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[W/T] "PRRR" music video bari. - "Prrr"
http://www.youtube.com/wa...BAsR07dnBg S.T.O.P. Music, LLC (c)2009 www.myspace.com/bari | |
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There´s not really that much going on in the song. The beat sounds very thin to stand on its own, it´s more of an intro or backbeat than an actual rhythm to carry a whole song and the monotone, spoken word/rap vocal delivery is not doing much for me.Put some more sounds into it, make it phatter and add at least a chorus, hook or something to it.
Is this some sort of solo project or a band effort? " I´d rather be a stank ass hoe because I´m not stupid. Oh my goodness! I got more drugs! I´m always funny dude...I´m hilarious! Are we gonna smoke?" | |
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KoolEaze said: There´s not really that much going on in the song. The beat sounds very thin to stand on its own, it´s more of an intro or backbeat than an actual rhythm to carry a whole song and the monotone, spoken word/rap vocal delivery is not doing much for me.Put some more sounds into it, make it phatter and add at least a chorus, hook or something to it.
Is this some sort of solo project or a band effort? thank you for listening.  | |
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room319 said: KoolEaze said: There´s not really that much going on in the song. The beat sounds very thin to stand on its own, it´s more of an intro or backbeat than an actual rhythm to carry a whole song and the monotone, spoken word/rap vocal delivery is not doing much for me.Put some more sounds into it, make it phatter and add at least a chorus, hook or something to it.
Is this some sort of solo project or a band effort? thank you for listening. No problem, no need to thank me for that. Sorry if my criticism came off as a bit too harsh I just wanted to add some constructive criticism. The production does sound okay and I think you have some potential, it´s just those things I mentioned above that are missing a bit in that song. Just add a little bit of extras, more vocals, less bragging, a bit more melody ( something that sticks and is memorable) and make the beat phat, that´s all. " I´d rather be a stank ass hoe because I´m not stupid. Oh my goodness! I got more drugs! I´m always funny dude...I´m hilarious! Are we gonna smoke?" | |
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Whaaaaat the fuck is that???? | |
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ernestsewell said: Whaaaaat the fuck is that????
How do you like his hair? " I´d rather be a stank ass hoe because I´m not stupid. Oh my goodness! I got more drugs! I´m always funny dude...I´m hilarious! Are we gonna smoke?" | |
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KoolEaze said: ernestsewell said: Whaaaaat the fuck is that????
How do you like his hair? I didn't get that far. | |
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ernestsewell said: KoolEaze said: How do you like his hair? I didn't get that far. "No publicity is bad publicity". thank you. | |
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