Well heres another one for all of U.

http://www.angelfire.com/music5/pop1/

come on now, were you really serious on this one Jem? I had a good laugh on this one.I did not know Bob Dylan had another son

I don't know what u mean. It sounds though that my song sounds like another? I don't know every song in the world.

I think Tal was politely making a comment on your singing style.

I am not trying to hurt your feelings but the music was in one key and the singing was in another. I don't know if it was your intent to do so ,but I could not feel this one...peace 2 u

ya which part U mean. The chorus feels on to me. I'm not a singer and I've been really workng on it. I heard prince didn't start singing til he was around my age so I still have time. I could ude to sing but lost it a few years ago.

And no matter what I think i have to let others listen cause ur the real audience.

Your probably talking about that really bad part "sometimes U have to let go of what u want" where I keep singing in a steady pace. I've had it in my head for a year and it sounds so good and I can't make it work. I should of waited longer. I'll re-do shit for all of U, cause it can sound good.

Tell U the truth I wasn't feeling it much except the chorus and also how it goes back into that head part.

i've actually took it off yesterday and posted another. "she ain't got no reason" u might like that one.
Theres a post for that one called something like, "everyone check it out"

Jem, please excuse my criticisms,I am just trying to be real but not trying to be vicious about it. Don't worry, as soon as I get my lame grooves uploaded u can knock over my little red wagon

O.K. Jem I checked out your new version of "she got..." and it was much better. How did u record the drums? Were they live electric drums or what? A good computer Quantize might be in order to "lock" the drum timing down...peace

the drums are from a web site that had some drumloops and samples. just pluged it into cool edit and recorded over it. then i edited in places where i didn't want the drums.