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One Of Those Last Song Suites (edited verison because 6 minutes and 4ty sumthin seconds is pushin it 2 not b a star..)

Features dangerous amounts O Funk...meant 2 b played at hi voulume!


When sumbody ask u 4 sum money
When u gots yo check
Tell them 2 get the hell out ya face
Cuz u don’t get no help
When u need sum, hey.

When nobody’s out there
And u goin 2 the sto’
Yeah, u aint got none
Cuz nobody wants ta give u nuthin
When ya, dead broke
And ya need sum help sang it…
(And u need sum help!)
When ya need sum help yeah
(And u need sum help)

When u goin 2 McDonalds
And u aint got no money
4 a hamburger
Or a piece of bread
The ya go in 2 the sto’
And u ask sum1 4 sum money
And they hand u 5 pennies
And u looking like ya crazy

Ya need sum money on days…
U aint got nun sang it..
(u aint got none yeah yeah!)
hey, sang that song!
(I owe u nuthin when ya dead broke, hey!)


Bumtown
Is the place 2 b
Bumtown
Where I can get my Z’s
Bumtown
Everybody wants 2 c it, yeah heah!

MAN you are the most experimental musician up in this place I am totally serious.

Your stuff is just out in left field somewhere... BUT IT WORKS. I'm telling you man, when you get a good recorder and decent equipment, you will be the next Trent Reznor - just putting songs together based on soundscapes. My biggest fear is that exposure to better equipment might mess up your spontaneousness.

Honestly. Man. I LOVE this thing.

otan said:

Man Im SHOCKED by ur review! I never thought about it like that. I was throwing 2gether the last 8 songs of the album, and it didnt have a closer, so i threw 2gether a weird piece. It started uptempo, and then i threw in that freestyled stuff over the microphone, and the Bumtown (me and my brother made in 1996),

I like u sayin its in left field, i dont kow what category 2 put it in much luv.

dude the link doesn't work for me

i lied, my laptops working now>

Hey PaisleyP what are you using to create this?!?!?!?

I mean, other than your completely freaky-funky imagination!

Reminds me of (a funky) Trent in a way as well I guess, but really this is so out-there, I cant wait for your next installment!
[This message was edited Thu Oct 2 9:19:06 PDT 2003 by MaggotBrain]

MaggotBrain said:

aiight! letta brutha now how u like it dawg!

paisleypark4 said:

oops sorry I just editted the post man, yeah as I say I LIKE it! Like Otan said I think you've set the new standard for experimentation! You'll be influencing my next stuff that's for sure!

MaggotBrain said:

oh man! I cant believe i can influence some1 so cool! Funk On! Im thankful for ur review!!!

MaggotBrain said:

what i used 2 make it? That MTV Generator and Casio CTK 551 Keyboard. Been with MTV Generator the past 3 years and it is pretty good givin no real studio equipment. I never heard Trent b4 maybe I should listen 2 him??

I will take a listen as soon as I can. Lots of drama goin on around and within me right now. Sounds like it's some good shit, can't wait to hear it.

Paisley, is this all you? Singing the high parts and everything? I think it's work in progress but I like the overall vibe.

Slave2daGroove said:

yeah that's me with my girl singers in the background LOL. I made that voice up like in 1990 lol. I was thinkin about makin an album called "Tristian & The Magics" in 1997 with me as the singer and me as the backup girls (who cant sing). But it never surfaced. tee hee.

Vina - Lemme no how ya like ti when ya gets it. thanx!

It's true...I must agree with the others. I wish I had imagination like that! I doubt if good equipment would squash your creativity - but, you'd probably be able to make a song out of samples of clanging pots and pans. Dayum!

artist08 said:

Actually i have up to 100 songs with clangin pots from my old group "The Chances" when i was 11 yrs old in 92-93 LOL.

Samples of pots? Sounds good sounds good!

I really like the background craziness. This is your best vocal work. Good job on the production, you've grown so much since you started posting your tracks.

Experimental? Fo Sho! U CRAZEE, man. Go on wit yo bad self.


That said, I'm not sure if I would have thought to compare you to Trent Reznor... I can see why they might be saying that. You could go in that direction but I don't think you want to. I mean, I don't think that is your style, but I could be wrong. He's the Nine Inch Nails guy. Ever heard of them?

VinaBlue said:

Coo Beans! U've grown 2! I really loved "my groove". I know NIN...dont know nuthin other than "Closer" by them. It was really because of u that i had put more faith in2 singin in the mic betta (even though can't). "Experimental" yall hah? I like that...

paisleypark4 said:

Wha? Oh because my example was so bad?

YOU are brave. YOU take chances. I'm still emerging...

I agree with Vina - I just brought up the comparison to Nine Inch Nails because I doubt anyone here has ever heard any BARKMARKET... same kind of stuff where anything goes - the growling guitar/bass riff, bizarro screaming, it's all experimenting that works.

I'm gonna smoke up and get my experimenting on. But don't try this at home kids... it'll lead to gangs and college.

otan said:

U 1 funny muthafucka.




LOL, gangs and college.


+ + + =

VinaBlue said:

Like I said - you ALWAYS have the appropriate emoticon.

Otan, Vina... 2 yall!


yall needs it! lol!

Vina - U said all the time that u couldnt hear my voice..turn it up, turn it up. I think u were the only one who said stuff about my voice long time ago.

Otan - U the one who influenced mye 2 buy another microphone 2 make it bettaz.

Tren t, what are sum recommendations as 2 sumthin that sounds like my song? Hmmm

paisleypark4 said:

F*** me like an animal... nah just kidding!

Hey man I just checked out what MTV Music Generator is...DUDE, talk about making the best of what you've got!!! That's it man, you've pursuaded me to channel the funk through fruity loops (similar thing to MTV Gen but on pc)! I doubt I'll sound as believable as you though

PP4, this is the coolest, most funky piece of music that I've heard from you. I totally dig this, very cool beat and bass, u is HOT, man!

Now save up some money for some better equipment and you'll blow us all away. Very, very good stuff, man!

funkaholic1972 said:

maggot Brain - Yeah dude I think MTV Generator is wonderful, i wish i hadda mixer, and all that junk, but first i need a betta job! LOL. Dont let my muzik jones yas, u know u can funk us up!

Funkaholic - Thanx alot man! I never expected such good views of this song, i thought i was gonna get nil or sum good ones sum bad ones, but im very surprised! Wish i can save da $$ 2 get stuff, with all these bills bills bills, i cant du shhh. LOL. Thanx 4 the listen!

I got 30 listens from u guys! THANX ALOT!!! 4 all!