I have put another track on soundclick.com and its called 'You Know (That I'm True) it would b really cool if u all could listen 2 it! I would appreciate your comments, opinions etc. on my song

My soundclick page is:

http://www.soundclick.com...s/0/aj.htm

Thanx!

I'd appreciate ur comments on this track, I have heard a few negative comments on this track (however these r from non-singers/musicians...so what do they know ) and would appreciate ur honest opinions on the track. Most of the songs on my soundclick.com page r just demo tracks anyway so I want 2 improve them so again I'd like u all 2 listen the song and tell me what u think.

Thanx

Like the last one, they need some structuring. It doesnt sound like the song is constructed 2 fit the beat. Work on a solid chorus, and a solid verse. Where r these beats coming from man? They sound kinda nice? If i gave u an instrumental track now could u do it?

I listened to a number of your tunes. - ...keep at it.

I would first look at ways to imporve your production, one thing at a time... You now need a bass to go with your beats. There is a ton of information on the web regarding recording.

Second, you need to work on your vocal flow. Its almost like your holding back, like you don't want to wake someone up or don't want anyone to hear. This will never work, don't hold back.


As an artist you need to be your own worst critic. You need to be able to determine what works and what doesen't. I can tell that you hear ideas in your head. You probably have a ton of them. The next thing you need to do is to make the sounds in your head a reality.

Stay focused and you'll get there.


Toy
http://www.soundclick.com...nmusic.htm

Many thanx 4 listenin' 2 my song. I am using very basic equipment 2 record my songs and the songs r basically ideas/demo's at the moment, so I appreciate ur comments.

Many thanx 4 listenin' 2 my song. I am using very basic equipment 2 record my songs and the songs r basically ideas/demo's at the moment, so I appreciate ur comments.

paisleypark4 said:

I am using Audacity 2 mix the beat and vocals 2gether so there is a slight delay so this is why the song kinda sounds out of time 2 the beat. They r just demo's so I will work on them or just write some new songs!.

As 4 the beats, I use Hip Hop ejay! and sure if u put an instrumental on soundclick and some lyrics or whatever then I should b able 2 sing along with it and mix it and have a completed track.

thetimefan said:

So if i send u back the complete "You and Me" you'd be able 2 finish it?

Should b able 2!, I just need 2 'quick-mix' the beat 2 my acappella vocals and it should work!

I'm gonna start working on some funky Zapp type trax, just need a vocoder/talkbox effect 4 my vocals! and some funky beats!.