Heres a new song for yall.

for some reason it was a hard song to make, to sing, it sucked ha. the guitar is cool. the opening is to die for.

I swear I will jizz myself if i play this guitar part live.

oh ya, the full version of "Into Denial" is up too!!!!

http://www.soundclick.com...nmusic.htm

Is this picture you! or is it Joey Lawrence?


Go boy.

I like the guitar intro - just wicked badass. The singing sounds pushed - you're jumping into each line too fast - like you're not sure when you're supposed to sing. With that in mind, I'd say, go record your vocals again on another track, using this existing track as a guide (scratch vocal track). Relax on the delivery. A lot. I can tell you've got the ability to make the vocals work, but right now I hear a lot of indecisiveness in the deliver.

I know I'm being redundant here, but I'm just saying the same thing over and over again. BUT DAMN great soloing.

otan said:

yes thats me, i look different in every pic of me.

i will redo the vocals, maybe do more head voice stuff.
But i'm really excited to do an instrumental version.