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Thread started 09/22/03 6:40pm

cloud9mission

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New song, please give me some feedback (updated)

Hey all,

Heres a re vamp of an old song I wrote in 1999. It started the whole cloud9 mission idea but sadly my original attempt at playing this song was lost when my comp crashed. I shelfed it for ages but now here it is, 'Cloud9'

Listen in Real Audio (full length)

Download in mp3 (clip)

God bless

Lewis
[This message was edited Tue Sep 23 4:36:54 PDT 2003 by cloud9mission]
[This message was edited Wed Sep 24 16:33:32 PDT 2003 by cloud9mission]
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Reply #1 posted 09/23/03 1:37am

BigThing

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cloud9mission said:

Hey all,

Heres a re vamp of an old song I wrote in 1999. It started the whole cloud9 mission idea but sadly my original attempt at playing this song was lost when my comp crashed. I shelfed it for ages but now here it is, 'Cloud9'

Listen in Real Audio (full length)

Download in mp3 (clip)

God bless

Lewis

Lewis, i get an error trying to download the mp3 clip. (I don't use realaudio)
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Reply #2 posted 09/23/03 4:37am

cloud9mission

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BigThing said:

cloud9mission said:

Hey all,

Heres a re vamp of an old song I wrote in 1999. It started the whole cloud9 mission idea but sadly my original attempt at playing this song was lost when my comp crashed. I shelfed it for ages but now here it is, 'Cloud9'

Listen in Real Audio (full length)

Download in mp3 (clip)

God bless

Lewis

Lewis, i get an error trying to download the mp3 clip. (I don't use realaudio)

thanx man, all fixed
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Reply #3 posted 09/23/03 6:21am

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Like it dude, very uplifting melody - just what I need to get through today at work!

The bass is grooving the way I like it. I love the piano then guitar solo - oh man, then that damn breakdown after! (yay I'm listening to it real time as I type) Ouch, that vocal sample came outta no where! (?)

Unfortunately I haven't listened to the original so I can't compare, but this has a nice order about it.

Maggot
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He who joyfully marches to music in rank and file has already earned my contempt. He has been given a large brain by mistake, since for him the spinal cord would fully suffice. - Albert Einstein
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Reply #4 posted 09/23/03 6:38am

cloud9mission

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MaggotBrain said:

Like it dude, very uplifting melody - just what I need to get through today at work!

The bass is grooving the way I like it. I love the piano then guitar solo - oh man, then that damn breakdown after! (yay I'm listening to it real time as I type) Ouch, that vocal sample came outta no where! (?)

Unfortunately I haven't listened to the original so I can't compare, but this has a nice order about it.

Maggot
peace

Thanx mate, Ive been thinkin about editing that breakdown out till you said that smile

Recognise the vocal??

Unfortunatly you aint the only one who never got to hear the original, I aint heard it in a while too sad. Teach me to back up my files I guess but Im way more pleased with this version than the original, maybe it wernt such a bad thing wink


God bless

Lewis
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Reply #5 posted 09/23/03 7:24am

MaggotBrain

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cloud9mission said:

Recognise the vocal??



Nah sorry, tell me though and I'll undoubtedly 'doh!' myself!
He who joyfully marches to music in rank and file has already earned my contempt. He has been given a large brain by mistake, since for him the spinal cord would fully suffice. - Albert Einstein
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Reply #6 posted 09/23/03 4:47pm

cloud9mission

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MaggotBrain said:

cloud9mission said:

Recognise the vocal??



Nah sorry, tell me though and I'll undoubtedly 'doh!' myself!

see if anyone guesses wink
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Reply #7 posted 09/24/03 1:53am

cloud9mission

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only maggotbrain??
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Reply #8 posted 09/24/03 2:03am

MaggotBrain

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Could it be...

I said "What the fuck business is it of yours?
I'm payin' 4 these fuckin' potatoes
"All U think about is music?"
I'll do what the fuck I wanna do with'em!
Now bring me a fuckin' finger bowl!"
"I'm leavin' your NBA no ballin' ass?"


???


lol
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Reply #9 posted 09/24/03 2:44am

cloud9mission

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MaggotBrain said:

Could it be...

I said "What the fuck business is it of yours?
I'm payin' 4 these fuckin' potatoes
"All U think about is music?"
I'll do what the fuck I wanna do with'em!
Now bring me a fuckin' finger bowl!"
"I'm leavin' your NBA no ballin' ass?"


???


lol
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yeah man, thats the one
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Reply #10 posted 09/24/03 2:48am

cloud9mission

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anymore feedback folks???
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Reply #11 posted 09/24/03 2:57am

MaggotBrain

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cloud9mission said:

anymore feedback folks???


I'm suprised for the lack of feedback mate... the second (erm) 'song' I posted hasn't received anything, and I assumed it was because it's so absolutely dire (I'm gonna redo it anyhow), but (as ever!) your's is top notch so maybe people are just too busy...oh eayh, I'm at work, better go lol
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Reply #12 posted 09/24/03 8:16am

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Co-sign on the feedback! ppl seem 2 B too busy or over at NFO.

I remember this track, cool revamp! music

'dre
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Reply #13 posted 09/24/03 9:32am

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I like it, Cloud! Too bad I can't compare it to the original. I think some vocals would turn this one into a really nice song.

