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"He Goes Away From Me" - first acoustic rough draft demo http://www.soundclick.com...zmusic.htm
well no responses so far, so i dunno. Let a brutha know what u think. if not oh well. Intended for some1 else 2 sing other than me. Uses "I love U In Me" music (Prince) just for melody purposes. Story behind this song: The chorus line came up in 1994, when I was 12. Then at work I was singing and "I Love U In Me" and pop! A song idea. Put 2 and 2 together and made a couple lyrics out of it! I just met him and i already hurt When he goes away from me Single I thought that it...it was the life Till I met him in the street one day Silly 2 think that, he is the one But he makes me feel my life has just begun Everybody calls me dumb but I dont care He goes away from me I hate when he goes away from me I hate when he goes away from me He doesnt know who i am he probably doesnt even care How can i resist him Everytime he standing there I just met him and I already hurt When he goes away from me I hate when he goes away from me (repeat) Sometime its better not 2 know some1 at all It's just that, I cant control it I wanna set it off (I wanna set it off!) I just met the dude and I already hurt When he goes away from me I hate when he goes away from me (repeat) [This message was edited Fri Mar 19 22:13:44 2004 by paisleypark4] Straight Jacket Funk Affair
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Isaiah, it's a good idea, but it's sooooo hard for me to listen to that background music and not think of the Prince words and melody. Do you know what I mean? It's hard for me to judge when you're just putting different words to someone elses music and vocal melody. But, you could've did a P. Diddy rap over it...lol. I like the words and the imagery that you present, though. You can sample one of my songs if you want. That'd be cool. |
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artist08 said: Isaiah, it's a good idea, but it's sooooo hard for me to listen to that background music and not think of the Prince words and melody. Do you know what I mean? It's hard for me to judge when you're just putting different words to someone elses music and vocal melody. But, you could've did a P. Diddy rap over it...lol. I like the words and the imagery that you present, though. You can sample one of my songs if you want. That'd be cool.
Ok, im re-recording it without the Prince song. If i use one of ur songs I will have 2 go down the list of ur slow jams...which ones? Straight Jacket Funk Affair
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paisleypark4 said: artist08 said: Isaiah, it's a good idea, but it's sooooo hard for me to listen to that background music and not think of the Prince words and melody. Do you know what I mean? It's hard for me to judge when you're just putting different words to someone elses music and vocal melody. But, you could've did a P. Diddy rap over it...lol. I like the words and the imagery that you present, though. You can sample one of my songs if you want. That'd be cool.
Ok, im re-recording it without the Prince song. If i use one of ur songs I will have 2 go down the list of ur slow jams...which ones? Try Velvet promise instr. or This Blood or I know or Autonomous Man or even Imposters. You could sample one part for verse another for chorus. Of course, I really don't know what the hell I'm talking about - I never sampled anything in my life. Good luck, bro!! |
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artist08 said: paisleypark4 said: Ok, im re-recording it without the Prince song. If i use one of ur songs I will have 2 go down the list of ur slow jams...which ones? Try Velvet promise instr. or This Blood or I know or Autonomous Man or even Imposters. You could sample one part for verse another for chorus. Of course, I really don't know what the hell I'm talking about - I never sampled anything in my life. Good luck, bro!! aiight peace. i should delete this post and then re-do it. damn have u ever had bunches of songs that are very good, but u dont wanna put them out because they all fall in the same category? I have a very hot breakbeat song but I dont wanna put it out because that's all i have been posting. Straight Jacket Funk Affair
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paisleypark4 said: artist08 said: Try Velvet promise instr. or This Blood or I know or Autonomous Man or even Imposters. You could sample one part for verse another for chorus. Of course, I really don't know what the hell I'm talking about - I never sampled anything in my life. Good luck, bro!! aiight peace. i should delete this post and then re-do it. damn have u ever had bunches of songs that are very good, but u dont wanna put them out because they all fall in the same category? I have a very hot breakbeat song but I dont wanna put it out because that's all i have been posting. Can't say that I've ever had the problem with having bunches of good songs.....lol!! |
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artist08 said: paisleypark4 said: aiight peace. i should delete this post and then re-do it. damn have u ever had bunches of songs that are very good, but u dont wanna put them out because they all fall in the same category? I have a very hot breakbeat song but I dont wanna put it out because that's all i have been posting. Can't say that I've ever had the problem with having bunches of good songs.....lol!! i dont wanna have so much songs posted that people get sick of me  Straight Jacket Funk Affair
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Hey PP4!
