I have just uploaded a new track on soundclick.com called 'What I Do', my soundclick.com page is:

http://www.soundclick.com...jmusic.htm

and I would like every1's opinions on the track, also could u post some comments on my other songs on the message board

Thanx!

AJ

It would b cool if u all could listen 2 my new track, Thanx!

'What I Do' is Number 19 at the moment on the Funky R&B chart!. It would b cool if it could get 2 No1!

What did i do is has a nice jazzy beat! I thought u couldnt put a track on ur vocals? If that's the case then..

I think the song has a good idea, but it just needs a layout, the vocals are kinda everywhere.
It sounds like a idea coming together fleshing it out through the beat.

I'll listen 2 ur next song.

Are u using new equip 2 record?

paisleypark4 said:

I gotta agree. The music is solid and jazzy... Those vocals need some structure. Other than that

Thanx 4 listenin' 2 my song, I will need 2 sort out the vocals!, they were basically most ad libs so I will re-work the track.

The track is Number 11 at the moment, perhaps if I post the instrumental u could write some lyrics 4 it and sing on the track.