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Reply #30 posted 11/28/05 11:30pm

mdiver

lilmissmissy said:

Written in my Poetry 2 module class on October 24th 2001.
For some reason i had sketched a picture of the inside of a woman's reproductive organ hmm
I think i has started 2 fight with my mum for the first time when i'd written this lol eek

I post this at my own risk- i usually feel a lil too vulnerable to share my poetry giggle

~untitled~

lost and abandoned
like a motherless
child.
Not knowing the
possible pain felt
by a childless
mother.
To grow
is to let go
But to let go
Is the equivelant
of physical pain
tearing
which occurs
in the womb
of the mother
Does child
weep tears
of agony
Or tears
of joy
Which come after hours
of pounding
On the protective
walls which
Nurtured it so much
the cord is cut.
But the bond
need not be broken.


rose


Wow
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Reply #31 posted 11/28/05 11:52pm

lilmissmissy

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mdiver said:

lilmissmissy said:

Written in my Poetry 2 module class on October 24th 2001.
For some reason i had sketched a picture of the inside of a woman's reproductive organ hmm
I think i has started 2 fight with my mum for the first time when i'd written this lol eek

I post this at my own risk- i usually feel a lil too vulnerable to share my poetry giggle

~untitled~

lost and abandoned
like a motherless
child.
Not knowing the
possible pain felt
by a childless
mother.
To grow
is to let go
But to let go
Is the equivelant
of physical pain
tearing
which occurs
in the womb
of the mother
Does child
weep tears
of agony
Or tears
of joy
Which come after hours
of pounding
On the protective
walls which
Nurtured it so much
the cord is cut.
But the bond
need not be broken.


rose


Wow


I feel very exhausted reading it. lol Thankyou by the way.
No hablo espanol,no! no no no!
Pero hablo ingles..ssii muy muy bien... nod
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Reply #32 posted 11/28/05 11:56pm

HamsterHuey

Mr Saunders Says


There’s an elephant in the kitchen
Asking for a cup of tea
At least, that’s what Mr Saunders says
What Mr Saunders says

It’s dressed in an orange overall
And wants to play with you and me
At least, that’s what Mr Saunders says
What Mr Saunders says

But what Mr Saunders says ain’t always true
He’s saying the moon is purple and the sun is blue
What Mr Saunders says
What Mr Saunders says

There’s a dragon living in the backyard
But this one isn’t mean
At least, that’s what Mr Saunders says
What Mr Saunders says

It loves to play hide and seek
For sure a sight to be seen
At least, that’s what Mr Saunders says
What Mr Saunders says

But what Mr Saunders says ain’t always true
He’s saying the moon is purple and the sun is blue
What Mr Saunders says
What Mr Saunders says

Mr Saunders says there’s treasure hidden everywhere
It can be found with this map or by people who really, really care
Mr Saunders says that pirates came to fight him yesterday
Saying he wasn’t frightened and that he sho’nuff made ‘m pay

But what Mr Saunders says ain’t always true
Now he’s off to bed dreaming a dream or two
Goodnight…
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Reply #33 posted 11/29/05 2:19am

bluesbaby

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Jesus and a Pall Mall

Come sit down and talk with me
we can share a smoke
and laugh about the idiots
perhaps you might just cry--
but I will sit, and sing
some song to lift your head up
we'll laugh and talk, and smoke
our tears will dry on the cold cement
as the snow sprinkles down like sugar
and the smoke will rise to the heavens
will let God know what we are doing..
and smoking
Jesus, want a cigarette?
Come and sit with me
and smoke
and dream
and laugh
and sing
because right now I need you
and I think you still need me.
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Reply #34 posted 11/29/05 3:29am

weepingwall

sorry when it comes to my poetry..im dickinson...meaning..until my death shall my mediocore work will be expose!
[Edited 11/28/05 19:30pm]
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Reply #35 posted 11/29/05 9:32am

Natisse

lilmissmissy said:

Written in my Poetry 2 module class on October 24th 2001.
For some reason i had sketched a picture of the inside of a woman's reproductive organ hmm
I think i has started 2 fight with my mum for the first time when i'd written this lol eek

