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Thread started 01/15/05 9:16am

BobGeorge909

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Check out this poem

Lemme know what U think....


I want to elaborate on myself
take all the dusty information
I keep hidden on the shelf
down and share it with you


It would be so wonderful
to let you know what makes me tock
I’d throw it everywhere
enough to make you wanna wear a smock

To protect you from all the nasty kink
And stories of lust filled & unfulfilled
Protect you from not all,
Just some of the ugmo thoughts I think

I’m greedy with it and hide it away
Camouflaged deep inside a pile of hay
Little straws of stories usually hidden
Cuz I don’t know what game people wanna play


But I wont cuz at this point it’s stale
Staler than a brown ale and nobody wants a sip.
Is there anything you can do to a stale ale
To save someone from a trip?
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Reply #1 posted 01/18/05 8:27pm

BobGeorge909

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I know I'm not a good writer...but I didn't expect to hear crickets chirping. Somebody at least yell @ me and tell me not to write again. Jeesh!
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Reply #2 posted 01/18/05 8:29pm

althom

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Is it about beer?
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Reply #3 posted 01/18/05 8:34pm

Mach

nice poem



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Reply #4 posted 01/18/05 8:44pm

Fauxie

BobGeorge909 said:

I know I'm not a good writer...but I didn't expect to hear crickets chirping. Somebody at least yell @ me and tell me not to write again. Jeesh!



Beautiful honesty. touched Don't keep it up. thumbs up!
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Reply #5 posted 01/18/05 9:46pm

avatarfunk

careful.one can zone on this.....

my love 4 U...where do i begin

tell me..am i even worth the ink in your pen?

should i stop there

would you even care

no.you wouldn't dare.

night and day 4 U my body yearns..

with each bat of my eyes another page turns....


STOP!..now say it backwards!
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Reply #6 posted 01/18/05 10:18pm

Fauxie

The strawberries were in stock,
And the gemstones not mock,
Finest rubies from Mogok,
So what to do with my rock?
She said not with her new frock,
But Apples showed me this is a crock.
Wife said 'do it in a sock',
And the time went tick, tock.
Still I wanted to dock,
And couldn't wait for the clock,
But when the entrance is locked,
There's no use to knock.

shrug




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