brownsugar said:

Thank you!

Happy endings aren't always good for the story, in my opinion. It would have seemed pretty cheesy to present a problem and resolve it, all in five minutes...

retina said:

i was at least left with the hope that they would work it out. good job conveying the sadness as well, with that poignant look between the troll and the princess at the end.

SexOnWheels said:

That's interesting. Everybody has a different take on their chances of mending the relationship, and that's how it was meant to be. It's just as valid to emphasize the terrible events that led them to this situation as it is to emphasize the love they obviously still have for each other. I guess we all draw from our own personal experiences of situations like these when we make our guess about their future.



Thank you very much! I can only take credit for choosing to stay with them for as long as I did though; the poignance is all thanks to the actors.

Again, I really appreciate your comments, SexOnWheels!

retina said:

that's true, my opinion is no doubt colored by my past experiences and personal hope as well.



then tell them i said well done!

retina said:

Still waiting though...

i tried to scroll past the spoilers

i need to get my printer working now
for sharing your work with us

btw, nice job fitting two sex scenes into a 5 minute film.

SupaFunkyOrgangrinderSexy said:

You know, I rather enjoyed talking to you on the phone... But I'm going to have to say, in this case, I think you should've made an effort to stop yourself from being "such a witch."

Just sayin' and all.

CortestheKiller said:

amen!!

SexOnWheels said:

Amen or otherwise, if there's a response, it'll all lead to a big jack of Peter's thread. And supa saying retina isn't so nice to people.

I guess I'll have to download the video now so I won't jack and I can contribute. I wasn't reluctant to do it... just been downloading... heh heh... other videos.

Well shit. I don't have a printer.

CortestheKiller said:

sorry.


its really good. can you make it into a smaller window next to the video?? it's a good short film.


either that or learn whatever language that is.

SexOnWheels said:

It's probably Swedish, innit?

I'll get to downloading anyway.

CortestheKiller said:

yeah, sorry. dude even said it was swedish.

retina said:

oh no i wasn't looking for a happy ending. i like how the question of them getting back together was unanswered. the unanwered question was in a sense realistic of a relationship going through a problem like that.

SexOnWheels said:

I didn't even think about that until somebody pointed it out to me. It's funny, because I think the actors actually enjoyed the first sex scene, but the second one was another story altogether.

We'd been looking desperately for a prettyboy that could play the "prince" but weren't able to find one until the last minute when we got in touch with this guy through a modelling agency. Turns out he didn't look like his picture and instead of that typical prettyboy stubble and wavy hair, he had pretty big sideburns. And the actress was so nervous that she got a visible rash all over her back. To top it all off, she managed to push aside the covers just before we did the only shot we could afford, exposing that she wasn't really naked but was wearing panties... Oh well, we got the shot anyway, and it works okay I think. Thanks to the high pace there are plenty of little mistakes in the film that go relatively unnoticed.

SexOnWheels said:

Thanks you guys!

CortestheKiller said:

You could always open the text file in a window next to the window with the film. The reason I suggested printing it out is just that I thought it would make it easier.

brownsugar said:

I agree. Thanks!