starkitty said: 2the9s said: Wouldn't it make more sense if there was an awkward silence on the other end when John mentions shooting himself? Rather than "Paul yelling animatedly"? oh that's great. not sure how to word it but that's great, and much funnier. Are you playing with me? | |
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2the9s said: starkitty said: oh that's great. not sure how to word it but that's great, and much funnier. Are you playing with me? no, i dig it. really funny. JOHN I'd rather blow my head off. (beat) (awkward silence) JOHN looks at the phone. JOHN Paul? You there? (look of disbelief comes over JOHN's face) JOHN Oh my God. | |
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starkitty said: 2the9s said: Are you playing with me? no, i dig it. really funny. JOHN I'd rather blow my head off. (beat) (awkward silence) JOHN looks at the phone. JOHN Paul? You there? (look of disbelief comes over JOHN's face) JOHN Oh my God. http://elmadartista.tumblr.com/ http://twitter.com/madartista | |
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starkitty said: Lleena said: I'd like to read more Kitty.
that will be arranged! i'll note you when i'm finished. just started the 7th page, i'm expecting 10-15 (but it's a quick read). i'll note you when it's done. Can you put Ringo in it? | |
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Uh oh. They're both offline again... | |
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I think that the lack of nipples really lets this scene down. When I read about the evils of drinking, I gave up reading. | |
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doctormcmeekle said: starkitty said: that will be arranged! i'll note you when i'm finished. just started the 7th page, i'm expecting 10-15 (but it's a quick read). i'll note you when it's done. Can you put Ringo in it? Hey, if you put in Ringo, ya GOTTA have George, too. NCC2012... your local Trekkie. =/\=
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2the9s said: Uh oh. They're both offline again...
get your mind out of the gutter. heh. | |
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(mind still in the gutter)
i think this is cool. especially with the re-write with the silence - that made me laugh. one question though - i'm wondering whether or not this character wears sweatpants or not? | |
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TheFrog said: (mind still in the gutter)
i think this is cool. especially with the re-write with the silence - that made me laugh. one question though - i'm wondering whether or not this character wears sweatpants or not? i say yay, to sweatpants with holes. | |
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Surely you don't mean these two, do you?
NEW WAVE FOREVER: SLAVE TO THE WAVE FROM THE CRADLE TO THE GRAVE. | |
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oh boy.
no. not them. they aren't the only pauls and johns in existence. | |
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do english people say 'bloody' a lot?
i mean if you're english, would you say it peppers your conversation? starkitty rocks my box. | |
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i forgot, all the english are sleeping.
sigh. starkitty rocks my box. | |
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vanillachild said: do english people say 'bloody' a lot?
i mean if you're english, would you say it peppers your conversation? i think "fucking" has become much more common than bloody. people that do pepper what they say with swearwords tend to go the whole hog. 'bloody' is somewhat more reserved, and the type of people that use it aren't the sort of people with foul mouths in the first place. he generalises. as always. | |
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starkitty said: Lleena said: I'd like to read more Kitty.
that will be arranged! i'll note you when i'm finished. just started the 7th page, i'm expecting 10-15 (but it's a quick read). i'll note you when it's done. Thankyou (btw, I like what you said on the Hottest female thread Kitty) | |
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thanks lleena, i appreciate that. | |
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