After posting a link to one of my songs on the org artist board and getting no response, I decided to try it out here. It seems like that board is on the elite side. Anyway:

http://www.soundclick.com...ID=2286287
[Edited 4/6/05 10:19am]

I like it, it’s interesting, it sounds like it's missing some elements though….the mix is kinda weird, it sounds better on the right channel. Try listening to the song on the right channel.

I’m not a musician btw.

eerrrmmmm..... ummmmm don't think i'm an idiot but i din't get this thing to play or download or whatever

lilgish said:

That works better as a disclaimer.

Let me be the first in line to "hit you 10 times"...after having to listen to that track.

Actually the groove is cool. The song is nice too.
Not crazy about the choice of voices.
The production is kinda well...um...
HEY! Will ya look at the time.

Seriously if you bring up a couple of decades into 05, it could work.
Oh yeah, give your little brother his headphones back and get a good pair.

Lastly, get a better host. Put your pic and bio up and make the music more accesible.
When someone has to click 20 times to get to it, they just click out...maybe that's why you didn't get much response.

Nice song. It's memorable.

ya know, you're not really s'posed to post your music here. mods used to get pissed of about that.

otherwise everyone'd be doing it (including me).



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anon said:

I did what I wanted with the song, so I didn't actually post it for approval, per se. But your entire assessment contradicts itself. It's "cool," "nice," "memorable," as well as outdated and exemplary of things you're "not crazy" about. Is the headphone remark supposed to be helpful?


Did you read the top of this thread? I've seen some things they should be more pissy about.

WhamBamGlamSlam said:

Well you did say "you were getting no response" You should have specified what you were looking for. If not honest feedback, then it must have been approval. You should have stated that. Then I would have moved on.

I thought I was being kind. And no it's not contradictory. Said the song was nice (the concept) not the production. And yes the headphone remark was about getting a better mix. I'd say that's helpful.

About it being dated. Well...the song speaks for itself. But you weren't looking for opinion so I have none to give.

Good thing I didn't mention the part about the bridge.

WhamBamGlamSlam said:

yes i surely did. the reason you got no response over there is because people won't listen to you and comment if you don't do the same for them. they're not "elitist"...you have to get to know them first.

sorry if i pissed you off with my comment. that wasn't my intention.

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anon said:

Seriously. If you didn't post it for people to discuss or critique, why bother? Unless you thought everyone would say, "It's perfect! Don't change a thing!" You've gotta expect that.

RipHer2Shreds said:

Yeah, that's a given....
Did you have anything to discuss or critique about it?

WhamBamGlamSlam said:

I'm a fan. I just think you're great. The best thing about it is that you're always you. I'm so proud of you. Good job. Oh, and you looked beautiful tonight.

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RipHer2Shreds said:

Oh, shit.

WhamBam, this is the Org and sometimes people will shit on you just because they can hide behind their computer screens. I will remind myself to give your music a listen when I get home and if I don't like it, I will Orgnote you and give you my honest opinion. Too bad they didn't give it a listen on the musicians' forum. They seem to really like each other a lot and I think they would have a better ear for it than we would.

TheOrgerFormerlyKnownAs said:

I don't think anybody got shit on here. Seems like folks gave their honest opinons and WhamBam immediately went into extra-defensive mode.

It definitely takes balls to share your music with a bunch of strangers, and I give him/her credit, but if you start jumping on people when they give you criticism, you should expect some folks to poke a little good-natured fun at you.

FunkMistress said:

Funky, nobody was jumped on. Inconsistent arguments or statements shrouded in sarcasm have no meaning for me. It appears that this is where we part company. Odd, since you want to credit me for sharing, but cheerlead someone who mocks me for being serious about it. When I challenge someone to be clearer and get to the point, how about if they just DO IT? What a concept. If that's defensive, I wear the armor proudly.

By the way, Orger, I have a new link to the song:
http://www.soundclick.com...ID=2286287

WhamBamGlamSlam said:

Respect for that.

WhamBamGlamSlam said:

I was being facetious. I'm not going to comment one way or another, because it seems you're sensitive about it. Can't say that I blame you, as I'm sure I'd be the same way.

RipHer2Shreds said:

oh my God what a load of old balls! this thread is STILL going? give the guy a break!

p.s. i'd listen to your music and comment, but my comp has problems playing files from soundclick for some reason.