Do you play everything by yourself?
RIP Prince: thank U 4 a funky Time...
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Reply #14 posted 09/24/03 2:29pm

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funkaholic1972 said:

I like it, Cloud! Too bad I can't compare it to the original. I think some vocals would turn this one into a really nice song.

Do you play everything by yourself?

I certainly do but Im vocally challenged as they say wink
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Reply #15 posted 09/25/03 4:16am

cloud9mission

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DreZone said:

Co-sign on the feedback! ppl seem 2 B too busy or over at NFO.

I remember this track, cool revamp! music

'dre

cheers dre!
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Reply #16 posted 09/25/03 5:10pm

talmuzic

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nice as usual Lewis,it seems similar in structure as "Make Love Not War".
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Reply #17 posted 09/26/03 3:37am

cloud9mission

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talmuzic said:

nice as usual Lewis,it seems similar in structure as "Make Love Not War".

thanx man biggrin
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Reply #18 posted 09/26/03 7:47am

Slave2daGroove

Great vibe Lewis, wouldn't expect anything less.

Thanks for sharing.
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Reply #19 posted 09/27/03 6:25am

Flashpointe

This is groovy as usual, Lewis! I really like it. The stuff you have been doing lately has been real funky, and I dig it lots!


Peace,
JD
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Reply #20 posted 09/27/03 8:23am

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Oh geeze, that mp3 clip is tooo short! Don't know why I can't get this real audio file to play.
I downloaded Dre's just fine.
confuse

It says "RealMedia File Format: Invalid Data Header in file "cloud9.rm". The file is unreadable."

sad shrug

Well... what I heard sounds cool. Very early Prince, kind of in the vibe of Just As Long As We're Together.

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Reply #21 posted 09/27/03 8:30am

Flashpointe

Hey Lewis, I would really like to have a copy of "Scenic Route". Do you have one? Can you send one to me through the NFO mail? That song is one of my favorites of any song I have heard. It sticks with me.

Peace,
JD
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Reply #22 posted 09/28/03 6:27am

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Slave2daGroove said:

Great vibe Lewis, wouldn't expect anything less.

Thanks for sharing.

Cheers mate smile
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Reply #23 posted 09/28/03 6:28am

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Flashpointe said:

This is groovy as usual, Lewis! I really like it. The stuff you have been doing lately has been real funky, and I dig it lots!


Peace,
JD

Cheers jason, glad to see people picking up on the new vibe smile
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Reply #24 posted 09/28/03 6:31am

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VinaBlue said:

Oh geeze, that mp3 clip is tooo short! Don't know why I can't get this real audio file to play.
I downloaded Dre's just fine.
confuse

It says "RealMedia File Format: Invalid Data Header in file "cloud9.rm". The file is unreadable."

sad shrug

Well... what I heard sounds cool. Very early Prince, kind of in the vibe of Just As Long As We're Together.

biggrin

the realaudio file was created with the latest real producer software so I think you might need the latest player to play them wink
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Reply #25 posted 09/28/03 6:32am

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Flashpointe said:

Hey Lewis, I would really like to have a copy of "Scenic Route". Do you have one? Can you send one to me through the NFO mail? That song is one of my favorites of any song I have heard. It sticks with me.

Peace,
JD

I'll set you up a Cloud9 Mission Digital Music Network password free & ya can download every track Ive ever recorded smile
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Reply #26 posted 09/28/03 8:05pm

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cloud9mission said:

VinaBlue said:

Oh geeze, that mp3 clip is tooo short! Don't know why I can't get this real audio file to play.
I downloaded Dre's just fine.
confuse

It says "RealMedia File Format: Invalid Data Header in file "cloud9.rm". The file is unreadable."

sad shrug

Well... what I heard sounds cool. Very early Prince, kind of in the vibe of Just As Long As We're Together.

biggrin

the realaudio file was created with the latest real producer software so I think you might need the latest player to play them wink


I've downloaded the latest FREE player. shrug When I go for help it just tells me about buying the premium player. Oh well.
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Reply #27 posted 09/29/03 5:02am

cloud9mission

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VinaBlue said:

cloud9mission said:

VinaBlue said:

Oh geeze, that mp3 clip is tooo short! Don't know why I can't get this real audio file to play.
I downloaded Dre's just fine.
confuse

It says "RealMedia File Format: Invalid Data Header in file "cloud9.rm". The file is unreadable."

sad shrug

Well... what I heard sounds cool. Very early Prince, kind of in the vibe of Just As Long As We're Together.

biggrin

the realaudio file was created with the latest real producer software so I think you might need the latest player to play them wink


I've downloaded the latest FREE player. shrug When I go for help it just tells me about buying the premium player. Oh well.

Its a very crafty site man, I was trying to download the free one on my uncle's PC & everywhere you clicked took you to the one you gotta pay for. The free one your after is called the 'basic player' if you click on those links (and remember they will probably be smaller than the buy it links) it should take you to the version you want. When you eventually download the program that installs the software, make sure you click 'custom installation' as this gives you the spyware & adware free option wink

EDIT: heres a direct link http://forms.real.com/rea...nonrdx=yes
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Reply #28 posted 09/30/03 8:52am

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Thanks for the tips man. I will d/l it asap! biggrin
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Reply #29 posted 09/30/03 11:08am

otan

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Oh and by the way, everytime you CLOSE that lame-o app, it pops up a "you SURE you dont wanna BUY this?"

RealMedia is a pain.
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