hey heres a new song for ya.
This is a simple lovly song (but not without a solo at the end

Its about a girl i saw at a restuarant while drinking a strawberry smoothie. she has that flow to her look, bery beautiful.

Remember i have small bandwidth so if it doesn't download right or something, try again or try again later.
it should be a 4:03sec clip.
I'll have a soundclick page up soon.

here ya go: "Strawberry Flow"
http://www.angelfire.com/...y_Flow.mp3

i know i downloaded the whole thing, but it cut out at the end of the guitar solo!

not bad, i like the backing track and guitar, but you need to use a better mike or a pop-screen to get rid of the pops on your "p's", like otan said on the other thread.

good work...it reminded me of ween in some parts.

are you a fan of them?

opps it should be a 4:19sec song.

no mrdespues, I don't know of Ween, maybe i do from something, but it doesn't come to mind.

Ya, i'm gonna get a pop screen. do something.

Very cool Jem. I hear Prince all over this. Maybe adding some falsetto (but then it may be 2 much like Prince).

The turn-around (or chorus) is really catchy as well. It reminds me of Lenny/Beatles. Love the solo at the end too.

Thanks for sharing this.

I just fixed some stuff, and added a little, took some Poping out (mixing wise)
I will get some useful equipment soon

www.angelfire.com/music5/...y_Flow.mp3

Your playing is sooo Vai. I gotta play your stuff for my friend who got me into Vai. This might be my favorite guitar solo by you. Lots of emotion in it. Beautiful.

I agree with Slave, try singing this in a falsetto. It would make it sound a lot like a Prince song, but that's ok. Your vocal melodies are great.