I post this at my own risk- i usually feel a lil too vulnerable to share my poetry giggle

~untitled~

lost and abandoned
like a motherless
child.
Not knowing the
possible pain felt
by a childless
mother.
To grow
is to let go
But to let go
Is the equivelant
of physical pain
tearing
which occurs
in the womb
of the mother
Does child
weep tears
of agony
Or tears
of joy
Which come after hours
of pounding
On the protective
walls which
Nurtured it so much
the cord is cut.
But the bond
need not be broken.


rose


sweetie that's amazing worship thank you for sharing hug
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Reply #36 posted 11/29/05 10:22am

lilmissmissy

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Natisse said:

lilmissmissy said:

Written in my Poetry 2 module class on October 24th 2001.
For some reason i had sketched a picture of the inside of a woman's reproductive organ hmm
I think i has started 2 fight with my mum for the first time when i'd written this lol eek

I post this at my own risk- i usually feel a lil too vulnerable to share my poetry giggle

~untitled~

lost and abandoned
like a motherless
child.
Not knowing the
possible pain felt
by a childless
mother.
To grow
is to let go
But to let go
Is the equivelant
of physical pain
tearing
which occurs
in the womb
of the mother
Does child
weep tears
of agony
Or tears
of joy
Which come after hours
of pounding
On the protective
walls which
Nurtured it so much
the cord is cut.
But the bond
need not be broken.


rose


sweetie that's amazing worship thank you for sharing hug


touched Awwwww my gosh darlz- de nada!! hug Hey Tisse was your poem part of a personal journal or poetry journal? Or both?
No hablo espanol,no! no no no!
Pero hablo ingles..ssii muy muy bien... nod
music "Come into my world..." music
Missy Quote of da Month: "yeah, sure, that's cool...wait WHAT?! " confuse
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Reply #37 posted 11/29/05 10:28am

Natisse

lilmissmissy said:

Natisse said:



sweetie that's amazing worship thank you for sharing hug


touched Awwwww my gosh darlz- de nada!! hug Hey Tisse was your poem part of a personal journal or poetry journal? Or both?


you're so more than welcome hon hug ...and no it wasn't part of any journal really just something I wrote nod I was writing a lot of poetry at the time but most of it I didn't keep coz I thought it was rubbish but this I was proud of
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Reply #38 posted 11/29/05 10:44am

lilmissmissy

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Natisse said:

lilmissmissy said:



touched Awwwww my gosh darlz- de nada!! hug Hey Tisse was your poem part of a personal journal or poetry journal? Or both?


you're so more than welcome hon hug ...and no it wasn't part of any journal really just something I wrote nod I was writing a lot of poetry at the time but most of it I didn't keep coz I thought it was rubbish but this I was proud of


Keep everything you write darlz!! I keep all of mine- even the stuff i think is rubbish!! It'z a wonderful, unique, reflection of your heart and soul!! hug Too precious.
No hablo espanol,no! no no no!
Pero hablo ingles..ssii muy muy bien... nod
music "Come into my world..." music
Missy Quote of da Month: "yeah, sure, that's cool...wait WHAT?! " confuse
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Reply #39 posted 11/29/05 11:04am

Ocean

Natisse said:

