uploaded song from my Vault! "Dancing In The Blue"

http://www.soundclick.com...dmusic.htm

A slow, moody Pop Rock song. The feeling u get when Your dancing with a beautiful Person in a dark room with Blue lights.

Jem... constructive criticism? This is the part where I try not to offend anyone.

Rhythm, man... RHYTHM.

I like the feel of the song, but you're rushing the main guitar lick too much... it needs to be laid back and shit. It's gotta FLOW... feel me? Like standing there with sunglasses on, unlit cigarette dangling from your mouth, hat tipped a bit to the side, ya know?

Back the echo level off the vocals, and off the guitar solo.

I think it's worth remaking, though... nice and sexy. I can imagine pullin some chick out on the dark dance floor to this tune, rubbing all up on her booty and thangs.

--Julian--

JulianChristian said:

Ya, my new stuff doesn't have much echo and shit now, but this was already mixed and shit, so i have to redo it. I may redo it, or i might just trash it and take it away from this world i just wanted to share it with u guys.

Hey Tim! I will check this out real soon! And the SOTT cover as well.

Don't trash it, dood! It's a sexy song... run with it!

--Julian--

I really dig the guitar line in this, as well as the the rythmic way you're singing this one. The whole thing isn't synched, as Julian pointed out, but it's a great concept for a song. Solo is great of course...



I dig this. A lot.