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LRYICS: COME AND FUCKING LOOK! Destroy the equilibrium of night and day
Transforming into a blur The misconceptions of an era time forgot A world without fear Man should shed no tear As the rivers disjointed run Visionary wall climbers to the sun Lilies white caress the child cushioned soft Whilst punctures red pain the man beaten hard The equilibrium needs repair Else society enters disrepair Problems solved as bulbs in spring Recommence the battle fresh And shun the green shades of death Colours yellow, red Accompany the sound Leaving mute Those that bore witness To a man so resolute Craving for terror to abound Where so many were left dead A world without fear Men should shed no tear As the rivers disjointed run Visionary wall climbers to the Sun. I wrote this whilst bored during a university training class.  [Edited 10/6/06 12:09pm] | |
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 wtf? BRING SOME LYRICS on Sunday!! now them I'd LOVE to see 
awesome, Ben  Trent would be proud | |
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Natisse said: wtf? BRING SOME LYRICS on Sunday!! now them I'd LOVE to see
awesome, Ben Trent would be proudThanks honey. | |
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no one else?  | |
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Spookymuffin said: Problems solved as bulbs in spring Recommence the battle fresh And shun the green shades of death Pretty cool; I really like these lines  | |
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evenstar3 said: Spookymuffin said: Problems solved as bulbs in spring Recommence the battle fresh And shun the green shades of death Pretty cool; I really like these lines Cheers. 
What attracts you to them? Do you understand the imagery? Do you get the subtle nod to Lorca? | |
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Spookymuffin said: evenstar3 said: Pretty cool; I really like these lines Cheers.
What attracts you to them? Do you understand the imagery? Do you get the subtle nod to Lorca? Just the way you phrased the lines is interesting, I suppose. I like the word recommence.
I think I do- something like dying is living? Spring's new growth is ultimately pointless, that kind of thing? I haven't read any of his work really, so no. | |
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Spookymuffin said: I wrote this whilst bored during a university training class.
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Like it Ben | |
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Spookymuffin said: Destroy the equilibrium of night and day
Transforming into a blur The misconceptions of an era time forgot A world without fear Man should shed no tear As the rivers disjointed run Visionary wall climbers to the sun Lilies white caress the child cushioned soft Whilst punctures red pain the man beaten hard The equilibrium needs repair Else society enters disrepair Problems solved as bulbs in spring Recommence the battle fresh And shun the green shades of death Colours yellow, red Accompany the sound Leaving mute Those that bore witness To a man so resolute Craving for terror to abound Where so many were left dead A world without fear Men should shed no tear As the rivers disjointed run Visionary wall climbers to the Sun. I wrote this whilst bored during a university training class.
[Edited 10/6/06 12:09pm] good lyrics, but they won't work as a song. Perhaps you could release some poetry.  [Edited 10/6/06 13:13pm] | |
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kidelrich said: Spookymuffin said: Destroy the equilibrium of night and day
Transforming into a blur The misconceptions of an era time forgot A world without fear Man should shed no tear As the rivers disjointed run Visionary wall climbers to the sun Lilies white caress the child cushioned soft Whilst punctures red pain the man beaten hard The equilibrium needs repair Else society enters disrepair Problems solved as bulbs in spring Recommence the battle fresh And shun the green shades of death Colours yellow, red Accompany the sound Leaving mute Those that bore witness To a man so resolute Craving for terror to abound Where so many were left dead A world without fear Men should shed no tear As the rivers disjointed run Visionary wall climbers to the Sun. I wrote this whilst bored during a university training class.
[Edited 10/6/06 12:09pm] good lyrics, but they won't work as a song. Perhaps you could release some poetry.
[Edited 10/6/06 13:13pm] Oh they will... | |
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evenstar3 said: Spookymuffin said: Cheers.
What attracts you to them? Do you understand the imagery? Do you get the subtle nod to Lorca? Just the way you phrased the lines is interesting, I suppose. I like the word recommence.
I think I do- something like dying is living? Spring's new growth is ultimately pointless, that kind of thing? I haven't read any of his work really, so no. You got one element. The nod to Lorca was that, to Lorca, Green = Death. | |
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 It is not known why FuNkeNsteiN capitalizes his name as he does, though some speculate sunlight deficiency caused by the most pimpified white guy afro in Nordic history.
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FuNkeNsteiN said: these lyrics aren't at all emo! | |
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kidelrich said: Spookymuffin said: Destroy the equilibrium of night and day
Transforming into a blur The misconceptions of an era time forgot A world without fear Man should shed no tear As the rivers disjointed run Visionary wall climbers to the sun Lilies white caress the child cushioned soft Whilst punctures red pain the man beaten hard The equilibrium needs repair Else society enters disrepair Problems solved as bulbs in spring Recommence the battle fresh And shun the green shades of death Colours yellow, red Accompany the sound Leaving mute Those that bore witness To a man so resolute Craving for terror to abound Where so many were left dead A world without fear Men should shed no tear As the rivers disjointed run Visionary wall climbers to the Sun. I wrote this whilst bored during a university training class.
[Edited 10/6/06 12:09pm] good lyrics, but they won't work as a song. Perhaps you could release some poetry.
[Edited 10/6/06 13:13pm] I wouldn't say they "wouldn't work" as a song, but I do feel that these words might work best as poetry.  | |
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