A new song by me, I hope u enjoy it.

About a friend who i finally saw again at college. she got kicked out of high school, ecstacy, but now she's doing good back in2 my world.

www.angelfire.com/music5/pop1/

if any song doesn't work or the page doesn't work, try again, or try again later. i have small bandwidth.

Cool guitar solo, man. Cute song, did you play it for her?

I like vocal melody, it's cool the way you sang it.

I haven't played it yet for her.

I love guitar.

Jem, your vocal cracks me up dude. I am not the greatest vocalist in the world but this stuff is hilarious but very creative. Either get some voice training or just stay in the producers seat. I am going to give u that real love which is the hard truth. Some of us in here think that we want to be sugar-coated about our music. I don't. If u don't like my grooves just say it straight up no chaser. U are creative as hell but let someone with some pipes bring out the beauty in your music.

talmuzic said:

by the way u can check out some of my demos at http://www.soundclick.com...lmuzic.htm

talmuzic said:

Good job Tal! I'm setting up a site on SoundClick too - they beat out mp3.com these days, I think. Not sure yet... do they limit how MANY songs you can upload? From what I can tell, they're only limiting the size of any single song to less than 10 megs - or is that the total?

hmmm.

tal i'm working on it, I know what u mean, they crack me up too. But I hope to prove u wrong someday, from my progress over the year, i feel i will get it someday.

Oh, and I dig ur music.

I will check this out this weekend when I have access to a computer with sound!


Peace,
JD

otan said:

you can upload as many as u want and only limited 2 the size of 10meg...

Hey Jem, REHEARSE YOUR VOCALS! Listen to them and re-listen to them until you think they're right!

I'm trying to get my vocals right at the moment, but I know I have a shit voice. The only thing that keeps me going is knowing how shit Bob Dylan or Jimi Hendrix sound. Saying that, they had skills in other areas! That's the thing about your song, I actually DO feel it's structure and I LIKE IT! I know exactly what you are trying to get at! I must admit you do have some difficult-ass turns in the vocal but I reckon it can be worked out to something pretty damn catchy. Maybe try something simpler and work your way up? That's what I'm doing at the mo' with the songs I've posted recently. Hey, and the lyrics are from the heart man...that's what I like personally.