Have you been cheated on? Have you been neglected?
Dont cry, dont be sad..Get even!!!.....

Do I seem bitter...too vindictive?....hmmm

Good!!! .......lol

Listen to "If ya snooze ya Looze"

http://www.broadjam.com/cozmic

I'm afraid to look!

u dont know how many times i been cheated on man. Oh and yes...i got my revenge..very nicely.

Nice jam man. How long did it take? The chorus is coo beans man.
[This message was edited Tue Jun 8 22:40:19 2004 by paisleypark4]

paisleypark4 said:

Fueled by anger not very long. About 3 6hr sessions. I did most of it blind. I just out it down didnt think much.
Im going to alter the bass line in the pre chorus, to add more flava.
Thanks for the feedback!

(Vina~I'm afraid to look!)

Wow was it that bad! You'll have to tell me what happened one day. Anyway its his lose!
Your beautiful, sexy, and talented. What more could a man want!...

Littlewing said:

Lol, thanks... but I'm also crazy!!!

I was just saying I was afraid of how evil this song would sound because of the emoticons you used. It's a pretty funky track. No matter what, you got your signature sound, that's for sure. Good for you for turning a negative situation into a positive by making art. The baseline is PHAT. I like how you ended it, I think you could do that in the middle of the song too, drop out the music. The keyboard line balances out the sound really nice, although I think it needs some hi-hats and symbals for more balance. It's really bottom heavy right now. I'm sure you know that and you're still workin on it.

funky as always...

psykosoul said:

Yeah, I second that

ditto...funky as usual. a futuristic space cartoon funk symphony.

Another stone jam. I like your stuff - it's got a nice club-polished feel to it. You doing this in a studio, or at home? (um, I mean, in a home studio...)

VinaBlue said:

Thanks V! Yeah it still needs a lil work, just wanted to get feedback before I finish it up.

talmuzic said:

Thanks for listening, Tal FLUX, erikd, and psykosoul

I appreciate the feedback.

otan said:

Thanks Oten, I dig your stuff alot too. Its always creative and entertaining.

I do all my stuff at home. This was a first pass. I'm going to redo the bridge at the end and tighten up th mix.

peace

Littlewing:

Diggin it. It's a head-bobber, fo sho.

I dig the vocal arrangement BIG TIME.

A'ight... but take the hit... and this is just my opinion...

The bassline and drums kind of conflict. There needs to be a balance. I think the bassline is too busy... sometimes LESS can be MORE in the respect that I think you can make your musical "point" with the bass by hitting the right beats with some punch. Without having to "run" with it.

I don't know how to phrase this, so take the suggestion with a grain of salt and a question mark...

During the verse... drums with less bass. During the chorus... more bass but tighten up the drums. Or vice versa. Try it both ways until it sounds "right". Too much high hat is distracting from your point. Don't over-produce... create an ebb and flow.

--Julian--

JulianChristian said:

Thanks JC for taking the time to offer some detailed constructive building points. I appreciated it!