hope you enjoy it.

intoxicating

m xx

I havent heard any of your stuff in a while. But I think this is the most marketable, radio ready track I have heard from you.

It has all the right elements. Timberess production, clean smooth vocals, very well done.
Vocally you are believable, it doesnt sound fake, your inner passion and seductivness comes through on the track. It also supports and harmonizes with the whole "Mistriss Mistri" image.

Very good work!!! Get this out there to everyone posssibe!.....

Littlewing said:

i'm trying. i'm trying.
those brick walls are beginning to hurt though.

i'm not one to give up though

msserendipity said:

DE TUneIS wIKID, Did u compose the instruments or is that a back up trak, what euipment do u uses 2 recored this track....

babar141 said:

i co wrote is with a writer and producer. the track started as a simple rhythm that we wrote to and was composed as we were writing. as for equipment...sorry i can't help you as it was a studio i have not worked in b4. i'm not that technically minded i'm afraid.
thanks x

msserendipity said:

first of all the drum track is totally dull....get something interseting please!
the melody is horrible.....nothing catchy or memorable.....

plus the theme of someone's love being intoxicating is kinda played and not original at all

the production and vocals are first rate!

you need a good songwriter and the ability to sing notes that not within a major third of each other.....but if you look good all this is forgiven!

JesseJohnson said:

glad i made such an impression. you can dislike something for sure. ta for your comments.

and to some i'm ugly. what of it?

msserendipity said:

Very cool track! If this song gets in the hand of the right producer, it should go far. Like Littlewing said, get it out to as many people as you can!

JesseJohnson said:

Where's your music? You seem to know quite a bit about what's original and dull so PUT UP OR SHUT UP

As far as how she looks, what fucking difference does that make? Maybe along with whatever talent you have, you should also post a picture so we can put a face with the asshole.

JesseJohnson said:

So U're saying Image over substance overcomes all of what U call imperfections in Music?!

First of all, if U're gonna criticise, at least make it constructive.... "the drum track is totally dull" or "the melody is horrible" just doesn't cut it...

WHAT makes it horrible? What advice would U give?

but then U contradict this by saying the overall production is 1st rate... wouldn't this be an amalagamation of Drums, vocals et al?

Second of all, at least MsSerendipity along with all the other musicians right here on the ORG have the guts, courage and above all the TALENT to do what they do, and okay, different strokes for different folks reigns true too.

Third of all, if I'm gonna go with U on this image over substance rap, U seem to have NO Music or NO form of identity - so who's the ugly 1 here?

and finally, MsSerendipity appears to be professional enough to handle malicious criticism, it's tad above her. Maybe you should take a leaf out of her book and the VinaBlue book of criticism, U may B a critic yet!

Dre's 4 what they're worth.

'dre

I think this is the first track I've heard from you This is bangin'. I love the production. You sound great too. Piss on JesseJohnson... I smell TheChronic(pt3) anyway.

. I love that groove. Nice Production.

hey hey.....lets not start a fight in here.
i'm used to hearing good and bad opinions. but that is what they are. opinions.
hon if i made a penny for all the negative shit i've heard over the years i'd be buying princes place in marbella.

i do what i do.
i love it.

ta dre and slave
i got my bros sticking up for me.

msserendipity said:

And That's The Bottom Line!

'dre

DreZone said:

i was constructive...overall she is getting better and u can't say that looks aren't important in making it big.....
POINT IS .....IF SHE KEEPS PRACTICING MAYBE ONE DAY SHE WILL BE AS GOOD AS ME!

this is the first time we had the pleasure to check out your download...

its hot!!!!

thank you

DreamFirstBorn, Jew
using The Electric Purple

JesseJohnson said:

I DONT CARE WAT ANY1 SAYS, THE TUNE IS FAT, iM BOPIN MY HEAD 2 this tune, the beats r wicked and the vocals, very impresive>>>>>WIKED<<<<<

Sounds good 2 me...

Excuse me Miss... nice Work.. Eye like it... just dont put no EyedEars in my little godsister's head - hehe ... she is just going 2 highskool (that should tell u its good)...

OneLove
Michael
[This message was edited Sat Jun 12 14:25:39 2004 by FonkAy]

FonkAy said:

let the girl bop.

Any chance you can upload it as mp3 or something? I'm getting all kinds of errors trying to listen to your track, like 'address type is unknown or unsupported' (on opera browser) and when I try it with IE I get "Windows Media Player cannot play the file. The file is either corrupt or the Player does not support the format you are trying to play.".

Erik

erikd said:

it may be available as an official download very soon working on doing a distribution deal with an online company. you need to have the updated windows media player to listen to it. Its now on my site website but you may have the same issues.
sorry about that. its streaming from another host site.
m xx

msserendipity said:

Well said

I'm on dial up, so heard it in 2 second bursts, but what I did catch sounded cool. Good luck with everything.

single will be available as an officail download around the end of aug