Wsup yall. I'm finishing up a demo and wanted to get some feedback. Please let me know what you think. There are three songs. Definatly listen to "Until your with me!"

Payce!

http://www.broadjam.com/spirit

Bootyology is the cut.

Thanks!

Littlewing said:

I like these, but why to they just crank right into the song? Are these samples? Mightly long samples - so I'm guessing they're the whole song - so, if they are, then why do the songs just jump right in? No buildup, no foreplay, no KY, just BAM right into the song... so that'd be my one request - can you give them a little breath in the beginning? just a lil setup or sumpm.

Production is good - it's almost overkill on "Until You're With Me" there's so much going on... try to roll back on some of that stuff. It's all great, but, it's like too much syrup AND whipped cream AND pecans AND butter on the waffle...

Booty is killer. On the other 2, they seem a little "busy". Meaning, there's a lot going on and it's hard to feel the groove.

Thanks for sharing

otan said:

I feel ya. I'm very intuitive and tend to over do it at times. Point well taken!

Slave2daGroove said:

Yeah I think I may simplify the verse portions on "Until"

Tnx