I re recorded fall on my knees, anyone got suggestions? i got all tracks in wav and i can rerecord any part! help me please,!

http://www.soundclick.com...smusic.htm

fall on my knees version 2

pleaz

You have some cool ideas here. The music is there, but I think you might need some help with the vocals.

I'd love to help, but I know I can't sing.

I dig the distortion on some of the vocals, but you may want to back off a little more.

thanks for listening yamomma , i may try to record line by line and put lot of effort in each line with lots of attention on the tone and the key, i think that is very difficult to sing
I am very envious (in a positive way) of the guys who can sing in one take and it sounds marvelous