I like the idea of what you'd like to do... Maybe I can help? 
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Styles said: Hey PP4!
I like the idea of what you'd like to do... Maybe I can help?
Jshua man i cant wait 2 hear ur songs too! I will post later on 2day! 
I wanted it just 2 be a acoustic guitar jam with maybe some piano. But i dont have none of that shit and i cant sing worth a damn.Straight Jacket Funk Affair
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paisleypark4 said: I just met him and i already hurt
When he goes away from me Something about that line...gets me. This is something beautiful waiting to be fleshed out. I wanted it just 2 be a acoustic guitar jam with maybe some piano. But i dont have none of that shit
and i cant sing worth a damn.I've been playing with this all morning. I even laid some scratch vocals replaced the "he's" with "she's" and rearranged a few of your lyrics. Check out the instrumental for now and tell me what you think. -- Untitled (Sade-ism) | |
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psykosoul said: paisleypark4 said: I just met him and i already hurt
When he goes away from me Something about that line...gets me. This is something beautiful waiting to be fleshed out. I wanted it just 2 be a acoustic guitar jam with maybe some piano. But i dont have none of that shit
and i cant sing worth a damn.I've been playing with this all morning. I even laid some scratch vocals replaced the "he's" with "she's" and rearranged a few of your lyrics. Check out the instrumental for now and tell me what you think. -- Untitled (Sade-ism) Nice work psyko!  I agree about that line too. I'm curious to hear the vocal on this. I've been diggin on Sade this past week, watching Lover's Live dvd. She's a goddess. | |
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VinaBlue said: psykosoul said: I've been playing with this all morning. I even laid some scratch vocals replaced the "he's" with "she's" and rearranged a few of your lyrics. Check out the instrumental for now and tell me what you think. -- Untitled (Sade-ism) Nice work psyko! I agree about that line too. I'm curious to hear the vocal on this. I've been diggin on Sade this past week, watching Lover's Live dvd. She's a goddess.Psyko it's not working!   i t says corrupted or something aww shit! Please can u re-load it or put it as an mp3 also? Oh please man! . Thank u so much, u dont know what this means 2 me dude!Straight Jacket Funk Affair
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paisleypark4 said: VinaBlue said: Nice work psyko! I agree about that line too. I'm curious to hear the vocal on this. I've been diggin on Sade this past week, watching Lover's Live dvd. She's a goddess.Psyko it's not working! i t says corrupted or something aww shit! Please can u re-load it or put it as an mp3 also? Oh please man! . Thank u so much, u dont know what this means 2 me dude!I think Soundclick is down right now. I've been checking other peoples pages and some files are working and some aren't. Mine isn't right now. When you hear the music just let me know if that's what you had in mind. | |
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artist08 said: Isaiah, it's a good idea, but it's sooooo hard for me to listen to that background music and not think of the Prince words and melody. Do you know what I mean? It's hard for me to judge when you're just putting different words to someone elses music and vocal melody. But, you could've did a P. Diddy rap over it...lol. I like the words and the imagery that you present, though.
I feel exactly the same. But I like the lyrics you wrote! I'm curious to hear what they will sound accompanied by some original music. RIP Prince: thank U 4 a funky Time... |
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funkaholic1972 said: artist08 said: Isaiah, it's a good idea, but it's sooooo hard for me to listen to that background music and not think of the Prince words and melody. Do you know what I mean? It's hard for me to judge when you're just putting different words to someone elses music and vocal melody. But, you could've did a P. Diddy rap over it...lol. I like the words and the imagery that you present, though.
I feel exactly the same. But I like the lyrics you wrote! I'm curious to hear what they will sound accompanied by some original music. Hey my brutha. Thanks for listening. Im waitin 4 soundclick 2 work 2 c what Psyko done Straight Jacket Funk Affair
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