this is something I wrote a very long time ago... about 7 years ago in fact nod

JOURNEY HOME

To quote from a master poet "Did you have a good world when you died?". I know not why these things do concern myself, only that they indeed repeatedly do.
Reason is the quickest way to sorrow and redemption both parallel and unique, therefore why must I be the one to reason? shall no one compare tragedy to tragedy and see who scores the most points? surely in the game of sanity versus the insane both must have even scores.
Love is lost, it seems, tonight and lost is the love I bore you forever, without which I shall surely perish.
A white shirt and jeans are the only clues I have left to a legacy so far away from my eyes in the now.
Please make yourself plentiful and drink from my cup, lest you miss me too much; lest I miss you too little.
another cross in the meadow, for you, my dear ones, to show me once I get to destiny bay.
Hope and pray of all prayers it shall be forthcoming with haste. The show must always go on; for we are the champions! blackened eyes mourn the passing of a supernatural aura so high in being it transcends all dignity and grace. Therefore we cannot dare touch nor see this ethereal one again, lest she banish us to oblivion in agony, not by her own doing.
Sunshine be always in my eyes to lighten even dimmest nigh and hellest high, I pray once more to hear your softened voice; to see your jewel eyes and satin hair of length and grace.
come to me both near and far so that I may join you in remembering that always we are one and that death is only the beginning of what spirit entrances the soul of dreams relived and retold.
Heaven be always in my heart to lift the heavy luggage so long stowed in the deepest cargo bay infested with mirth and bitterness and hate, therefore releasing the tortured souls that are forever bound by only the thickest rope and tightest knot that no mere mortal can deny the passage through which it must go.
Try and try alike I do, knowing in my pocket that love can be the forgotten key which lay dormant in my imagination only.
Once more I pray it unlocks the key to my heart and being allowing the creation of a noble creature so rare and inviting salt water comes to mind and angels sing their lovely tune for only us to hear.
O joy of joys let this be my parting! fill my body with a drop of wine and a pinch of salt around mine eyes, for I am starved and thirsty for life. I know not how to go ahead nor stand and count, therefore in dire need of sustenance- the subtle kind.
Show me the way to heaven and I'll show why I'm there. tell me how to please you-nobody shall compare.
Life so important; dare I even ask? the battle of evermore brings with it friend and foe, beast and beauty, much and therefore little.
such as I hoped it would be, at last. Possible luxuries may not be needed after all.happiness is the way to hopelessness, someone once stated to me. Foolish behavior and reckless emotions may revere more than even promised.
As a prophet said , be careful what you wish for- it may just come true. lesson herein comes from within your inner beauty and soul. read the times with caution , as many overlook one final step to after-heed what you have sowed and practice what you know.
IS EVERYBODY IN?is everybody in? the ceremony is about to begin. Watch and learn I trust and pray.

Blessed be.
U are so talented with ur poetry love worship truly beautiful rose
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Reply #40 posted 11/29/05 11:25am

Natisse

Ocean said:

Natisse said:

this is something I wrote a very long time ago... about 7 years ago in fact nod

JOURNEY HOME

To quote from a master poet "Did you have a good world when you died?". I know not why these things do concern myself, only that they indeed repeatedly do.
Reason is the quickest way to sorrow and redemption both parallel and unique, therefore why must I be the one to reason? shall no one compare tragedy to tragedy and see who scores the most points? surely in the game of sanity versus the insane both must have even scores.
Love is lost, it seems, tonight and lost is the love I bore you forever, without which I shall surely perish.
A white shirt and jeans are the only clues I have left to a legacy so far away from my eyes in the now.
Please make yourself plentiful and drink from my cup, lest you miss me too much; lest I miss you too little.
another cross in the meadow, for you, my dear ones, to show me once I get to destiny bay.
Hope and pray of all prayers it shall be forthcoming with haste. The show must always go on; for we are the champions! blackened eyes mourn the passing of a supernatural aura so high in being it transcends all dignity and grace. Therefore we cannot dare touch nor see this ethereal one again, lest she banish us to oblivion in agony, not by her own doing.
Sunshine be always in my eyes to lighten even dimmest nigh and hellest high, I pray once more to hear your softened voice; to see your jewel eyes and satin hair of length and grace.
come to me both near and far so that I may join you in remembering that always we are one and that death is only the beginning of what spirit entrances the soul of dreams relived and retold.
Heaven be always in my heart to lift the heavy luggage so long stowed in the deepest cargo bay infested with mirth and bitterness and hate, therefore releasing the tortured souls that are forever bound by only the thickest rope and tightest knot that no mere mortal can deny the passage through which it must go.
Try and try alike I do, knowing in my pocket that love can be the forgotten key which lay dormant in my imagination only.
Once more I pray it unlocks the key to my heart and being allowing the creation of a noble creature so rare and inviting salt water comes to mind and angels sing their lovely tune for only us to hear.
O joy of joys let this be my parting! fill my body with a drop of wine and a pinch of salt around mine eyes, for I am starved and thirsty for life. I know not how to go ahead nor stand and count, therefore in dire need of sustenance- the subtle kind.
Show me the way to heaven and I'll show why I'm there. tell me how to please you-nobody shall compare.
Life so important; dare I even ask? the battle of evermore brings with it friend and foe, beast and beauty, much and therefore little.
such as I hoped it would be, at last. Possible luxuries may not be needed after all.happiness is the way to hopelessness, someone once stated to me. Foolish behavior and reckless emotions may revere more than even promised.
As a prophet said , be careful what you wish for- it may just come true. lesson herein comes from within your inner beauty and soul. read the times with caution , as many overlook one final step to after-heed what you have sowed and practice what you know.
IS EVERYBODY IN?is everybody in? the ceremony is about to begin. Watch and learn I trust and pray.

