NFO artists,

please review your profiles and send me the updates as I want to present this ad to Ben ASAP.

http://newfunkorder.com/p....php?t=261

Thanks,

Wow

Taureau, are you gonna be on board for Project 2?

Peace,
JD

You SURE about putting "the first PRINCE album..." in the ad?

it would be safer to go with "PRINCE-inspired", influenced, induced, etc...

just my usual paranoid opinion.

Yes.
This one time for this site only I'm sure of it.

It all get's explained clearly after you read the full ad.

For this site, I think it's the best tag line for the ad.

Yes I do.

Yup

otan said:

I said the same thing. But it makes sense now.

The worse it can happen is a non-musican fool or a veryyy good musican say, "How can this shit be compared to prince?"
But i would give a good laugh in any of the ways.

Flashpointe said:

Hey I'd love to ofcourse, but I don't think I'm ready. If you still have space by March (that's the ultimate deadline right?) then maybe that's enough time to finish something.

I'll definitely post some stuff once the xmas mish mash is out the way - Whether it's any good or not is up to you guys, and I'd rather you be honest and say it could be done better with the tools I have rather than have me as the butt of all jokes for the album!...I'll get to that point when it comes.

I would really like input on the text of the ad before I present it to Ben. So unless there are any objections what is up now is it.

Having 'The First Prince Album' a bigger font than 'produced, arranged, composed and performed by his fans' makes the two parts of the sentence too distinct...unless ofcourse that's the intention...maybe an analogy to Prince's first album, with new funky artists ('Prince's') giving their all, or a play on Prince's use of acknowledgement style and fun word play to immediately grab the attention of orgers...or both! Assuming this is just for the org right? Hey I for one love it.

Colours and fonts are in spot on, and you just gotta dig the logo!



edit: I do prefer Otans suggestion though.

'Inspired by Prince, Produced, Arranged, Composed and Performed by his Fans'



HOWEVER.


Thinking about it, will ALL the music be inspired by Prince himself? Or The Funk in general? Is this (Prince) the theme of NFO2?




edit #2: OR is it the '1st Prince album', as in, an album DEDICATED to Prince?



[This message was edited Tue Dec 9 15:01:22 PST 2003 by Taureau]
[This message was edited Tue Dec 9 15:03:41 PST 2003 by Taureau]

Thanks Taureu,

That was mine.
[This message was edited Tue Dec 9 15:01:56 PST 2003 by yamomma]

This text: http://newfunkorder.com/P.../OrgAd.htm

I need to know if there are any objections to what is written there.

NFO said:

Gimmie a minute homie! I'm on deadline so I can't read it or critique it right now. My brain will be jelly tonight, but I will try to give my input on the text. Mondays and Tuesdays are ALWAYS heavy duty at work. Can you wait til tomorow?

VinaBlue said:

Of course! But I do want to give it to him by week end.

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[This message was edited Tue Dec 9 15:38:06 PST 2003 by Taureau]

how about now?
http://newfunkorder.com/P.../OrgAd.htm
[This message was edited Tue Dec 9 15:56:09 PST 2003 by NFO]

NFO said:

Does the 3rd para from the bottom relate to your wording choice for the ad?

Taureau said:

yes.
what would you have wrote? I'm not good with words.

I just thought of something.

After reading the current feature, wouldn't it be cool if uptown puts us in their next publication? I'd buy a copy of that!

Also, if someone could spend the time.

Please check all links and let me know if there is a problem.

I need a pair of fresh eyes.

NFO said:

Heck yeah!

Looks cool and sounds like a nice project! Good luck! :+)

We'd love for you to come aboard for project two Bootsinox.

Man..all I know is three chords and the truth.

My info is 100% correct dude but, could you put my lewis@cloud9mission.com email there or forward the newfunkorder one to there. I rarely ever check the currently listed email

cloud9mission said:

How about now?

NFO said:

thats great mate, can ya use the same info for newfunkorder.com . Love the look of the org ad, this is gonna be so cool

Thanks Lewis,
I updated both at the same time.