesting as well. good luck. peace
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Reply #3 posted 06/20/06 10:09am

DevinDevin

thank you talmuzic for checking it out. i'm glad you liked it. what else did you listen to?
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Reply #4 posted 06/20/06 11:28am

FrankAxtell

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Hey DevinDevin....really liked your sense of harmony...you have a good ear for melody . Keep it up man, it's a craft that must be exercsed daily. thumbs up!
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Reply #5 posted 06/20/06 6:26pm

actionthisday

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I dig it cat!
'A pillow covered in all our tears'
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Reply #6 posted 06/20/06 8:47pm

jayARDAHB

actionthisday said:

I dig it cat!


I like the sound - very polite!

If you played the song way slow, we'd be able to hear the changes much clearer because they seem very nice as well...

Anyways, keep it up - keep practising!
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Reply #7 posted 06/21/06 3:32am

DevinDevin

thank you guys for checking it out. i appreciate it.
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Reply #8 posted 06/21/06 12:06pm

talmuzic

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DevinDevin said:

thank you talmuzic for checking it out. i'm glad you liked it. what else did you listen to?

I listened to alot of your other pieces. most of the ones on the site.
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