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Thread started 10/13/03 6:33am

sunshine

New Song - New to Prince.org

Hello everyone. I am new to the org and I have enjoyed the music that I have heard. Lots of talented people here.

I was wondering if everyone would like to check out one of my new songs? Please feel free to give me your thoughts and feedback.

http://www.soundclick.com...tmusic.htm

Thanks and keep the music alive!

TheQuest
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Reply #1 posted 10/13/03 8:37am

otan

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The production quality is great.

I would suggest a little more work on the vocals. The bending vocals on "baby" end up flat ... bending a note like that is a challenge - there's no solid note to hit, you just have to feel it... but I would urge you to go back and re-do those parts.

The rest of the singing is dead on, so I know it's not an issue of you having a bad voice... it's just those bends.

Good song. Keep going!
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Reply #2 posted 10/13/03 10:04am

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otan said:

The production quality is great.

I would suggest a little more work on the vocals. The bending vocals on "baby" end up flat ... bending a note like that is a challenge - there's no solid note to hit, you just have to feel it... but I would urge you to go back and re-do those parts.

The rest of the singing is dead on, so I know it's not an issue of you having a bad voice... it's just those bends.

Good song. Keep going!



the piano solo is dead on man! The music is beautiful. Everything goes 2 gether in a nice jazzy blend.

Like Otan said, ur vocals needed a little pushing in the stomach (like on What's Love Got 2 Do With It where he pushed her stomach as she sang..lol). Trust me, stay on the prince.org musicans section and they will start 2 come 2 life!

What other artists have u heard on here? Who were u fav's? tell us bout yaself!
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Reply #3 posted 10/13/03 10:37am

sunshine

Otan & PP4,

Thanks for all of your wonderful feedback. I'd also like to give a shoutout to Cloud9 as he knows me as well.

The vocals were done in one take for this song, so I agree that I need to go back and work on those. Again, I certainly appreciate all of the constructive criticism.

I am a 30 year old from NC who has been listening to and influenced by Prince for over 18 years now. I've gotta tell you PP4, I've been inspired by all of you guys on here. I really dig your stuff as well as Otan's and Cloud9's. To be honest though, everyone on the org is an inspiration. It's really cool to have so many talented people in a community where everyone is sharing their knowledge and experience.

Lonely was written several years ago and I arranged and played most of the music in my home. The vocals were done in one take at a local studio along with alot of other music.

Not to bore anyone but that's a little bit about me. I hope everyone keeps the comments coming and I hope everyone keeps producing such original music.

Thanks!

The Quest
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Reply #4 posted 10/13/03 2:49pm

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sunshine said:

Otan & PP4,

Thanks for all of your wonderful feedback. I'd also like to give a shoutout to Cloud9 as he knows me as well.

The vocals were done in one take for this song, so I agree that I need to go back and work on those. Again, I certainly appreciate all of the constructive criticism.

I am a 30 year old from NC who has been listening to and influenced by Prince for over 18 years now. I've gotta tell you PP4, I've been inspired by all of you guys on here. I really dig your stuff as well as Otan's and Cloud9's. To be honest though, everyone on the org is an inspiration. It's really cool to have so many talented people in a community where everyone is sharing their knowledge and experience.

Lonely was written several years ago and I arranged and played most of the music in my home. The vocals were done in one take at a local studio along with alot of other music.

Not to bore anyone but that's a little bit about me. I hope everyone keeps the comments coming and I hope everyone keeps producing such original music.

Thanks!

The Quest


thanx man! And I'll look 4ward 2 ur music again man! Glad u joined!
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Reply #5 posted 10/13/03 3:57pm

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sunshine said:

Otan & PP4,

Thanks for all of your wonderful feedback. I'd also like to give a shoutout to Cloud9 as he knows me as well.

The vocals were done in one take for this song, so I agree that I need to go back and work on those. Again, I certainly appreciate all of the constructive criticism.

I am a 30 year old from NC who has been listening to and influenced by Prince for over 18 years now. I've gotta tell you PP4, I've been inspired by all of you guys on here. I really dig your stuff as well as Otan's and Cloud9's. To be honest though, everyone on the org is an inspiration. It's really cool to have so many talented people in a community where everyone is sharing their knowledge and experience.

Lonely was written several years ago and I arranged and played most of the music in my home. The vocals were done in one take at a local studio along with alot of other music.

Not to bore anyone but that's a little bit about me. I hope everyone keeps the comments coming and I hope everyone keeps producing such original music.

Thanks!

The Quest

Your a sly one, didnt know you were a fellow orger smile. Great track mate. Cheers for listening, thanx for joining my Digital Music Network & thankyou for those interesting vocal versions of my songs smile

If you want a link on cloud9mission.com to your soundclick page, you need but ask wink
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Reply #6 posted 10/14/03 5:53am

sunshine

Thanks guys. PP4 and Cloud9 keep the great music coming!

The Quest
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