Feedback, crituqes, suggestions all welcome.

New Track for demo: "Sexy Chic, I Can't Resist!"

Tnx!

HTTP://WWW.Broadjam.com/Funkalishus

Littlewing said:

i like this man! The vocals need 2 b a lil bit clearer, but i really like the beat and the lyrical arrangement! Sorry i didnt hear ur last jam, but i will check it out!

paisleypark4 said:

Thanks! I'n going to re-mix the vocals a lil bit, to bring them out more.

Littlewing said:

ill be waitin ma brutha

Well I like it!...lol

http://www.broadjam.com/funkalishus

sorry, all I get is this:
http://WWW.Broadjam.com/Funkalishus

Microsoft VBScript runtime error '800a0009'

Subscript out of range: '[number: 1]'

/include/custom/404.asp, line 17

I like it. At times, the rhythm is too bare, and at others, it seems too busy - I can't explain it... it's just a perception, not the rhythm itself I don't think.

What are you recording on? The vocals sound great. Yeah, sort of muddy, but for the most part, VERY clear.

Gotta co-sign on this one, but I do like where you're going with it!





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otan said:

Tnx for the feedback! I'm going to remix the vocals a lil bit, This was just the first mix, I can make them better.

I did this on Pro Tools.

NFO said:

Hmmm not sure why? It works fine for me and others?
Try clearing your temp interent files and history.

Tnx for letting me know though.

nice feel on this one. erotic-indian jam.

Really, really cool man. Very sexy track. In this case, I like the slighty overdone effects on the vocals. It makes it more ethereal. Awesome singing on this. I love the harmonies, and I'm a sucker for tabla.

I love everything about this track, too bad I can't download it. This is the kind of track I wish was on the radio and/or MTV. If there was more stuff like this, I wouldn't have given up on commercial radio.


When you say Ooooh baby don't stop at 1:22... That's fucking HOT. 'Scuse ma french.

VinaBlue said:

Thanks Vina! I was thinking about those vocals too...haha
I know its not a commercial feel, but I love latin music, I just went for the old school latin efx and said what the Hell...lol

Littlewing said:

Thats what I'm saying, this kind of stuff should be commercial. Every once in a while something original falls through the cracks and sounds "different" on the radio. It's so rare though and I wish record companies promoted original music more.




Wait a minute... Are you droolin at your own vocals?!?!?! LOL, I've been there.

VinaBlue said:

Thanks alot I appreciate it..I'm definaltly going to try to get it out there!

Wait a minute... Are you droolin at your own vocals?!?!?! LOL, I've been there. [/quote]

Well actually I did get a lil turned on singing this one...

Littlewing said:

Go on wit yo bad self!