I havent been making anything new, and this is the last song for my "Izak Teaz" album i wanna work on..yet i dont know how 2 extend it or give it more lyrics.

But here, it's called "Dream/Boi"... Thank ya very kindly. (Psyko this one is updated since the last one).
Lyrics & story avaliable on site also.


http://www.soundclick.com...zmusic.htm



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Dizzayummm!!!! The re-recorded vocals on this are fire compared to your first draft. I still wanna steal that beat from you Sounds like Timbaland on an excellent day. I meant to ask you last week, what is that sample at the 2:34 mark? Is it Jimi Hendrix's 'Fire'?
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psykosoul said:

thanx my main man!

It's "If I Could Be A Mirror" by Black Ivory on their 1972 album Dont Turn Around I was planning on re-recording that song also for the continuation of it, but I was 2 tired at the time 2 finish.

Timbaland damn that man got sum good beats. I 4got where i took that snare from

19 Song plays so far.....

This sounds a little different for you. I do like the beat but I want more changes. One word to descibe it to me; dramatic

Thanks for sharing

Diggin' the track.
(Pump up the vocal though.)

tA

Tribal Disorder

http://www.soundclick.com...rmusic.htm

Thanx guys..Yeah it is a lil different than usual.

I had my vocals on deep echo so maybe that's y it sounds a little low.

Thank you for droppin a line!

I need 2 fill the ending much much more

Very spacea age, very cool
That part at 2:35 was cool as hell too!

I don't know why, but I could here it in a porn

I want more!

PEACE!

Raijuan said:

U'll get more when I give u a copy frome me I extended it last night.
Oh and yes...it is Pornistic.
Thank you Rijuan

Very futuristic! I like's a lot. Indeed, quite "pornistic" in parts....is that breathing part a sample? It's cool....Feels like a lot of steam is coming off the actual track! Hot and sweeeeeaty.

Quite awesome!

mrdespues said:

Its a deep deep echo called "AftersparkEL" on my computer. I was breathing heavily

Glad u liked it, and thank you for taking the time to listen I really gotta finish this song or its gonna drive me crazy

Well you know you got the slamminest beats on here. Its good to hear some synths and chords. I like them movement. I can see where the mmelody is going, but I think your natural voice should be moe upfront. It will showcase the melody more. Overall very experimental and explorative. You guys are really branching out doing creative stuff!

Littlewing said:

The heavy echoed and systematik vocals and dramatic tone is also inspired by u.

I wanna bring out the vox alot more! Thank you! I think it does sound drowned.

Whoa dude! Erie. I like it.

VinaBlue said:

Thank you V

futuristic jam.creative.

talmuzic said:

Thank yas vuurrry kinly Tal.

I will check when i got home, ho, I will jsut do that song when I buy my new keyboard!

7salles said:

No rushin! I made that beat in about an hour. It's just gonna sit n rot until u re-vive it from the dead

Very hypnotic. Great work man! It is a trip. How do you do your songs?

I mean, usually. in general terms

I use MTV Generator.

I take bunches of samples of a snare, hi hat, bass, from different CD's & LP's and just make SOMETHING out of the things I have put together.

I then record them on 2 VHS Tape..then I take the Line In wire and plug them in2 the computer and record them like that.

Did you never think about knowing to master a proper instrument? you are way too creative i think some music knowledge would make you incredible

7salles said:

I get that all the time.
I really wanna know the drums and Keyboard alot more. I never set a foot on a drum b4, and I WOULD LOVE 2.

I had my eyes on a acoustic guitar that was only $50 @ Wal-Mart I saw last month, but I never got around 2 buyin' it.

yeah man very good, you should proud of yourself dude. that's awesome shit. that beat is cool as hell. very smooth. yeah it does sound like porn music, but better, hehe. it's just got that sexy feel to it.

edit: oh and yeah, i play the keyboard, if i could somehow get get my songs onto my computer, i could give you all some samples as well and shit. i just learned Prince Delirious whacked-out keyboard solo thing. it's fun to play.
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SourD said:

Come here you!..


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Thank you! This is a song I am having so much hard time on, I don't know what to add 2 it and I keep replacing things and taking it out...ahh..I'll figure it out, and have sum more trax done for the album by next year..
Thank you thank you again!

Interesting creative track. I listened 2 'The Genie' and its got a great old skool Hip Hop beat.

thetimefan said:

Thank you!
The Genie is for 7salles exclusively. U gotta let me know when u can dub over beats.

*saluations 2U paisleypark4...this one found your DreamBoi refeshing...its always Beauteous 2 hear an original expression...when i worked n radioland years ago the programmers would say if a track doesn't grab yo ear n the 1st 15-20 seconds it ain't gonna fly~u got what u need 2 fly bro!!!

this track brought some thoughts i'd like 2 toss at ya since u said u wondered about some new ideas...just somebody out here n the world speaking like its friends n the room brainstorming...afterall, ya got somethin' here/hear...

don't know much about tech aspects, my thang is more from the write/sing/play vibe...that run @ about the 1:43-1:47 moves, i'd drop that somewhere u've got space n the 1st 30 sec (@:22) draw folks deeper n...definately agree with Littlewing, put the natural up front & make it warmer...the echo feels 2 tinnie with treble on it 4B, fatten the bottom=bass line/accent drum(everybody grooves 2 a fat Bottom)...that Black Ivory, mercy, dust B off & spin @ 33RPM=that works (thought i was the only one who still had that album), does it seem it could fit somewhere else 2? absolutely love that fade...Bgins & ends with resonance; stays with ya...

totally co-sign 7salles, get a true instrument n yo hands 2 C what comes...
check with a school n your area that has a band, find out if u can rent an instrument from a music shop, sit with it 4 awhile & C what feels right B4 u spend yo cash cuz~u already working what u got...don't know 4 sho' But seems there is somebody u know now that could help u get going down that road or assist/collaborate till u get there....

hope i didn't go on 2 long: i heard it, i felt it, i spoke on it...as u Believe so u receive so work yo vision DreamBoi

B peaceful

theoriginalQueenB said:

WWOOWW! I havent recieved such a review and critique that seep in a long time!! THANK YOU!!! Wow!!!! (Picking up my mouth from the floor), I don't know where 2 begin!!!

'You are SO right about the space in 1:22 I didnt know what to do with that, so that's a great idea to add the sped vox in the middle. I should add a fatter Drum bass track in it. I sampled that from "Heart Of The City" by Jay-Z, whom Kanye sampled it from whomever he took it from...

For the Black Ivory Sample I am planning on adding more of that in an extended album version of the song which I have already recorded some at least. That album actually was re-released last year so I hurried and got it on CD

I really do wanna just pick up a damn guitar and just go at it for a while! LOL. I have a keyboard and harmonica but that's it . I did'nt know that I could rent instruments! I will be looking into that one!

Once again thank you so much for slicing it up so I can hear every aspect on the song from your pov. I actually pulled it up again and listened 2 it reviewing the time scales you were mentioning on.

This is so so cool. Thank you again.