Blessed be.
U are so talented with ur poetry love worship truly beautiful rose


thank you hon touched hug kiss2
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Reply #41 posted 11/29/05 11:43am

Ocean

Natisse said:

Ocean said:

U are so talented with ur poetry love worship truly beautiful rose


thank you hon touched hug kiss2

u should post more love hug
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Reply #42 posted 11/29/05 11:45am

Natisse

Ocean said:

Natisse said:



thank you hon touched hug kiss2

u should post more love hug


kiss2
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Reply #43 posted 11/29/05 12:11pm

shanti0608

Dear Friend


You have been a Friend so true
Through ups and downs
You shine like the sun and
Shower your love like the rain

You are a Sister, Wife, and Friend
You inspire everyone around you
With your generous heart
That burns as bright as a flame

You see life as new as a child and
With wisdom as keen as an adult
You manage to love the ones you hold dear
Looking beyond our faults

You are a wonderful women
With such strength and grace
Your smile and beauty make this world
A better place

Thanks for being my Best Friend
Always knowing how to brighten my day
Your Friendship means more to me
Than any words could ever say
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Reply #44 posted 11/29/05 12:12pm

shanti0608

Stars of Mankind

We became friends from our writing
against wars and fighting
Sharing a kindness and compassion
for the world around us
A strong desire to speak out
it is our spirit that guides us without a doubt
Though generations separate us in age
it closes the gap when the pen hits the page
Genuine caring and concern for mankind
as strong as the need for the sun to shine
Our words are our gifts from deep in our soul
as precious as all of the silver and gold
Your writings are your legacy and your estate
ways to pass on your love instead of hate
This is how I felt I must give my thanks to YOU
for inspiring me to express on paper my words to be true
Your opinions encouraged me to give of my soul
to speak of my wishes for this world as a whole
Thanks for putting your beliefs into words
for your story will be forever heard
For it’s people like you that shine as bright as a star
you are the true meaning of man”kind” by far




* written for an elderly friend of mine that I met through the newspaper opinion section. He is a very special man.
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Reply #45 posted 11/30/05 1:10am

Fauxie

myspace versions rolleyes

(untitled)

Twenty suicidal tendencies a day,
Tired but yet old.
Bed-ridden, and animated only in sporadic, violent oscillation,
And looking every one of my years two-fold.
"The seventeenth 'last time' will be the easiest", I joked.
The doctor was not amused and his whole countenance frowned.
I croaked.
From lip to brow and back again, a wave of disapproval.
"What are we going to do with you?", he said.
"I don't know, but if you give me a cigarette I'll be your best friend"
He took his frown and rose from beside my bed.
I croaked again and drifted off to sleep, smiling foolishly to the end.
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Reply #46 posted 11/30/05 1:11am

Fauxie

Sincerely, Please Don't Die


I heard you calling out last night. Oh tell me, did you fall?

'Twas raining hard, and more besides, I was watching football.

Your family were not at home, and didn't rush to your aid?

Your boastful tongue has cost you that, as now their loyalty fades.

They never knew the man you are, but now the murmurs grow.

Blood is only so thick, and thus, in time you'll reap what was sown,

A bitter, vile crop that sheds your skin, laid bare to all.

Sincerely please don't die because I'd rather watch you fall.
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